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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha
so finally my last comment for this part :D
now coming to the chapter ...it was as always beautifully written and you are the best when it comes to POVs...so romantic, sweet ,lovely
well penned !!
will wait for the next part...update soon

Thank You Khushboo, so much 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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fabulous update👏👏

plz like on fb plzzz

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Uncompete-LOve-story-kriyaansh/417841484953484 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar
For update-34

One year passed???!! OMG!! 😲
Their first anniversary...WOW!! You know Manu!! I just realized while reading your update that everything haapens only once in life time...I know that sounds blonde😆 but really..I never gave it thought first...lolz...😆
Kunwar is such an amazing husband..I want one...parcel me ASAP..😈
He planned so well everything...but mess he spread-ed is worth killing...😡
But after that..ahaa!!! It was most beautiful way to celebrate anniversary..
That small note and then CD...she was crying..awww...ought to..😳
then that letter..I skipped a beat...it was so beautifully written...so truly said..it was Kunwar not mere letter..❤️
Shakti is so lucky..eager to read next...and excited about what Shakti will do for him on their anniversary...😳
beautiful update...

Hhahahah...Really?
Well you share a same feeling then, which I explored while writing it
I said to Myself "You hve to make it best...coz this is their first anniversary and things are really special at their 1st's.☺️

Okay...Kunwar is one the way...fetch that parcel on time isse pehle koi aur chura le 😆

Well for that letter you can praise me...I won't mind 😆

3rd Thank You of the day 😃😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: nature2
fabulous update👏👏

plz like on fb plzzz

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Uncompete-LOve-story-kriyaansh/417841484953484 😃

Thank You dear 😊
I'm sorry I no more use my FB A/C

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
OMGG... Manuu... Woww... This update was soo... Ah... Romantic... Infact ur almost all d updates r romantic only... 😆 ... Bt phir bhi... 😉 ... You described it beautifullyy mania... Der dance... Evrything was beautifully described... Haaye... 😳 ... Bt last mei one thing made me confusedd... "Flashback Ended" ...???? Haing..???? :/ ... Kaunsa flashback... Kiska flashback... Kha ka flashback..???? :/ ... Meko samaj ni aaya kuch... I thought ki it ws present... AAA... Mjhe ni pta... 😔 ... Bt ovrall update... Beautifulll tha... 😊 😳

Awwwiieee... Thank you Aku 🤗
Hahhha See Synopsis and then first update
Ye FF ab tak Flashback mein hi chal rahi thi 😆
Thanks once again 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: Pinkpearly
fabulous update

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
Wow. . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Lovd it. . . . . .
So hawwttt yet so pure. . . . . .
The way u describd evrythng was awsome. . . . .
I just lovd it. . . . . .
This chapter was dedicated to me. . . .
Yuppiee, . . . .
M so happy. . .. . . . .
THANKS. . . .
THANKS A LOTTT. . . . .

Awwwiiee...Thank You Madhu n no need to say thanks for the dedication 😃

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR
Awsome Update...Loved it...Waiting for the next Update...

Thank You sanjeevani 😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#439

Sowiee..Electricity go went gone ho gayi thi...lolz😆

For Update 35

WOW!! WOW!! WOW!! You will outdo yourself..you defeated yourself and again became my most favorite writer...⭐️

The dress was amazing and the way he planted this gift was more beautiful...I want that red dress...uaan uaan...😈

Then perfect matching shoes...wow!! kunwar thought well of everything...😎

Then came the car...how much more it can be royal!! And then Shakti towards the destination...traveling through train of her memories...😳

The place she has to reach must be filled with so much tickles, blushes and anxiety...

And voila...!!!!!!!!! The place is just there...😳

It couldn't be more serene and perfect..beach side that too with so much beauty...must say..you have a treasure of imagination to imagine places like this...

He was standing there..in that tuxedo..with matching tie...Kunwar knows to match everything..

Shakti is most lucky girl..I must say😳

Then briefing of place and their emotions with tides up and down...their waves of anxiety and togetherness... amazingly written..

The bonfire was attraction to me..I love warm cozy places...😳

The dinner looked yummy...with such a variety..😛

date is going too well..

Delicious update...

Manu!! You rock...and you know it..😎

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Posted: 12 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: shukti_19
Res
unres
such a Romantic update...hayyyeee 😳
Kunwar's POV hs been written so wonderfully...
luvd it to d core...

Thank You shukti 😊

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