MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

That was very very nice part...

Loved the convo between them...

Something new could be seen here ...
something like yhey are living in a dreamland..
but I am afraid that...it would broke after 22 days...
and then they have to face the cruel reality of life...
i was shocked..Nupur has been into this from past 8 years...!!!

Poor soul why didn't Mayank came up to help her before...


That was cute when she calls him grumpy bear

and even would like to watch that frown on Mayank's face...

And Mayank called her apple...
hmm..she is an apple...

awesome part




thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

there are many shocks attached with her... its obvious she isnt working sumthing so great tht she wouldnt have a story attached ...
behave like them enjoy these days
after tht ...

ya she is n apple of his eyes atleast
thnks dear


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

So cute! Luv its all smiles.




thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm



thanks alot dear
glad u liked it


Originally posted by: crazymayurian

luveddd it..
this is becoming so exciting...



thanks alot dear
gald ur findingit so


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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: Ria..

beautiful part
very nicely written



thanku



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

wow di what an amazing update was that..I truly loved the way u made it so easy going ,so fluent that I could'nt take my eyes off once I started reading.


I loved that little cute teasing session of grumpy bear and apple.
Nupur was cute in that😳

Loved the way hopes are emerging in her heart...Its really difficult for a pros****** to have a hope with any guy seriously.

pheww..finally a long comment I always wanted to give on ur updates.😉

update soon.



thanks alot dear
loved to have ur such long comments ... as ur comment cums with so much to look forward to...

lol.. glad ur liking it... yes she is started to have hopes... and its not just diffcult.. the more diffcult part is yet to cum...
hopes are easy to build here the matter is belives n faith... and more to do with all is fate...
thanks dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Meri-

beautiful FF
very nice




thanks alot dear


Originally posted by: Lenco

Loved mayur convo and their moment
excellent update



thanku so much gald u liked it


Originally posted by: Humayra

Aww..the update was cute..

I'm loving this grumpy bear and apple's love story..
Loved their conversation on bed..
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..




thanku so much dear
glad ur liking them
will cont soon


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

loved this part n prev one too
superbly going ...

this z such a diff n magical ff .
so nupur is scared to open up infront of mayank but i know very soon she will ...
love d bed scene n deir fight .
dey r cute



hmm ow this means the updates were less good than prev ones where u have to say alot...
thanks dear
glad u still liked it

nupur is harder in both of them she is hardest... and this wht will make thing harder

glad u liked it
thnks dear

PS: updates urs too yaar

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Posted: 12 years ago



thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

such an dreamy update fiza!




thanku so much dear



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Hello !

Hi ruchi...
its an amzing thing to see ur such a long comment ..its such a pleasure yaar thanku so much..


Fiza dont get an attack that I commented *tries to smile* you must have given up on me .
I know I am being an asshole for not commenting on your FFs..I am so sorry sweetheart . I am .
I just dont know where to cut down my time. I just have weekends with me and they just pass in nick of time and on top I am trying to manage a FF. I am sorry , really I am but trust me I dont miss even a single update of yours.
I am sorry hun .


Its oky dear... i know studies are hard and u might not have time for anything u still read and at times comment means alot... but ur words mean more than this ... thanku for reading it.. and liking it tht much...
yes i do look forward for sum people's coment ..i think regarding this i have been luckiy to have thoughtfull readers.. who pick things up, and think abt it and to mention areas tht made me so happy.. and feels worth my efford... cause it make me feel tht even after whn they go away for here .. a bit of it is there in their mind it is so so s so amzing feeling ...

this update wasnt as sweet as it appeared... specially the bed part where she said alot more thn heard... and feel real glad whn sumone can actualy point out those things


Coming to Love Story ! I just drooled on the very first update.You are a magician , you pick up simple concepts of life,separation , love, compromise, suffering, car racing ...and turn them into a complete world of beautifully woven words.

OMG this is huge .. i wish i can be tht good at words but i m trying to.. i think life has loads of drama itself in all its so called simple things .. so why to go else wear...
thanku thanks alot for such honoring words

I am loving the story for the maturity and the way you handled this friable topic of prostitution.
As always , Nupur takes my heart away .Walking every night room but still having the heart to stop someone from destroying. Man, this was such an impactful moment of the FF and its somewhere itched in my mind. Her hard shell, her suffering , her fighting nature and a lil girl inside her , everyting make you love this character. I am glad that something so strong I am able to read. Thanks to you.

ask faru it took me very long to post this story ... its strange concpt and sumwhere still im not to sure of things thts why is strictly sticking to it as its very very close to me...
thanks alot for loving her... thanku so much... i want veryone to love her. not just her... but people like her... thanku so much


Mayank , he is been a gentleman. I always thought that Gear and Parichay mayank's are my fav but seems you are hell bent on changing it. His 'craving' for Nupur is awesomely potrayed , not for bodily satisfaction but for something above all pleasures. He somewhere is failing to understand the girl sleeping next to him and this what makes it special. He is not having supernatural powers to guess it, he is human and thats realistic.
The best thing about his character is that he is not ready to submit to the fact that she is a s**t. A man of this strong character is surely a fairytale.


Gear up is still in ur head na😆..thnaks for tht... people say tht i always write similar mayank .. but hoenslty speaking i just always end up bias to maaynk... kya kero
can i gave u tight hug for this... i thought i havent able to mark this at all... but u mentioning it made my day.. this aspect of his will mark sum things in future bw them

I am loving how beautifully you are flowing the whole concept, revealing everything piece by piece. Its damn good yaar and I, as always, look forward for your update.
Love
Ruchi
Hope you forgive me for not commenting .. I am sorry but remember your inbox about update and I cant sleep before reading.




thanku so much thanks alot for liking it more over understanding it...i am actually very proud to have such readers who just donot read the words they live it...

i would love if u will drop sumwords now or than...
n please donot be sorry... i do understand this phase... so u still mange to bring out time to read it ... its really thankful...
thanku so much
🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update

loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
loved the way Mayank always keep shocking her..
God!!!!!!!! why m fearing something really horrible in Nupur's Past...Sigh!
hope soon she will be able to share with him too...sigh!

thanks dear
glad uliked it... u think a girl like her is part of all those just without a past...
i really loved that Grumpy Bear wala thing...😆
bt Apple wala was masttt 🤣🤣🤣
i mean srsly!! apple aur koi acchi wali fruit nhi mila??? 😆 isse accha toh Tomato hota 😆🤣🤣
she is his apple " apple of his eye".. now u got it why the apple has been chosen....

bt Mayank was really cuteee
loved him a lottt
n OMG!!!!! loved the last part
the way she hold his hand n he later on keep it near his face was something really serene n heavenly...
loved it sooo very much...
bt itni jaldi 7days kese pass ho gaye??? mujhe toh laga abhi 2din hi huye unko ek ghar mein reh kar...
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API 🤗🤗🤗

han han 30 days 30 updates rekho... initially i did plan it tht way but than i want it to be beyond those 30 days and much more after wards so these days need to wind up...

ps: sry for the delay m all caught up with exams...



its oky dear studies per conc kero
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Posted: 12 years ago

I know this chapter is not sumthing special. It's a filler I need to build the story

Rplyed to u all

About delyed update these days… I can only be sorry for tht.. as I really donot have any particular reason for it… just my mood swings

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago

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