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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
geet is really stubborn😈
and rano is going to give birth to a boy toh phir pari kaise ayegi😕
do update soon
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PART 31

Geet kept crying all the time, she just wanted to see her papa once but now in vian they had trolled he r into the OT😡! The doctors shifted her to the OT table and spoke to her ' but Geet's eyes sprinkled 😳:P OMG wat did she just see ' Mohinder was standing across the main doors😉' Was she hallucinating🥱' Oh no' she wasn't mohinder was spkng to some Drs nd then finally sailed in J Hold her hands kissed her tight on her cheeks and left. Gee t gave her characteristic huge smile!😳

Te Dr told her to try smell the mask and count backwards from 5😕' at count of 3 she left her conscious and drifted to deep sleep😭, the surgery went around for 20 more mins and followed by Maan n the n finally Anni all were sucessfuly operated and then were sent back to their rooms! After a couple of hours the kids regained their senses😳! And it was Geet who was uncontrollable beyond doubts! She had thrown up herself twice and the anaestheia effect had kept her head heavy her muscles twitched in many ways and was surrounded by half a dozen ppl to keep her in control😡, Anni was silent after the surgery and maan was busy drooling over her twitching body😛!

Few hours went by and all kids retained their stable form! The Dr walked in and told the kids be fed with ice creams 😛n gave a list of food items to be adhered too, initially Geet was jumping to eat the icecreams but then the Dr continued whoever finishes 3 scoops first will get a chocolate Geet leaped and started eatin ice cream but to her misfortune she couldn't swallow she spit😭, she tried another time but same😭 ' she started crying finally unable to swallow😭, unfortunately Maan n Anni too had similar prob😭, the Dr then advised Rano n Beena that this was a post op effect ' nd it'll take time to heal they wont be able to eat anything but force them to eat, the sooner they learn to swallow the sooner the scars will heal in their throat😲! It would take a month for them to swallow normally.😡

Next started everyones mission to feed the kids😉, all of them would throw up Anni started crying wenevr anyone came near her to feed her😭, n Maan would get down d hospital bed n run away😆 , Geet would shut her eyes tight pretending to be asleep🥱. Things went on for couple of days , the kids started going weak. Next day they got discharged and their tantrums continued at home too😡' Nano finaly came up wit an idea ' Beta dekho whoever eats 1 apple first would get the Dadima's showpiece😳! Yiipe'. The kids had their heart over it since ages, it was Nano's granny's gift from her hubby😳! The antique piece was symbol of love the couple in that piece looked divine. Geet winked at her Nano to give her but no he was like learn to swallow first ll give u!😡

This trick finally worked ' all kids started eating bit by bit , a week passed and finally they started eating to some extent😆! All were happy but Geet was still struggling to eat , Maan had observed her. Ani was better in eating habits, Geet would puke out everytime she ate something! Finally Maan took up the job of feeding her😆 ' he would take her to the garden and tell her stories and feed her from his plate😉, listen to all her wails and tantrums😉. He too had a hard time nd to convince her started eating things she liked to give her company😉!!!

15 more days and yes Maan struggled to feed her but he had won the bet👏! He had started eating normally and astonished everyone by eating the apple without puking out👏! His recovery was first👏! Nano took the piece and handed it to him😳, Maan took it wrapped it and sneaked to Geet's room who was crying stuffing herself in the pillow😭 ' and extended his hands to her😳! She opened the box and hugged him tight ' Maan wat is this 😳? He went on I knew Geet u would never win this bet😡 and I know how much u loved this piece since a kid😳 ! So here it is for u😉! I didn't want Ani to get it so I got it for u😳 ''

PRECAP : GEET PARI finally!😭


NXXXTX PARTTT


Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i had tonsillitis problem during my childhood n when i was 11 i couldnt talk for 1 month ...n doc told that surgery was needed ...i was so happy to hear that coz i heard that after surgery they gives so mch ice creams cold fruit juices etc ...i was just jumping even wth my illness ...bt alas i was cured by just medicines ...nw i hav not that prob nymore...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
omg dat was so sad dat little kids had to suffer so much pain
bt maan recovered first and he gave his gift to geet so sweet
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow lovely update.. oh god hearing eating maan is running geet pretend to sleep and ani crying im laughing for tat scenes imagining them.. atlast my maan won te bet and gav his geet te piece..i love te update so much dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 31
awesome...
God this Geet is too much...
and only Maan can control her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow story plz update soon
it's an amazing story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww it was sad to c da kids suffer...
nd maan handeling geet verywll...
lolz maan won dn gifted to geet...
so sweet

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