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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asr13

Smitzy !!!


Very cute update ...Arnav is clueless na ... Gupta sisters difficult to please ...Men, I tell you !!! Baby steps, very apt title ...lots to learn bitwa 😛😆

Loved the phone convo ...anything else at this moment would have been unreal, considering the turmoil both of them have been in ...his expectation, her caressing the rose petals ...very cute !

Oh and Akash saying in will not go from the house as long as his wife s happy ..was something !

ASR now in full action haan...Akraman !!! ...sab taraf se ...before poor Khushi realises, he has alreay charmed his way right into the hearts of her entire family!!! 😃😉
Loved the interaction between Arnav and Garima, progress indeed ... Loved the way she understood him and his intentions !! Very sweet !!
And Buaji and him crack me up ...Matlab ham us din tumko tumre hi ghar se nikale rahe !!! ...Hey Bhagwaaan !!! 😆 I like the way he thinks twice before speaking to her ...kha toh nahi jaegi ...🤣 ...found myself grinning by the time the update ended ...

A.N.D I am verrry excited for your Mahaepisode 👏...you are right, i am already keeping myself prepared for the disappointment on screen !!!


hehehee thanks for the lovely comment!! 🤗
lots to learn I agree but ASR will be ASR dear.. he's going to smuggle his way in I tell you :)

you'll Aakash even more in the next scene 😉

I'm excited for the ME too!! I just got that idea out of the blue and I was like challenge accepted hehehe buaji is one of my fav character really!! but I think I have mentioned this before as well 😛

cheers darling! muaah

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

I love this FF and I have decided that I shall now wait for this instead of the crap fest our show has become, specially till they put it right. :p

Arnav's hesitancy in regard to Khushi but his will to make it right with her family...baby steps indeed but very important! :)

And a ME? Yay! :)


aww thanks dear, it means a lot! 😊


Originally posted by: PrincessVarsh

i cnt thnk u enough 4 dis FF..🤗

seriously sweetie hw i wish u wre 1 ov cv's..atleast we woulnt hv 2 bear all da crap goin on da show nowadays..
u knw i started reading dis ystday n jst happnd 2 finish all da chaps...😃
nw eagerly w8in 4 da ME..
ps: i hpe u r gna update TTAYM soon..😳


Taming should be soon dear.. I'm halfway there 😊 and thanks for your lovely comment! I'm glad you like it so much! cheers!

Originally posted by: Punkin22

You did a beautiful job on the update for FF. It is layering the thoughts of both Arnav and Khushi. ASR can stare down anyone over a business deal and never blink but he can't ask Khushi if she liked his roses and surprise. Unbelievable. Could you smack him up side his head please...

thanks punkin dear! I'll see what I can do 😉

Originally posted by: star_fan1

awsome update arnav is so romantic

i read all the scene of chapter 19 together
i feel in was in arshiland in that time
thanks for beautiful updates
loved it
i just read ur today update
its lovely and beautiful
the way they nuves to talk each other its like they r talking in phone 1st time
loved it
plz continue it soon


thanks dear! arshiland indeed! more to come hopefully soon!
cheers!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: segad

so excited about the ME


wonderful update. why oh why are you not the CV for the damn show. this is so wonderful. even on its own but particularly when compared to the tripe that we are being subjected to particularly this week.

seems like the entire cast except sanaya has quit the show.

the cvs have totally forgotten that there are other cast members. post marriage it has been a not so khush khushi-thon of nonsense.

i love your story because it shows how wonderful the show could have been. tight script, enough variety with all of the characters having a part to play. story moving ahead with each update, no diversions, no digressions. Some heavy duty RVs, some heavy duty "Meri sanson mein's"

i shudder to think how much more imbecile the actual show can get. but then i think of the wonderful writers like yourself who have thankfully for us, created this alternate universe where we can be happy. may your tribe increase.

👏👏👏


😊
awww Seema!! thank you so much for your lovely comment dear!! I wish I could write some more, but I've been rendered speechless 😳

LOVE YOU!!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: panck

What a great continuation, a natural progression from hostilities to missing each other and tentatively talking...

They do belong together.

Loved the way Garima and the rest of the family made an effort to accept Arnav and his gestures of goodwill, reassuring him that he was family.

