*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I love this story...reminds me of the golden days😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uffo! Arnav is such a meanie here.
But thats what i love about him. The stupid anger.😈
And yet he can't see her with anybody else.
I love how you use a new character Dhruv. Instead of NK or someone like that.
B'cos we have seen the different ways NK have helped both Khushi & Arnav.
So i have formed my opinions about him. He is a sweetheart , very hilarious.
So when you start off a new character, i can build my emotions from the start. 👍🏼

And i'm hoping that Arnav would visit her room and surprise her with gifts.
If not, she should faint or leave his house the next day. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really love this jealous Arnav...😳
So in this SS Aakash is like a big brother to Khushi😛
Dhruv...Go ahead man..Make arnie boy more and more jealous😆

Thanks a lot for the PM...Continue soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahahaha..!! really loved mamiji here..!!

she's indeed a sweetheart, protecting khushi..!!

just loved it dammit..!! though the next part sounds damn

interesting.! do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved this part !!😊
specially arnav's part his nature !!😳
loved breakfast scene😊
loved mamiji😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too cool and a nice story to start with!

U know I love you and ur writing dear!

Arnav is such a mean guy. He got gifts for her isnt it? please say yes.:D


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Posted: 12 years ago
woow their pretty fights are interesting!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This story is amazing so far! Loved it!


Feel a twist is going to to come. But then again I could be wrong. Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
He must be in deep love feeling jealous at dhruv being close to khushi...btw why did u change name of the cousin from Australia from nk to dhruv...though this is ur ss ...just curious.
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing story and amazing updates

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