Raizada and Sons - Thread 3 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Hey Kalyaani, i caught up with all the uodates I missed over the last 6 weeks. After the slow build up initially, things are starting to get interesting, very interesting.
This guy Suraj is probably my favourite character in this story- he intrigues me. To love someone as much as he does, although vey sweet, is also creepy and ver stalkerish to an extent. However I can also see that he is genuinely a nice guy. I think there is more to come off him in the following chapters. He could play an important part in the changing dynamics of Arnav and Kushi's marriage.

The story so far has focussed a lot of Kushi's POV, not much on Arnav. Is that intentiona? I'm not a big fan of him so far. He personifies the typical 'Men are from Mars' idelogy. Sex before everything else. I'm disappointed that he didnt let Kushi in on the truth of their wedding. How can a relationship survive when its not based on honesty and truth? Things are only likely to get messy as Kushi is noe emotionaly invested in this relationship. Also is there more to his feelings for Kushi, or is it just about sex for him?

Your updates flow seamlessly, the build-up although slow does full justice to the various complex characters, and their comples associations.

I'm caught up on POL too (a favourite of mine) and will hopefully find the time in the next couple of days to leave a comment.

Just read this FF from Chapter 1.

Phew what a journey. it is very well written so much so that at this moment I have so many questions:

Is Suraj truly negative?

Will Arjun ever reform or are you going to kill him?

Can there ever be a character as strong, steady and layered as Indira?

Why did Arnav marry Khushi?

Will they (in the near future) truly share their lives and not just parts of it?

I cannot wait to read more...