ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#3 Link#4 pg 150

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: anniemathias
it was fantastic loved it

Thank You 😊

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

wow the update was amazing
loved it
and
enjoyed it the most
thanx for the pm and
update soon

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khushboo

@khusbooluvarsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

so finally my last comment for this part :D

now coming to the chapter ...it was as always beautifully written and you are the best when it comes to POVs...so romantic, sweet ,lovely

well penned !!

will wait for the next part...update soon

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

OMGG... Manuu... Woww... This update was soo... Ah... Romantic... Infact ur almost all d updates r romantic only... 😆 ... Bt phir bhi... 😉 ... You described it beautifullyy mania... Der dance... Evrything was beautifully described... Haaye... 😳 ... Bt last mei one thing made me confusedd... "Flashback Ended" ...???? Haing..???? :/ ... Kaunsa flashback... Kiska flashback... Kha ka flashback..???? :/ ... Meko samaj ni aaya kuch... I thought ki it ws present... AAA... Mjhe ni pta... 😔 ... Bt ovrall update... Beautifulll tha... 😊 😳

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Wow. . . .
Awsome update. . . .
Lovd it. . . . . .
So hawwttt yet so pure. . . . . .
The way u describd evrythng was awsome. . . . .
I just lovd it. . . . . .
This chapter was dedicated to me. . . .
Yuppiee, . . . .
M so happy. . .. . . . .
THANKS. . . .
THANKS A LOTTT. . . . .