Nandini arriving soon... interesting

Cannot wait for your ME...

thanks for your lovely comment darling! Nandini arriving soon indeed 😉

Originally posted by: christmas

do you want to perhaps lend your creativity to the show for a while? really. think abt it.

though arnav's plight has me feeling bad for him and i dont necessarily agree with khushis responses. as i've previously stated and its reasons. i am loving this! payal however i wanted to smack her for the cold shoulder. the woman has never really opened her mouth in support and now all of a sudden...either way. no point in crying over whats gone. just hope she does not create problems for them. you akash though. i really really like. and anjali. sigh. really? what more does she want there to happen before she will see things for what it is.

continue soon!

aww christmas, I wish I could dear, I really do! even I can't endure the crap they are dishing out 😔 Well, I'll request you to please wait for the next couple of updates.. I don't like to keep any loops open.. you'll read why Payal is being like this and why Khushi is being like herself and also what is Anjali's role.. I've worked hard at not letting her be the hateful character so far, I'm not going to make people hate her now. 😊

cheers love!


Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

"Yii Sankeswari aur woo
Sankeswar bilkul ek dooje ke liye
hi bane hain,"
🤣
Loved Arnav's concern for his family in this. Garima is such a nice and neatly developed character in your FF! Not just her. Every character, for that matter! Loved Arhi's phone conversation. Their silences told us more than their words!

Also, thanks for the pm
:)

thank you so much for your lovely comment dear! cheers!


Originally posted by: ayshaomar

Amazing update

so basically i see the whole two families are willing for Arnav and Khushi to get together apart from Payal and Nandini for now
Khushi is still resisting ofcourse
i wonder what that 'gift' is that arnav got akaash to sneak in to her bag
and ooo Maha Episode update cant wait

gift will be out in the next update dear 😊 thanks for commenting


Originally posted by: Iamyself

Awesome update! :D


Too bad Kushi wasn't there to witness all the file givings! :(

And, you're so awesome! Eagerly waiting for the written-MahaEpisode! <3

uhmm, wait for the next few updates is all I'll say.. I don't keep loops open 😉 cheers dear thanks for commenting!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rrd29

great update..nice to see Khushi's family accepting Arnav slowly...
"Gupta women are difficult to please " ...nice...
Looking fwd to the Mahaepisode...we all know u wont disappoint us like the CVs :))

aww thanks dear! cheers! 😊

Originally posted by: nazibah

Buaji is so right! They are made for each other! I hope Arnav is prepared to guard his limbs because Nandini is here! Loved the update! Thanks for the PM!

hahaha that comment made me laugh. really hard 😆 thanks dear!

Originally posted by: minnuma

Love it..loved the last update as well...a bit of humour intermingled with huge does of love...loved it...keep them coming Smitzy!! So much more realistic and enjoyable than wat is being dished out on the show...

thanks dear.. means a lot! 😊

Originally posted by: thesh

Awesome sweety

All the best for the maha epi

I'm sure youl do great!

aww thanks dear! 😊

Originally posted by: sumond

Awesome update, apt title, and a wonderful writer, what more can i want... waiting eagerly for the ME (doing a happy dance)

thank you so so much!! me too doing happy dance reading your comment! 😊

Originally posted by: sohara

Amazing update.

Loved the dutiful SIL Arnav. But both of Arnav and Khushi need to break the silence between them.
The current track of the show is so frustrating that, it's better to read FF or SS rather than watch the crap .

thanks sohara!! I admit current track is weird! 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: koyel.c

Fabulous update... loved the way Arnav is dealing his issues with Khushi... Not only he is wooing her back but also trying to heal all her wounds and removing all her tensions... Smitzy u rock dear...


thanks so much dear!! 😊

Originally posted by: babli0204

I took baby steps today morning!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cute episode!!! But I'm dissappointed that Khushi has not yet opened the bag and the seen the box!!!!!!!😕

What is in it???? Cannot hold my curiosity any more Smita!🤢

Loves how Khushi's
fingers idly caressing the velvet like rose petals scattered all over her bed. It was as if she is caressing Arnav through the petals.

Both needed to hear each other's voice before they can sleep but refuse to acknowledge it stubbornly!!! Hence the call was somehow akward for both.

