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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet he took complete care of her
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awesome and really good part..
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superb ff
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yES GUYSSS UPDAtedd JAB WE MET! after almost 2 monthss... :) 🤣 next updating LVE!




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Posted: 12 years ago
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you are an awesome writer ! what way to describe baby maan and geet ... their closeness... how he drools over her, his polio attack, how she just wants him to be beside her but always unkowingly hurting each other ! geet agrees to go for surgery if and only if maan accompaines her... thought she wanted him to be beside her... but no... she wants him also to get operated... really, don't know how i missed your stories till now ! read jab we met yesterday and just jumped to read this one... will wait for the updates...and yes going to read your other stories too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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To all *Kaan pakaad ke sorry*😳

Absconded IF due to examsss but yes little active for last 2 weeks giving Os for COTW!! 😆

Hope u all read them!😉

Now back into action, will give updates every alternate day for LVE n Jab We Met! Will be starting a new FF - concept is abt Court Trail n Medical Negligence by Dr.MK how his case unfolds n how guilty he is proved n so on.😭... hope u ppl will suppor t me once again into this new FF!! Would love to see u all there too!

PM's will be only on weekends after 4 updates combined :P add FFpmLIST if u want pm's 😳


N guys me starting new FF...


plzzz do read n gimme ur feedback.. its a differnt concept! n i hope u ppl will encourage me :)))


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MY OTHER FF 😊😊😊


LOVE VS EGO - AT ALTAR OF SACRIFICE

LINKSSS TO THREAD 1...



LINNKS TO THREAD 2...





LINKS TO THREAD 3...





nd my other FF -


JAB WE MET



Do see this

😳😳LINK OF MY FF DISCUSSION THREAD OPENED BY MAANEETMAAHI 😳😳











Guysss its gotta be a very short update😭...plzzz sorry! there is power failure now!! n i lost all that i had typed.😭.. so typing only 3 para, so that i get the flow! next updates on will be biggg!!!!😳



PART 32


15 more days and yes Maan struggled to feed her but he had won the bet😳! He had started eating normally and astonished everyone by eating the apple without puking out! His recovery was first! Nano took the piece and handed it to him, Maan took it wrapped it and sneaked to Geet's room who was crying stuffing herself in the pillow 😡' and extended his hands to her! She opened the box and hugged him tight 😡' Maan wat is this😲 ? He went on I knew Geet u would never win this bet and I know how much u loved this piece since a kid ☺️! So here it is for u!☺️ I didn't want Ani to get it so I got it for u ''😈

Geet was immensely happy😳, she hugged him tight🤗. That Crystal masterpiece was the apple of her eyes since long time n Maan had won it for her☺️! The pure innocent love of Childhoosh somewhere gets corrupt when we shed our childhood n enter into adulthood. Fate plays cruel games only to see if we can withstand all turmoils in every relation but alas life is unjust at times🤢. Happy Ending are dreams only in fairy tales, these kids were unaware of the harsh reality of life!🤢

A couple of days passed, Wen Rano mama had her labour pains, she had been very excited and the pain was were a mockery she felt as she was going to deliver her second joy! 😆Geet had stayed back n Beena Mohinder accompanied Rano to hospital😉' It was late past midnight when they all finally heard the chirps of the new born🤣!!!! Oh yess It was a Baby girl unlike as previously thought of a boy🥱! Rano had delivered another Princess😲'. Mohinder carried the tiny baby n spoke into her ears my princess Pari😳!!!!!

It was a joyous moments at Handa's n Rathore's the baby was born😳!!! Early Morning Geet was given the good news, n she kept jumpin out of joy😳! She was waiting for Maan n Anni to accompany her to the hospital' As Maan had come she hugged him tight,🤗'. Maan me became Didi🤪'. Can u imagine!🤪! Maan gave a cheesy smile' Oh yess Geet.. u r biggy didi now!!!! Geet flaunted off being an elder sibling n kept nihrofying at her looks as she wanted to look preety while going to meet her Pari🤣' Maan had been staring seated in her bed❤️'. His gazed fixed to the mirror at the corner,. The acute angle his eyesight made collaborated with the image that stood in front of the mirror , the image of a Princess clad in Pink trying to look smart!!! Maan kept smiling!

Kids smile for no reason n once they grow up😳,. They smile at no reasons🤢!! That is when the smiles leave your solitude n shades of illusion fill urself!!!🤢

PRECAP : GEET SAddd 😡n unhappyyy😡

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Edited by ainaGURTI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
You know why I always go for childhood stories,they give an undiluted joy,without strains.
How cutely Maan gifted his prize to Geet and d hugs are d cutest.
And to add to the cuteness quotient we have d new born pari.so sweet.

Loved d update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved da Update...superb
waiting for next..continue soon
thank u for Pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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short but cute ! maan gifting away his price to geet saying he won it for her shows his selfless love for her. now, we got pari's entry in our story. but , why is geet saddd and angry ? is it because of pari...

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