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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Isn't it strange that when it comes to Suraj both Arnav and Khushi have a sudden urge to hide things from each other...

Both of them are hiding from each other about the past which is related to Suraj...Both seeing him at the cafe but not acknowledging it and taking measures to avoid him..

N then we have Suraj thinking that Arhi have not seen him...

Great chapter!

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Th0ugh I cud guess en0ugh when y0u said'Khushi saw him first', Arnav's P0V surprised me...It jst sh0ws his sharp eyes 0n everything p0ssible
Als0 it may be high tym Arnav has a l0ng talk regarding Suraj with his mamaji/father-in-law
Everytym y0u jst make me want f0r m0re

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Oh nw tht ws hot awesum update btw congrats for new thread wish many more are on way

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oceanssea

@oceanssea

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Its funny that both Arnav and Khushi saw Suraj at the same time and want

to plainly avoid Suraj.And they are not to be blamed for feeling so.But

I feel sympathy for Suraj.Can't you drop a duplicate of Khushi for

Suraj,but maybe even then he'll stil be obsessed with the real one.

Loving the romance between Mr. and Mrs. Raizada and thanks to Suraj

we got an unexpected(but very appreciated) extra amount of romance

to read and imagine.

Thanks for the update.

And congratulations for the new thread.🥳

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

So they both saw him
Wonder if arnav knows about suraj's feeling on khushi
Awesome update
Congrats on new thread

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Congrats on the new thread. Loved the update Kalyaani. Waiting for more.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hey Kalyaani, i caught up with all the uodates I missed over the last 6 weeks. After the slow build up initially, things are starting to get interesting, very interesting.
This guy Suraj is probably my favourite character in this story- he intrigues me. To love someone as much as he does, although vey sweet, is also creepy and ver stalkerish to an extent. However I can also see that he is genuinely a nice guy. I think there is more to come off him in the following chapters. He could play an important part in the changing dynamics of Arnav and Kushi's marriage.

The story so far has focussed a lot of Kushi's POV, not much on Arnav. Is that intentiona? I'm not a big fan of him so far. He personifies the typical 'Men are from Mars' idelogy. Sex before everything else. I'm disappointed that he didnt let Kushi in on the truth of their wedding. How can a relationship survive when its not based on honesty and truth? Things are only likely to get messy as Kushi is noe emotionaly invested in this relationship. Also is there more to his feelings for Kushi, or is it just about sex for him?

Your updates flow seamlessly, the build-up although slow does full justice to the various complex characters, and their comples associations.

I'm caught up on POL too (a favourite of mine) and will hopefully find the time in the next couple of days to leave a comment.