U BELONG TO ME...A kriyaansh ff(ch 15 updated ) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
awesome FF REY getting jealous...
update sooon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
it was an amazing chapter!!
jst lovd d jealous rey!!! he is always a treat to watch!!😛😆
rey nd kriya in fire exit in d nxt update!! woww!! really lukng forward to d nxt update!! 😊
plss update soon n plss pm me!!😃

Priyanka!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: priyankah07

it was an amazing chapter!!

jst lovd d jealous rey!!! he is always a treat to watch!!😛😆
rey nd kriya in fire exit in d nxt update!! woww!! really lukng forward to d nxt update!! 😊
plss update soon n plss pm me!!😃

Priyanka!!😊

thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Chapter 9

yash and kria entered the class...and sat next to eachother...rey entered class and saw them...talking n

laughing...he ignored and sat in the frst bench...

professor entered...

prof: students im giving a project(guys tum hi sochlo wat project)...ull be doing it in a group...ill tell the names..

swayam - sharon
neha - vicky
nilesh - simmi
amar - rinni
bharat - vishaka
reyaansh - tani
kria - yash

prof: project should be submitted day after tomorrow...(he took his class and went)

tani: rey project

rey: hmm karenge

kria: so ready mr.flirt

yash: always

kria : toh chalo abhi se hi start karenge...

yash: as u say(rey heard them)...

sharon: so guys hum sab log ek saath karenge toh vll get disturbed...so guys

nil: hmmm toh swayam ke saath akela time spend karna chati ho...(shar glared at him)...

vish: ok man vll separate...

swaron- R.H
kriyaansh-canteen
viha-common room
bharka,nimmi,rimar-bb court
taarey-atrium

sharon: so guys chalo...(all went)

IN CANTEEN

kria: ok yash start...

yash: pehle vll eat somethin yaar book lagi hai...

kria: no

yash: plzzz

kria: ok fine...n do fast

yash: ok...tumhe kuch chahiye??

kria: nothin

yash: nahi...hmmm ill get chocolate pastry ok(he said and went towards the counter...)
(humhara rey atrium mai restless ho raha tha,,,,)

rey: tani mujhe book lagi hai...ill have somethin in canteen...u continue...

tani: rey mai bi ahoonga...

rey: no tani...

tani: mai ahoonga bas mujhe bi book lagi hai(rey had no other option so they moved towards canteen)

IN CANTEEN

yash: so madam this is for u...

kria: thank u and started eating...
(she was eatin and checkin her notes...)

when she was having a bit of chocolate cream was sticked under her lips...

yash: kria tum bilkul bacchi ho

kria: kya??

yash: hai dekho tere lips ke niche(and started wiping it with his fingers...)

rey n tani entered the canteen...(rey froze)

yash was smilin and wipin her lips...rey tightened his fists...aur tani was happy to see that...
rey in angry made his way to f,e...he was so so soo angry...cant even imagine...he was walking to n fro in the F.E...

in canteen kria n yash finished half of their work...n decided thy'll continue tomorrow...yash left collage for some work...kria was in the collage...the whole day...and rey in F.E...rey at lost his temper and was searching for
kria...finally found her in classroom...he went to her and pulled her and was heading to the F.E

guys i have a request from here u hv to imgine that ye sab apke samne ho raha hai...this is for all kriyaansh fans...yaha se kria ki pain,their expressions...u all should go directly to fire exit...hope u all like it...

kr: rey chodo...chodo...leave me(he toook her to the f.e and slammed the door...)

kr: rey yaha kyu layi ho mujhe??

rey:(gritting his teeth) kyu mera saath rehkar tumhe accha nahi lagtha

kr: rey wats all this? and mujhe ye batau mujhe yaha kyu lahi ho??

rey: tum aise kaise kar sakti ho?(angry)

kr: maine kya kiya??

rey: ab mujhe bolna padega...kya kar rahi thi yash ke saath...??

kr: kuch toh nahi...

rey: mere saath zyada oversmart banne ki koshish mat karo...do u get that...jo mereliye tumhara pyaar tha vo kaha gayi ?? haan ...kyu yash ke aane ke baad mujhe bool gayi(rey was so angry that he didn't have the slightest idea of wat he's talking...)

this made kria angryy...more than rey...

kr:(angry tone) dekho mujhe jane do...(and was movin out...but rey rey pulled her and pinned her to the wall...

rey: aaj tumhe mai hasani se nahi jane doonga...(she pushed him with force...)

kr: (shouted) ye meri life hai...mai kuch bi karoonga usse tumhe koi lena dena nahi...samji tum(pointing her finger towards him...

