ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#3 Link#4 pg 150 - Page 43

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For Update-32

Ah-mazing..

Their morning after, it was beautifully explained Manu!! This morning must be so new to them and their love and want for each other was so perfectly worded. 😃

Their honeymoon started...and that too in Paris..you thought it so well..😃

Kunwar's jealousy and possessiveness for Shakti, its so nice feeling to read. Being I girl, I can imagine such a possessive boy...that means world to a girl..😳

their room..ahaaa!! The ambiance reflected a perfect honeymoon spot...

You explained each and every details with so much care...😃

That kiss in balcony!! I can imagine a tight and hot kiss in city of romance...so perfectly thought of!! Couldn't be better...

My favorite part:😳

Shakti's feelings about herself after their consummation...

A girl always think about it and herself...I really found it so realistic...Her defintion of Woman..it seems so real to me...really well put..😃

Then came the spoiler...Shakti!! Arghhh..I was too mad on her after reading it..how come she spoil her honeymoon with that news!!😡

But then wooo!!! The way she wooed him...it was extremely high temperature..☺️

I seriously found it ticklish to read their CON...☺️

You are good at shaping CONs in most subtle words...you are maestro in it...for me..I don't feel like "shy" or guilty when I read your way of explaining them...😳

Lovely update as always Manu!!😎

Heading to other one!!

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

For Update 33

Manu!! It wasn't short..it was the shortest...😡

But this was purely blissful..

I really loved the way you piled the most normal and small moments into a sack of socks🤣...lolz...sowiee for lame humor..😆

Honestly!! It was one of best put household scene...I mean!! Most stories are about big things and emotions..and few dare to write about small still lovely moments..you are experimental with contents and that's why you are successful...really lovely update..

I loved wife SHakti and Husband Kunwar...Kunwar seems to be perfect for Shakti only as for others he is just angry bird...😆

Story of socks was so entertaining to read...😳

I loved the way they ruined the place with socks around...😆

and then ended up kissing in closet...who else could think of that???!! Manu only..😉

Loved it to core..😃

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

the update was beautiful

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

awesome

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

mind blowing

Originally posted by: jas112

wow the update was amazing
loved it
and
enjoyed it the most
thanx for the pm and
update soon