SS: It was always you...Completed - Note on Pg70 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Okay so they are both talkin bout Arnav.. nice SS.. continue soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh man! what a different story!!!
This is exciting!!!

very very awesome start! I like the concept and the way you have written such pain!

Cant wait for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Was Khushi's lover Arnav??? And do Mami know about it??

Awesome story.. looking forward to read it!!

PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon!!

Thanxx fr da PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
A very differemt storyline.. Pls do PM me when you update next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
A ss frm u...excited ;)! n great start...loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Oh my God!!!!! How intriguing !!!!! Fantastic Kalyaani! You hv outdone yourself.!!!!!! Eager to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That line where Khushi says she feels more married to him than actual married woman would do to their husbands, is beautiful. I like Manorama's character. She is somewhat enigmatic, yet not. And the contrast in the way they think, the age difference between Khushi and her, their dialogues, the conversation was not a word short of realistic, perfect. I am really looking forward to this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
lovely start...please tell me that her husband is Arnav :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Only one gesture for you Kalyaani...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully Written!

Loved it,

Arnav was Khushi's husband I guess...😕

I think I'm reading a fiction for the first time Where Khushi is a Doc...!! Nice Concept btw.😉

Cant wait to read the next part, "His Story"

Thanks for the PM

Update soon

Love,
Jiji

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