ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#3 Link#4 pg 150 - Page 45

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Awesome update
just loved it
brilliant...

Originally posted by: love_arsha

res
unres...
update was jst amazing...
loved it

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

res

unres

awesome part...

rey pov was nicely written...

rey is so sweet and cute... i really love him...

u write it so beautifully that i always keep saying that i loved it

loved it loved it loved it

update asap

thnx for pm

Originally posted by: kitttu1309.

amazing update...
Romantice one...
Luvd it...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Fab update
Loved kunwar's pov
Update next part soon

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Sowiee..Electricity go went gone ho gayi thi...lolz😆

For Update 35

WOW!! WOW!! WOW!! You will outdo yourself..you defeated yourself and again became my most favorite writer...⭐️

The dress was amazing and the way he planted this gift was more beautiful...I want that red dress...uaan uaan...😈

Then perfect matching shoes...wow!! kunwar thought well of everything...😎

Then came the car...how much more it can be royal!! And then Shakti towards the destination...traveling through train of her memories...😳

The place she has to reach must be filled with so much tickles, blushes and anxiety...

And voila...!!!!!!!!! The place is just there...😳

It couldn't be more serene and perfect..beach side that too with so much beauty...must say..you have a treasure of imagination to imagine places like this...

He was standing there..in that tuxedo..with matching tie...Kunwar knows to match everything..

Shakti is most lucky girl..I must say😳

Then briefing of place and their emotions with tides up and down...their waves of anxiety and togetherness... amazingly written..

The bonfire was attraction to me..I love warm cozy places...😳

The dinner looked yummy...with such a variety..😛

date is going too well..

Delicious update...

Manu!! You rock...and you know it..😎

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

awesome...

loved it...

thnx for pm..

Originally posted by: magical_mania

Awww...Adu...what do u mean by this?

Being I girl, I can imagine such a possessive boy...that means world to a girl..😳

Ahem Ahem 😉

Lol it wsn't her it was me who spoiled their honeymoon

so all the jootas n chappals in my direction

Lol i catched one hehee 😆

Kya karu thodi naughtiness dalni thi na toh used this plus Ek hafte ka honeymoon likhti toh i would have gone bonkers...😆

Thank You Adu, you never cease to amaze me with your energy boosting reviews..🤗

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

RES

Sowie manu!! m late ho gyi..😭

My name there is shining...😃

Thanchu...🤗

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HERE COMES MY EXCLUSIVE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

Manu!!! I hail you!!! You left me speechless but still I have lot of write..you know..aadat se mazbur...😉😳

First of all!! Thanks for dedicating this one to me...It screams in every sense that it is written for me..you have bind words in such a manner which I like the most...emotion the favorite ingredient of mine is inherent in it...😃

I want to tell you something..😳.

I just love your concept of love making...you define it...you define the significance of it...here physical love doesn't come out of blue..but it makes all the sense in your story...😳

Now about update..

I really love the way you showed their dance...

Their growing desire with each passing moment...

After 1 year of their marriage, there is still so much to discover..you have written their love for each other so well..

I really likes the building anxiety..and that ecstasy which you defined and its reached in same manner...

Kunwar adore and desire for Perfect Shakti is worth praising...😃

I am in love-struck with this part..

Kunwar is still a love struck lover first..who can go crazy on her one look...☺️

Song was awesome and it is true that we can write melody..you proved it..with ear-caressing music and sense caressing words and emotions..I am all lost...

That part "I had sought to touch and held all the many complexities of the woman in my arms"..IDK it left me grinning like idiot...it has a deep meaning in it...😳

Loved it..❤️

Her sleeping glance is beautiful most..Kunwar eyes really can define her best...😳

I am happiest person coz this update is mine...

Really thanks Manu!!🤗

You are amazinginly awesome writer...you know it...🤗

Love ya🤗

I want to tell you something..😳.

I just love your concept of love making...you define it...you define the significance of it...here physical love doesn't come out of blue..but it makes all the sense in your story...😳

I have no words... how to express...you said it awl Adu...

Pta hai!! Earlier i thought ki I'll reply lamba wala on this...

But mere saare words chori ho gae...

You made me nostalgic LOL

But seriously saying Adu... You are an inspiration for me...

N i can't describe that my whole hard work got stars to it

Thank you

Thank You So Much 🤗