*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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Eggon_Snow

@Eggon_Snow

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Hey I love this story...reminds me of the golden days😊

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Uffo! Arnav is such a meanie here.

But thats what i love about him. The stupid anger.😈

And yet he can't see her with anybody else.

I love how you use a new character Dhruv. Instead of NK or someone like that.

B'cos we have seen the different ways NK have helped both Khushi & Arnav.

So i have formed my opinions about him. He is a sweetheart , very hilarious.

So when you start off a new character, i can build my emotions from the start. 👍🏼

And i'm hoping that Arnav would visit her room and surprise her with gifts.

If not, she should faint or leave his house the next day. 😆

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Megha

@naughtymallu

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

I really love this jealous Arnav...😳

So in this SS Aakash is like a big brother to Khushi😛

Dhruv...Go ahead man..Make arnie boy more and more jealous😆

Thanks a lot for the PM...Continue soon😉

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

ahahaha..!! really loved mamiji here..!!

she's indeed a sweetheart, protecting khushi..!!

just loved it dammit..!! though the next part sounds damn

interesting.! do continue soon..

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

loved this part !!😊

specially arnav's part his nature !!😳

loved breakfast scene😊

loved mamiji😆

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Too cool and a nice story to start with!

U know I love you and ur writing dear!

Arnav is such a mean guy. He got gifts for her isnt it? please say yes.:D

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sakthi25

@sakthi25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

woow their pretty fights are interesting!!!!!

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

This story is amazing so far! Loved it!

Feel a twist is going to to come. But then again I could be wrong. Update soon!

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sairam03

@sairam03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

He must be in deep love feeling jealous at dhruv being close to khushi...btw why did u change name of the cousin from Australia from nk to dhruv...though this is ur ss ...just curious.

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greenbutterfly

@greenbutterfly

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

amazing story and amazing updates

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