rey:(angryily) mujhe attitude mat dikhao...(and caught hold her wrist due to this...the braclet which had kria wore got cut...and her hand starts bleedin...she whinced in pain...this was enough for rey to come back to normal...

rey: kri...kria dikhao mujhe..

kria(crying and shouted on top of her voice) Dont touch me...do u get that Mr. Reyaansh singhaniya...aaj mai tumhe sab clear kar deti hoon,,,,

guys from here she's crying and shouting at him...baar baar ill nt tell ok...

pehla baat mai kya karthi hoon kya nahi karthi isse tumhe koi lena dena nahi...tum hothi kaun ho mujhe batane wala...tumhe mere upar kohi haq nahi hai...tumhe mujhe kya poocha ki tumhare liye mera pyaar kaha chali gayi rite...mai ye baat tumhe poochti hoon tumhara pyaar kaha gayi...
ho mai ye kaise bool gayi ki tum mujhe pyaar hi nahi karthe te...

rey: mai tumhe pyaar nahi kartha...kr

kr: jus...just shut up ok...aap mujhe kuch mat boliye...(a little slowly n cryin) kya aap mujhe sach mai pyaar karthe te?? itne din mere yaad kabi nahi hayi...haan mai chati thi aap move on kare lekin...aap meri jagah tani ko kaise di...jo jo pal hu...hum saath mai bithaye te vo sab apko kabi yaad nahi aaya...meri jane ke baad ek baar bi mujhe doondne ki koshish nayi kiya...kyu...aap boliye agar aap meri jagah me hote toh aap kya karthe...swayam,neha,vish,bharat,amar mere aane se pehle kush te na apni zindagi mai...mai un logo ko sapna dikaya...aur mai hi usse chinu...

rey: dekho kriya..i understand...but i love u...

kr:(started shouting) aap joot mat bolo...u didnt love me u was ju,,just attracted to me...

rey: wats wrong with you kria...m attracted to u...i love you...

kr: stop it rey...ye pyaar pyaar...
ok u love me rite...then wats with tani...

rey: vo vo(he had no words to say)

kr: aap bol nahi pa rahe ho...aa...aap bool jahiye...aaj se vll not interfere in eachothres life..(sayin this she was about to go...but rey agin pullled her...

rey: (little angry) tum aisa kuch nahi karoge...

kr: leave me...i said leave me(and pulled her hand from him)...aap aap mane ya na mane yahi sach hai...aap kabi bi muje pyaar nahi kiya...u love tani and accept it...

rey: kria aisa nahi hai...

kr: (shouted) toh kaisa hai...aap dono ladkiyon ko kaise pyaar kar sakte ho...aap mujhe bi pyaar karte ho aur tani ko bi...aisa kaise... ??aap usse pyaar karthe ho...aap mujse attracted ho...ya phir aap ye bol kyu nahi rahe ho ki u want to spend a night with me...

rey was dumbfolded...tears were rolling down...kria was goin out but stopped...

kr: (crying)rahi baat yash ki vo meri frnd hai...aapki jagah meri life mai kohi nahi le sakta...kohi nahi kyu ki maine apko apni jaan se bi pyaar kiya tha...

saying this she went away...rey was shattered he fell on his knees...motionless

thats it...
kaise tha...mai ye apni dil se likha hai...wat i feel i hv written in words
enjoy😃
do comment guys it matters a lot...love ya

Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
res
unres
yeppie me first... 😃
loved d update .
it was awesome .
rey deserve it .. 😡

update soon
thnx for d pm.
Edited by ARPITAHAIT - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
sperbb...
kya update tha...
rey soo deserves itt... aur kria... feeling so sad 4 her...
sahi hai..kaha gaya uska saccha pyar 4 kria ab..??
agar saccha wala pyar karta toh mahine kyaa... saalon tak bhi kissi naani ke saath move on nahi kar pata...!!
but still hopin u unite them in the most memorable way atleast in ur ff :)
waiting...cont sooon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: hotdiva_dmg


sperbb...

kya update tha...
rey soo deserves itt... aur kria... feeling so sad 4 her...
sahi hai..kaha gaya uska saccha pyar 4 kria ab..??
agar saccha wala pyar karta toh mahine kyaa... saalon tak bhi kissi naani ke saath move on nahi kar pata...!!
but still hopin u unite them in the most memorable way atleast in ur ff :)
waiting...cont sooon!!



Achha tha...it really matters to me...specially ur commen..
Thank u:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
superb one ...soo sad of rey 😭
mke thm confess soon yar
waitng fr it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

awesum...

great...

superb...

just luv it...

evrything was like going in frnt of me...

awesum update...

bichara rey...😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Karunyandrea

superb one ...soo sad of rey😭
mke thm confess soon yar
waitng fr it

itni jaldi confess...nah
U v to wait..

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