My Fallen Angel- chapter 8 Pg (41) - Page 7

Nice...n beautufullly written...loved...interesting...n different concept..loved this lovely,cool,friendly arnav...plzzz pm me wen u update

Originally posted by: shay1990

Needless to say, i loved this update. It was so beautifully laid out... And i love the way you are slowly starting to show the several layers of Khushi (and Arnav at that)

Words cannot express how much i love your Arnav. He seems so calm and collected. He's a stark difference to what he is in the actual show, and it's so refreshing. He has some sort of 'together' aura surrounding him - like such a reliable person. Which of course is needed seeing as he's the one that's going to be helping Khushi find herself again. Perfectly done here Disha!

I don't know why, but i was really moved by this particular line:

Khushi was pained. She never knew how much Sia missed playing with her

With this line, we start to see some kind of regret coming from Khushi. So far, she's closed up and doesn't even want to try to better herself, which in a way makes her seem a bit selfish (though understandably so) and this line, i feel, makes her realise slightly how her attitude is affecting those that love her - especially Sia, who she is most attached to.

I LOVED the bit where Arnav determinedly makes up his mind to help Khushi; how he can't see his Bhai and Bhabhi in such turmoil over her. It was so selfless and so touching the way he vows not to give up (even though somewhere within him, he's doing it for himself as well😉)

More importantly however, we're starting to get some smouldering eye locks *fans self* which is always a pleasure to read. First step to their everlasting connection!!! 😃 And I'm so glad you are doing this so gradually... Makes it all the more realistic! Hats off to you Disha because you are doing a marvelous job with this! The story line, the characters, the portrayal.. Everything!

Amazing Update!
Love Love Love! 🤗
Shay X

i really loved the update, i'm glad that sia is there, she can play cupid for them 😊

arnav is such a blackmailer love it and like the reason he blackmailed her for anyways the update was sweet and nice and thanks for the pm and plzzz update soon

loved the story

Originally posted by: moomin4455

Exactly what I wanted to say! This Arnav invokes a sense of peace and calm that the tormented Khushi needs right now!

Cannot wait to see Khushi learns to walk again, and just what is her backstory!

Beautiful update...thanks for the pm...😊

Awesome

i just came across your index and read through all of it!and loved every bit