SS: It was always you...Completed - Note on Pg70 - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much for your generous and expressive comments. I cannot express my gratitude enough for the time you have spent reading this story. This was an experiment for me, pushing my story telling abilities. As you may have noticed, I have intentionally kept Arnav and Khushi's interaction to the minimum till the last update, but it is their story and they are there in each and every sentence. I am not too aware of Lucknow as I have not been there nor do I know much about the customs and celebrations carried out during Dusshera/Durga Puja by Bengalis; if something is amiss, please forgive the oversight.

This was intended to be a five part short story and it ends with them meeting, I don't intend to take this further nor write an epilogue. I don't mean to hurt anyone's sentiments, in my mind the story is at that point where everything is just promisingly beautiful, I am afraid my excessive words may mar the story.

Much love,

Kalyaani.

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for giving us such a fab story...i love ur writing...and this too was as beautiful as others...ur words delivered the emotions and feelings amazingly...so thank u so much for this SS :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

Thank you so much for your generous and expressive comments. I cannot express my gratitude enough for the time you have spent reading this story. This was an experiment for me, pushing my story telling abilities. As you may have noticed, I have intentionally kept Arnav and Khushi's interaction to the minimum till the last update, but it is their story and they are there in each and every sentence. I am not too aware of Lucknow as I have not been there nor do I know much about the customs and celebrations carried out during Dusshera/Durga Puja by Bengalis; if something is amiss, please forgive the oversight.

This was intended to be a five part short story and it ends with them meeting, I don't intend to take this further nor write an epilogue. I don't mean to hurt anyone's sentiments, in my mind the story is at that point where everything is just promisingly beautiful, I am afraid my excessive words may mar the story.

Much love,

Kalyaani.


K...this was a story i was so attached...n d more clicking part was d xpression tht upheld all d way without even both interacting...i mean v d arshians who hav lived over n drooled n given wht not for d killing rabbaveys...then here i must quote tht..this piece of ur writing made me go more tender at d feelings i went through while reading...its made one thing clear...its not always about being togethr,rather cherishing d place one holds for d othr deep down thr hearts...deeply touched...😊😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanku for the note..even without a epilogue the fanfic is perfect...i love it completely..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Didn't know that was the end. But yes, it's meant to be. Understood a little later. Well thought concept. Keep writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you, K , for the perfect ending to a lovely story. It was just the right point to end it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

It is a fabulously told tale Kalyani. The emotions just tend to grip you. I could actually feel her desire to get to the clinic quickly, Arnav's impatience and their union was beyond words.

Truly a befitting end

Very well written

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for this beautiful story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for such a wonderful, heart warming SS, the ending was beautifully etched out and somethings are better left like that; beautiful and complete.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: masam

Thank you for such a wonderful, heart warming SS, the ending was beautifully etched out and somethings are better left like that; beautiful and complete.

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And something for you :

Thank you dear, the lights bring back happy memories.

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