My Fallen Angel- chapter 8 Pg (41)

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Abi

@Abi.Na

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

just loved it! so beautifully written... thx for the pm!

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

loved it.arnie is just superb here

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bluetaj

@bluetaj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Ok baby step at a time...she has agreed to try...

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Izza

@memories_im

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hey i simply loved this story.
Please pm me for the future updates :)
sent u a buddy request

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Needless to say, i loved this update. It was so beautifully laid out... And i love the way you are slowly starting to show the several layers of Khushi (and Arnav at that)

Words cannot express how much i love your Arnav. He seems so calm and collected. He's a stark difference to what he is in the actual show, and it's so refreshing. He has some sort of 'together' aura surrounding him - like such a reliable person. Which of course is needed seeing as he's the one that's going to be helping Khushi find herself again. Perfectly done here Disha!

I don't know why, but i was really moved by this particular line:

Khushi was pained. She never knew how much Sia missed playing with her

With this line, we start to see some kind of regret coming from Khushi. So far, she's closed up and doesn't even want to try to better herself, which in a way makes her seem a bit selfish (though understandably so) and this line, i feel, makes her realise slightly how her attitude is affecting those that love her - especially Sia, who she is most attached to.

I LOVED the bit where Arnav determinedly makes up his mind to help Khushi; how he can't see his Bhai and Bhabhi in such turmoil over her. It was so selfless and so touching the way he vows not to give up (even though somewhere within him, he's doing it for himself as well😉)

More importantly however, we're starting to get some smouldering eye locks *fans self* which is always a pleasure to read. First step to their everlasting connection!!! 😃 And I'm so glad you are doing this so gradually... Makes it all the more realistic! Hats off to you Disha because you are doing a marvelous job with this! The story line, the characters, the portrayal.. Everything!

Amazing Update!
Love Love Love! 🤗
Shay X

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Layers...yeah. Everything in this story is gonna be like a slight unravelling of plot, a growth in character and a building of trust. Both Khushi and Arnav need to understand each other and Arnav has to gain her trust. Like you said, yes, slow progression.

And Oemmmgeee, I love this Arnav too. He actually thinks before he talks😆 together aura, huh? I juat hope you don't take it as easy going, as then you are in for a surprise because he's gonna--

There! That was your plan na? Get me to reveal the plot and be a babble mouth?

I can't seem to be able to keep my mouth shut, *sigh* a girl's gotta learn, eh?

Regret, hmm. Arnav seems to be relying on that😛

And yeah, he's definitely gotta be patient because this is Khushi here, stubborn as ever!

Yeah, I didn't want Arnav to lose any of his "mmhm, he's so yummy" sexy factor😆

Thanks a ton for the wonderful review!

Love lovelove youu🤗

Edited by Madafterarhi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: chavvi16
haila he sure has started to get through to her and good that he does
hello how else will she stand up on her own two feet
and she must not for her or him or anyone else but at least for the little girl who craves to play with her
and thats the way to get about it you have to gain her trust and with time she may just give you a glimpse of what her heart is holding back
really arnie you should only care for her as a patient and she means nothing else
who is he well they trying to kid there is more to this than just being a patient and doctor and hopefully with time they will acknowledge it too
they sure seem to be having strange impact on the other right even though they dont know or wanna know
well this is getting better and better with more interaction of arhi (not that am saying to wasnt good before mind you)
cheers for pm

Hahha, love your sarcastic observation. So confused and in denial they are na?😆 If only they would just accept that they care and are affected by the others presence

Yeah, I am going to try nd include a lot more of their interactions😃

Thank you for reading!

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arhi10

@arhi10

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

loved the way u xplained their thought...

arnav uses sia to convince khushi...

thtz kinda cute!!!

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

That was amazin...loved it...thnks 4d pm

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zeedia

@zeedia

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Just caught up with this story..its very interesting
I m loving this
Sia is soo cute
Poor khushi..she is suffering so much.
Plz pm me when u update next.