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Wedding day Kriya's house… 9:00 pm

K : kamina… kutta… kutte to phir bhi wafadar hote hen lekin ye saala… arghhh abhi tak nahi aya.. to kya jab shaadi ho jayegi tab ayeega..

Kriya shouted in her room.. she was ready now and everyone was calling her down..

K : lal kapre pehne hue hen mene.. in lal kapron ki qasam rey agar tu time pen a aya to tujhe tere khoon se lal kardungi…

Here rey, swayam and Sharon were trying to get in the house..

R : abbey yahan to 2 sandh gaate pe khare hen..

Sw : beta rey tu zara apna ilaj karwane ja.. wo andar jo sandh khare hen wo tujhe nahi nazar a rahe?

R : abbey chup saale… khud bhi dar raha he or mujhe bhi dara raha he.. wo andar jo kriya he wo abhi tak mujhe marne ka plan bhi bana chuki hogi.. khoon pijayegi mera .. kuch soch..

Sh : SOCHHH LIYAAA

Sharon shouted and swayam slapped her head..

Sw : jake puri duniya ko bata de k hum yahan dulhan ko bhagane aye hen..

Sharon made a crying face and then started crying..

R : meri pyaari behna chup kar ja..dekh abhi meri pas feeder bhi nahi he jo tujhe pilaun..

Sw : kutte… ye itni chotti bhi nahi he jo feeder piye..

R : oh hello.. harkaten dekh iski fir boliyo..

Sh : bas karo tum dono.. kriya sahi kehti thi saare mard aik jese hote hen..

R : KYA?

Sh : chup bey.. abh meri suno..

Sharon explained the plan and the trio smiled at each other…

Sh : eee ye sari to aik jageh tikti nahi he..

Sw : chup kar Sharon ki bachi warna pakren jayenge…

All were wearing sarees and were having pallus on their head…

Sandh 1 : kon ho tum teeno? *in a stern tune *

Sh : dikhta nahi kya ullu k pathey? Kriya me'am saab ne bulaya he.. kuch kaam he unhen.. poch le saandh ki aulad !

Sandh : acha jao jao..

There the trio left for the room.. they reached and checked the room BUT she wasn't there… she was now in the mandap sitting with that fool…

She stands and shouts : ARGHHH KOI MUJHE GUN LA K DO!

Dad : Kyun beta?

K : ab apko yeh nahi pata gun se kya karte hen? Me us kamine ka sar phor dungi…

Dulha : gun se sar phota he? Mujhe nahi pata tha..

K : abbey chup..

Dad : beth jao beta.. muhrat ka time ho gaya he..

Dulha : Daddy me aik min me aya..

Dad : kahan jar aha he beta?

Dulha : personal kaam he daddy.. ata hun.. abhi nahi kiya to bohat der ho jayegi..

He went to his room and ran to washroom.. there when he was coming out of the washroom, swayam held him and rey put a cloth on his face and after 5 seconds he was on the floor..

R : ye langoor meri kriya se shaadi karega? Abbey ja ja ..

He dressed himself as dulha and went down and sat in mandap..

K : kutta, kamina, saala buri shakal wala.. bohat bolta than and ab dekho.. busy hoga kisi bimbo k sath.. mera kya he..

Phere starts and in no time ended… He was about to put mangalsutra in her neck, when the real dulha in his boxers came out of the room screaming…

Dulha : mere kapreee… mere kapreee…

K : hen? Tu wahan he to ye kaun he?

Rey removed the sehra and made a Frowning face looking at swayam and Sharon..

K : TU? Saale chupe rustam .. tu a gaya or mujhe bataya bhi nahi?

DAD : YE SHAADI NAHI HO SAKTI !

Pandit : par ho gayi he..

R : YAHOOO ! ho gayi..

Dad : par abhi bhi mangalsutra nahi pehnaya.. guards.. chen lo is se..

R : wat?

Before he can do anything someone snatched the mangalsutra from his hands and ran..

R : shit.. ab kya karun?

K : abbey faulad ki aulad ! ja unse cheen.. yahan khara kya he..

And tu kukkad *dulha * ja k kapre pehen le.. yahan pe ladies bhi hen..

Dulha started crying and his parents started manafoying him..

K : Saala kukkad k bhais me choha !

Abey o sandh ki aulad jaldi kar na.. me yahan bore ho rahi hun..

R : dikh nahi raha lar raha hun.. dekh teri wajeh se kitna ghayal hua hen..

He made her look at a lil scratch ..

K : OHO me mar gayi.. ghayal kar diya un sandhon ne mere bakre ko..

She said placing her palm at her head in a dramatic way…

R : chup be.. over acting ho rahi he..

Sw : abbey kamine mangalsutra pehna..

Before he can again it was snatched.. he ran behind the man and kriya ran behind them helding her lehnga in her hands…

Mom : Ruk tu.. wahin ruk.. Warna meri lash pe se guzarna parega tujhe..

K : maa kyun tapa rahi he .. dialogue na maar..

Her mom was staring at her when she saw all guards standing in front of her covering her and rey at the other side..

Guard : ab dekhte hen tu kese ise mangalsutra pehnata he…

Mangalsutra was in Her dad's hand.. he throws it to her Uncle but in between swayam catches it and throws it to Sharon but here another man catches it.. he throws it to the Dulha but in time rey catches it and ran towards kriya.. but in between he fell cuz of those Sandh Guards..

K : abbey bara banta he hawt dude and all.. aik mangalsutra nahi pehna sakta? Ufff

He dashed again onto them on which they fell apart and he fell straight on her… he quickly put the mangalsutra in her neck..

R : phewww… bohat khapaya he is mangalsutra ne… tujhe bhi aj hi bhagna tha? Kal bhag leti!

K : let me tell you.. bohat maza aya meri jaan.. kya lag raha that u..

Both stands and were talking to each other and in between unknowingly rey kissed kriya on cheek.. there the budha, budhis fell on floor unconscious..

R : ye kya?

K : hahaha behosh ho gaye hamari besharmi dekh kar..

R : agar mene or besharmi dikhayi to ye sare bhi gaye?

K : han but tu karega kya?

He quickly kissed her on lips and then grinned… there all middle aged people fell on floor…

Sw : had he besharmi ki..

Sh : to kya? Please mujhe bhi karo na swayam..

She said making a please-kiss-me face…

Sw : chup be…

Some kids came to kriya and rey and said..

Kids : uncle hum nahi behosh hue.. ap or kuch karo na jisse hum bhi behosh ho jaen..

K : tooba tooba..

R : beta ap ayse hi thek ho..

They hugged each other and finally they were married…

After some days kriya and rey asks for forgiveness from her parents and they forgive them.. All live happily ever after !


Here is the last part of the OS..

hope u enjoyed it.. Thank u so much for reading..

there are so much hindi errors... as i m bad at it, please forgive me..

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was funny...😆

*sorry for short comment*
Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

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iss OS ke dwaara aapne hume kaafi manoranjit kiya...
hum apni hassi rok hi nahi paye


bass... isse zyada shudh hindi ka prayog mujhse nahi hota,...

but seriously this was damn hilarious...
I really loved the way u r getting these OS with such a comic concept making the readers laugh... thats really required these days...

All I can say is keep updating such fab piece of works
Edited by -shenz- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was 🤣🤣🤣 awesome...
🤣🤣🤣 ...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kahan he re mere akbar?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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no comments expect this 🤗 love yaa 🤪
Edited by 9869272025 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was 2 funny...
Jst luvd it...
Thankx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤣 Awesome os i really liked the dialogues and last wala scene was very gud

Thanx for d pm
Edited by sharuKR - 12 years ago

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