Kria SS - Tides and the Moon#2 Chp 8 Pg 88

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21Neha21

@21Neha21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

awesome update..

loved it a lot..

plz update soon..:)

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

last 2 updates was superb...pls update next part asap...

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

it was super awesome.. and twist u gave in last moment(call)

was amazing...

update soon(a req)..

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

awesome and HAWT update... 😳 😳

u wrote mature content very well...

no one can say that it is ur first time..

i m fan of ur writing... it really look good while reading...

and about the romance... better i should not go that way... bcoz i will start blushing again...

even thinking about it make me blush... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

but at the end...bad timing and wrong person... and rey dnt care that kriya might have heard that... so he is in deep sleep that he think that last day was a dream or may be he was taking revenge from kriya of what she did to him... i guess i have assume everything now... just waiting to know which one is correct.. 😉

very excited for next part...

pls update asap..

i m loving it 🤗

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal
it was super awesome.. and twist u gave in last moment(call)

was amazing...

update soon(a req)..

Thank you so much dear!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani
awesome and HAWT update... 😳 😳
u wrote mature content very well...
no one can say that it is ur first time..
i m fan of ur writing... it really look good while reading...
and about the romance... better i should not go that way... bcoz i will start blushing again...
even thinking about it make me blush... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
but at the end...bad timing and wrong person... and rey dnt care that kriya might have heard that... so he is in deep sleep that he think that last day was a dream or may be he was taking revenge from kriya of what she did to him... i guess i have assume everything now... just waiting to know which one is correct.. 😉
very excited for next part...
pls update asap..
i m loving it 🤗

Baahaaahaa!! Thats coz it aint my first time writing mature content. I dunno why everyone is saying that I wrote it for the first time. Must be the new readers!

Keep all your assumptions intact. Lets see what actually turns out to be the case!

Thanks for the comment Gayathri!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: lovekriyaansh
Res

unres!!

"Sho Sholly for the late...kaan pakadke sholly...lamba comment karna tha mujhe...par ab chhota hi likh rahi hoon... tune bhamakaya jo hain...luchchi kahi ki"

Take a bow gal 👏... It was so beautifully written...⭐️
i was surprised to see the mature content warning... then i thought you must be giving FB or a dream sequence...
but it was neither of it... and still it felt so real that and so natural that i was just drawn into it as if it was so obvious to happen...
and most importantly how the chain of events lead them towards making love to each other...
The ultimate bliss it was to find them together involved in their passionate lovemaking... It was damn hot... 😳
nd no need to say that it was awesomely well written and very well constructed... I mean in a story like this I havent imagined a scene like this but i think main bhul gayi thi ki yeh Anki maate ki SS hain... ab tho yahi bolna padega na Jai Ho Anki Maate kji...
Love you Nonu!! Muaaahhh!!! 🤗

Ab mere lucchepan kaa kuch kia nahi jaa sakta naa!

Ek toh tum log rarely comment karte ho. Upar se res karke kab tak meri jaan atka ke rakhti? Toh mujhe dhamkaana hi padha!

I was scared actually, coz this story is so erratic, people never really would have accepted this turn. But thank god, ki teko flow sahi laga story ka!

Tathaastu bachcha!!! Hehehehe!!

Love you too Prenu!!!!! Muaaahhh!!!

And miss you on IF! Kitna busy rehti hai bhagwaan!

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Hell ! have no word's to write ? :/ they are stolen ! You thief ! you stole them !

And u heart breaker !! Hate you ! End ??? Though i somewhere knew this would happen !

Still ! uwhann .. i got that old kriyaansh feeling in the update u know that together forever type's ! But no !

:( U ended it like that :(

Update soon :( :(

- " U "

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Hey di... Hws u??? Finally m here aftr ages 2 comment...sooo sorry for dat... N i read 2 updates back to back... N loved them totally... Finally KR met... N wow...both having d same dream...shi hai... Atlast we got rey's feelings n thoughts...chalo atleast he still has some minute feelings far kria... N wow kya meeting hai...so intimate n passionate ... Loved it...n u r not bad at writing such mature stuff...it was good . .. Par last mai aapne bomb phodh hi dia na ...us taani-naani ka call...n rey ke wrds... Waiting for next part... Update soon... xoxoxo