My Fallen Angel- chapter 8 Pg (41)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Thanks for the pm love reading it

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

hmm feeling bad for arnav aftr glimpse of his past

who is that lady his sister ??? bocz that man said some thing abt resemblance

of ur mother...

loved the update

thanks fo pm

continue soon

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@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Wow. Lovely update.

Glad that you kept Arnav's nature intact. He is not like Khushi to trust people easily and come out with his secrets.

Dunno what you have planned for their future, Khushi's progress and cute little Sia. But I am sure all of them are safe in your capable hands :)

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javeria tahir

@Arhi_jia_Monaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

lovely chapter pure emotion love brotherhood, trust b/w frnds
trust always from both sides thats true thx for upd

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

I never expected Arnav to have such a horrible past,,, though you have tactfully still left some things as a suspense so waiting for the next update eagerly !

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Anony_mous

Wow. Lovely update.

Glad that you kept Arnav's nature intact. He is not like Khushi to trust people easily and come out with his secrets.

Dunno what you have planned for their future, Khushi's progress and cute little Sia. But I am sure all of them are safe in your capable hands :)

Aww, that is SUCH a sweet thing to say, thanks! Gaaah, now this comment is making me grin like an idiot though its 2 30 here amd I must sleep. Capable hands? Wonderful reviews like yours sure make them try their best! :D

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@say_cheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

A glimpse of Arnav's past ! God ! It was horrible...i cant even think the effect Arnav had of his past...but now i can understand his blatant & rude refusal to talk abt it...coz no one ever want to talk abt such a terrible past...
Anyways loved that little bros. Convo. Akash really jobed as a big brother cum friend there...
In the nxt half of the story u quiet brilliantly depicted the character of Khushi..That helplessness of hers to unable to grab the water in kitchen and then cursing her legs for that ...this just overwhelmed me with the sore feeling in my heart...
I always impressed by ur justice towards the emotions of characters in this story esp. Khushi's.
Overall the update was emotional and intense.
Thnx 4 a sensible piece of writing n for the pm ofcourse !
Waiting 4 more !
TC ! 😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Wow that was quite an intense and emotional update, however written exceptionally well. Poor Arnav, his past is quite gruesome and heart breaking, I can't believe he had to witness someone getting shot, I'm assuming it was his dad shooting either his mum's sister or even Arnav's sister. I'm loving the relationship and bond between Arnav and Akash it's really sweet and affectionate and Akash knew how to cheer Arnav up. Awww poor khushi felt so helpless and that kitchen scene was really sad and emotional, but I like the fact that she said to Arnav that trust works both ways and if he only thinks of khushi as a patient, hopefully when Arnav is ready to talk he will hopefully answer her questions. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx