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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

loved it..it was a beautiful update..absolutely wonderful...it was so nicely expressed...it just seemed pleasing & absolutely magical...really very good work. really mind blowing...keep it up...😊 i have a request can we get a epilogue for this one..😊

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

wooowww what an amazing description pre-union feelings...👏

superb reunion... 👏

but you left us asking for more..

please please please update soon...

thanks for PM...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

So they met.. Loved their meeting.. I was getting anxious reading each word.. Loved it..

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horizon123

@horizon123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

wonderful update, happy reunion.

Thanks for the pm.

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

aww!!! it was a beautiful chapter :)

the anticiaption that both of them were feeling only comes for tru lovers! :D

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Ah-freaking-mazing! Loved it! That was spectacular! Thank you so much!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

This was just mind blowing!

Loved their thoughts..Love the fact that you have given importance to each and every small thing ..I could literally visualize the saree

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@boyznaka

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Kalyaani, I read all parts in one go last night, and I really do mean it when I say you made my day. For a sad, forlorn, worried and deprived of the good ol' Rabba Ves girl, you really don't know how much that means. [I just realized I sound pretty helpless 😆. I am not, but there are moments 😳]

I can't judge Khushi on her decision. What she chose to do, takes a lot of heart and courage and maybe, as Anjali said, it was a little bit of Arnav's fault too because of his not so communicative nature. But, well, I'm one to enjoy the present so I am just happy they met.

The best part in this story has to be the end. Khushi wearing the saree and Arnav wearing the kurta, and the smearing of sindoor and the puja and well, everything about the last chapter had me enthralled. There's something about it when someone adds even a tinge of a Bengali element.

And the way it just built up to the final meeting.. Beautiful! I absolutely loved that part. How Khushi was somehow aware of his presence, and just so happy I could imagine Sanaya with that smile and glow on her face. Beautifully written Kalyaani, just absolutely beautiful.

And for me, every story with a happy end is better than.. Erm, well, every other story without one. Haha. There's something about the joy it gives you, and how it makes you smile, no matter if it's just for a second or the rest of the day(I'm a part of the latter club 😃)

Anywho, I'm rambling here a lot. Just wanted to let you know reading this was a lot of fun. Excellent work. Keep writing! :)

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Yayyy finally they met...
Uuufff i have started waiting for next update...u left us on a Cliffhanger...n i loved the way u expressed their feelings with little of flashback about this special day...He wore a Kurta n She in A Red saaree...aaawww i loved them...U knw i loved the poem...it was just aaawweesomme n just according to situtation...N their pic...adorable...This pic showed a naughty side of Arnav...plzzz update soon...

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

K!!!

Lady what eh story!
mind blowing! The plot is so enchanting!!

Lady the way you portrayed the feelings, hats off ma! And when I read the first chapter I was like the guy screams Arnav! You choose perfect words there!

And I was so happy when chachi got to knww it was khushi I mean her daughter I was dancing!

And Payal instilling khushi wid the rite stuff n d call to arnav my happiness knew no bound!

I adore anjali! The strong lady she's been and knows what's right and not! Better late than never!

And this chap epic! The unexpected warmth surprising feeling! And the meet at hospital! And the words on the photo frame! Epic man!
and one f the quotes of love at d beginning of an chapter was outstanding when u put ur loved ones happiness before yours! Simply aww...

Im glad I read it all today! Im happy atleast they patched den I stop! Had I read it durin previous chap I wud have gone nuts!

Cheers