MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 26

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Hello !

Fiza dont get an attack that I commented *tries to smile* you must have given up on me .

I know I am being an asshole for not commenting on your FFs..I am so sorry sweetheart . I am .

I just dont know where to cut down my time. I just have weekends with me and they just pass in nick of time and on top I am trying to manage a FF. I am sorry , really I am but trust me I dont miss even a single update of yours.

I am sorry hun .

Coming to Love Story ! I just drooled on the very first update.You are a magician , you pick up simple concepts of life,separation , love, compromise, suffering, car racing ...and turn them into a complete world of beautifully woven words.

I am loving the story for the maturity and the way you handled this friable topic of prostitution.

As always , Nupur takes my heart away .Walking every night room but still having the heart to stop someone from destroying. Man, this was such an impactful moment of the FF and its somewhere itched in my mind. Her hard shell, her suffering , her fighting nature and a lil girl inside her , everyting make you love this character. I am glad that something so strong I am able to read. Thanks to you.

Mayank , he is been a gentleman. I always thought that Gear and Parichay mayank's are my fav but seems you are hell bent on changing it. His 'craving' for Nupur is awesomely potrayed , not for bodily satisfaction but for something above all pleasures. He somewhere is failing to understand the girl sleeping next to him and this what makes it special. He is not having supernatural powers to guess it, he is human and thats realistic.

The best thing about his character is that he is not ready to submit to the fact that she is a s**t. A man of this strong character is surely a fairytale.

I am loving how beautifully you are flowing the whole concept, revealing everything piece by piece. Its damn good yaar and I, as always, look forward for your update.

Love

Ruchi

Hope you forgive me for not commenting .. I am sorry but remember your inbox about update and I cant sleep before reading.

Originally posted by: clustersofstar

nice update