::''Abducting My Bride''::

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Heya guyz !

M here again with an OS ! I hope you guyz will love this OS as it is totally fun based..

Kriya's House at 10:00 pm

K: rey meri isme koi galti nahi.. me kya kar sakti hun.. mere ghar walon ne mera rishta kahin or pakka kar diya he.. ab kuch nhi ho sakta.. Bye!

Here the call disconnects..

At reyansh's house 11:00 pm

R : NAHIII… mujhe kriya se hi shaadi karni he warna me shaadi nahi karungaaa….

He shouted at the top of his voice .. swayam looked at him shocked and said..

S : tu kahin gay to nahi? I mean kriya nhi mili to gay banjayega kya?

R : SHUT UPPP! Mujhe kriya chahiye.. mujhe kriya chahiye…

He shouted like a kid..

S : abbey kriya koi khilona nahi jo tune manga or mil gaya.. aunty ap ise samjhayen na..

He looked at Preeti who was just staring at rey's childish behavior..

P : emmm IDEA!..

She shouted to which rey sat straight and looked at his mom..

R : kya idea mom?

P : tumhen kriya chahiye na?

She asked grinning..

R : han ofcorse…

P : to… tu…. Use shaadi se bhaga le…

S : WHAT???? ..

Swayam flung out of the bed and stared at preeti with eyes widened…

S : aunty ye ap keh rahi hen? AP? Iski mom hoke ap ise ayse…

R : abbey chup saale ! meri maa he.. tujhe kya? Maa me abhi use bhaga k lata hun.. and he ran to the door..

S : saale pehle kapre tp pehen.. or ye koi asan kaam nhi.. wo uske boyguard wale cousins dekhe hen na.. yaar unki body dekh k hi dar lagta he.. pata nhi kis jungle se aye hen.. tukre tukre kar denge hamare…

Sh : NAHIII ! swayam agar tumhare tukre ho gaye to me kya tumhare tukron k sath shaadi karungi?? I cant adjust with them..

S : chup be ! tu to chup hi reh ! warna tere muh pe tape lagadunga.. yahan serious matter chal raha he or tujhe mazak ki parhi he?

Sh : SWAYAM ! tumne mujhe danta?? Uwaaahhh…

Sw : sorry sorry janeman ! meri itni himmat k me tumhen dantun!.. or rey.. For God's sake kapre pehen le.. ye boxers me wahan gaya na to kahin wo tujhe….

R : Nahi nahi ! pehnta hun pehenta hun..

He wore his jiggy pants and a white simple t-shirt…

R : ab kya? Please madad karna swayam.. tu mera bhai he na!

S : ufff ! acha sun mere pass aik plan he !

*Then they chalued their khusar phusar *

Mehndi Ceremony in kriya's House… evening 6:00 pm

Kriya is sitting in the centre of the hall and all girls are around her … teasing, talking and all.. she was sitting there with a straight face and was cursing rey..

K : saaala samajhta kya he apne ap ko? Mujhse pyaar kiya and meri shaadi bhi hone de raha he? Wo bhi is khusad k sath.. shakal dekhi he iski? Huh.. hayeee mera rey.. kitna hawt and sexy tha.. tha? Han kriya.. ab wo THA hi he.. Universji kuch kardo na..please…

Just then a girl in an orange saare appeared infront of her with a ghunghat..
Girl : Mem sahib.. upar ayen zara.. apke kapron pe spot.. ishhh mera mat daag lag gaya he.. ap chalen mere sath..

she dragged her to her room and closed the door and then locked it.. the girl sat on the bed and remove the ghonghat..

K : SHARON TUM?

Sh : abbey chup ! kisi ne sun liya to mujhe mar dalenge.. or swayam se shaadi karne se pehle me marna nahi chahti * dreaming *

K : oye madam.. swayam ko chor.. abhi mere bare me soch.. me kya karun?

S : mujhe kya pata.. wo to swayam or rey a kar batayenge..

K : kya matlab?

Same place 6:30 pm

Rey was trying to place the ladder at the right place and swayam was daying pehra so that no one can see what they were doing..