Loved how Arnav arranged everything for Shahsi's treatment and Garima can sense the pain at
Arnav's words on not being accepted as a part of their family and she can also feel how desperately Arnav wants to be in Khushi's life again. These are just beautifully written.

And Buaji is just being, well, BUAJI !!!!!!!!

Quote:
"Hum bael ki tarah bilkul chust durust hain," Buaji exclaims. Arnav suppresses a chuckle at hearing Buaji compare herself willingly to a bull." Need I say more?!?!?!?😉

Specially her reaction after realising "To iska matlab, uss raat hum tum ko tumrehi ghar se bahar nikale rahe?" she asks Arnav in a horrified voice. is too hilarious!!!!!!!!!!

Arnav handled the situation so well with so much maturity. Quote: "Par main wohi deserve karta tha. Main nahin chahta ki aaj ke baad, agar aapko kisi ko bhi iss ghar se bahar nikalne ki naubat aaye, to aap 2 minute ke liye bhi hesitate karein," Arnav adds good humoredly. "Ye ghar aapka hai aur hamesha aap hi ka rehna chahiye Buaji."

Nandini is arriving!!!!!!!!!!! Can we hope to see a more insecure and a bit jealous Khushi again?!?!?! Let's NK-Nandini track happen!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It will also help Arshi to come closer!!!!!! Just like Akash and Payal track has done!

THANKS A LOT for the PM!!!


oh boy! that was one long comment 😊 thank you so much dear!! the box!! oooh you are gettng impatient hehehee patience dear.. just one more scene to go.. NK-Nandini track will obviously happen.. that is the entire reason of me introducing Nandu dear in the first place 😉 however, Arshi will get "help" from someone else altogether. stay tuned for the next update.. you'll see what I'm talking about!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

That was brilliant! I'm not sure I agree with the way he did Buaji's house. She might feel under his obligation now. And now she will never be able to throw him out! He should have just willed it to her or something. Anyway...

I'm glad circumstances made her not call him or meet with him. Surprised he didn't ask or seek for her when he came to Buaji's. Smitzy! I felt a little bit sorry for him when he left Buaji's! You are very good!
Haila! Nandini is coming. What's going to happen?? I can't wait for the ME.
(Egad! Your note on Karwachauth in reel life has scared me. How can he be so insensitive as to do that??!!!!)
Thanks for the PM. 😃 Waiting for the next update.


oooh I'm glad you approve Vittoria! 😛 In the coming updates, you'll see why it was actually a good idea NOT to have willed it to Buaji.. hmm, won't say no more, need to keep you on the edge of your seat. 😛

you finally felt bad for him?? halleluaj hahahaha

hey hey don't freak out abt the karwachauth happening on reel life.. I just read it somewhere, I'm not saying it will happen!! in any case, you'll like the one I have planned :)

cheers dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 20 scene 1
awesome dear...
lovely...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

chap 20 scene 1
awesome dear...
lovely...
cont soon...


thanks dear! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Acha, I am back. Busy day today running in and out of the house 😆

Aww at Mami ji actually trying to be nice and welcoming to both Payal and Akash. Not too huge and glam party but enough to make them feel at home. But best part, Payal still being upset and Arnav thinks these Gupta women are so hard to please🤣

You know it's the small things in the FF where you pay attention to detail that convince me to keep looking forward to the updates. For example, Buaji's and Khushi's exchange where they question who could dare steal the TV in her presence...a typical Khushi style comeback. And then the scene when Arnav called her and said something out of the blue all the while wanting to just ask if she did see the hidden box. So cute! Khushi thought it was a dream...hayye larki!

Best part of the update was how our ASR walked in the next morning and won everyone's hearts again with his one-liners. How he made Garima feel he wanted to be back in Khushi's life, how he shook Shashi's hand and how he requested Buaji to sign and not state that he was pushed out of his own house...very subtle yet powerful control. 😆@ Buaji's response!

Oh and Nandini is coming🥳 Buaji noticed the start contrast between Arshi and hear hear to her statement.

P.S. I am sooo looking forward to your MEGA update. Well planned as the serial Karav chauth won't be as exciting, I bet. Waise box mein hai kya?
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