S : abbey ye kya he?

Swayam asked looking at the rope..

R : rasi or kya tujhe ye snake lag raha he?

S : nahi par ye rasi yahan kyun pari hui he?

R : ahista bol kamine..agar ab aik word bhi bola to isi rasi se tujhe latka dunga..

Rey was about to climb the ladder when swayam interrupted him..

S : ruk mere bhai.. dekh agar kuch bhi aysa waysa hua to siti mar dena..

R : tere baap ka nokar hun kya? Or siti marun ta k khud hi phas jaun…

S : abbey is liye nahi.. wo kay he na me tere ghar walon ko khabar kardunga k tera kriyakaram a kar yahin par karden.. ye na ho wo Sandh teri rakh bana den..

R : tu bakwas band kar or siri pakar..

S : han pakar raha hun.. par sun siti baja dena..

R : tu chup karega ya bajaun aik kan k neche?

S : acha acha ja.. lekin sun.. Siti baja dena..

R : dafa ho kamine..

He climbed the ladder and jumped in her room.. he looked at her and just saw him.. both ran and hugged eachother…

K : ab kya hoga?

R : tum mujhse pyar o karti ho na?

K : saale ye us waqt tujhe pochne ko yaad nahi aya jab kiss kar raha tha…

Sharon laughed hard on this and rey was embarrassed..

R : phir bhi.. tu sure to he na?

K : han han… pakka he..

R : baad me koi gadbad hui to?

K : to kuch nhi.. koyi naya dhundh lungi..

R : KYA?

K : hahaha apni shakal zara ayne me dekho..

R : acha abhi bhago gi yak al shaadi k din?

K : kal ziada acha rahega.. bhagne me maza bhi ayega..

Just then someone knocked the door..

K : rey jao yahan se.. kisi ne dekh liya to bohat bura haal hoga tumhara.. Bhagooo..

Rey jumped out of the window and climbed down the ladder…


Yeah Yeah

i knw its nt my style.. but still i tried hard to write it..

sorry for hindi mistakes.. i read it 2 times to check if i did any hindi mistake..

Lolz m hell bad at it..

So howz the concept ? and story?

plz sachi wali comment marna..

-Urs Devil..

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nj_SRKholic thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unresd..

lol 😆
wat d hell was dat..😆
🤣 🤣 🥳
jo bhi tha bada accha tha..
loved it.. m still laughing..!!

Edited by namratajadhav - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaj mera bad luck chal raha hai😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
res..

unresed...

🤣...
kya tha yeh...
but jo bhi tha bahut mast tha...
m still laughing...

K : saale ye us waqt tujhe pochne ko yaad nahi aya jab kiss kar raha tha'

hahaha... kya line boli hai kriya...wah wah..!!...
tussi to chaa gaye nimmi jii...
thnx for th pm...
Edited by eshachawla26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahahaha 🤣
it was mindblowing
just loved it
swayam,rey n sheron scene superb specially swayam's lines too good
sheron mein tumhare tukdon k sath adjust nhn kar sakti 🤣
kriyaansh scene damn funny
overall superb
plz update soon
Edited by kriyaansh4ever1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...
amazing concept🤣..
just loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
res😃😃
unres😆

oh god yeh kya hai nimz,,,,mera halat kharap ho gya has has ke🤣🤣

btw mast tha yr joh v tha,,,😆😆😆

damm yr i luv dis<3😃
tu itna fadu idea kahan se la sakti hai😆😆🤣
pura update padhne me mera reactn----🤣
ab plz nxt prt jaldi update kar😃

Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh god...
it was really fun filled OS
i really enjoyed..
awsm work...
update the next part..
lovd it...
thnx 4 the pm.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: namratajadhav

res

unresd..

lol 😆
wat d hell was dat..😆
🤣 🤣 🥳
jo bhi tha bada accha tha..
loved it.. m still laughing..!!

Lolz !!
i thought sabko ajeeb lagega !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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after dis...

m like dis muffin...

🤣 🤣
Edited by Born2Dance - 12 years ago

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