Despair-Its always darkest...update page 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Anila-

🥳Welcome Back🥳 DI...🤗🤗🤗

n Congratulations for ur new ff...🤗

Gosh!!!!!!! what was that!!!!
i just loved it to d coreee ya...
i mean it seemed so promising that too from its very 1st post...
loved the prologue...
seemed something fresh n for sure Captivating...
n as u know m alwaysss in for ur stories.😉
srsly!!! loved the Title n the prologue to d coreee
loved it lodsss
waiting eagerly to read the 1st part...
Continue super soon plzzz
i want an update in Every week for sure plzzz 😔
love u lodsss DI 🤗🤗🤗

ps: n where is my "Mirror" update????



ani...thanks jani for liking this much🤗 always good to c such excited readers who will appreciate anything from you😆 love ya so much😳
and about updates..I'll try to manage..lets c

Mirror is on halt for sometime due to some reason..plz be patient...It will take time to update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Maria.

Congratsss dear for starting MN FF🤗

really very interesting concept..i liked the prolougue and it has increased my expectations..i hope we would get to read a wonderful story..
Continue soon.
P.S...just a request..this time don't feel hesitant to write romance,would love to read flawless romance and some passionate moments in this FF as its seems intense.:)


lol ok dear..will write intense scenes that would increase ur heatbeats😆
thanks maria for liking the concept...will update this FF soon,I hope😊
thanks so much🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: shafyyy

You made me in deep thinking Ruchi...


I am sort.. of loving the concept...

nice...
seems very interesting...

loved to read it..
waiting for the first part..
waiting for the story to begin


Thanks dear...I'll update tonight..hope that u will like first part
as much as u liked concept😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Faria.

Oye hoyeee
ruchu janu-a new MN storyyy

ye ye ye i mvery happy sweetyyy
i loved ur starting
wow this story seems really very promising and interesting...
oye jo bhi ho at d end i want MN together-baas aut kuch nehi chaiye mujhe...

aur ha do update MIRROR part soon.yaad hai u stoped at crucial part.


btw ruhi thanx 4 commenting on my OS...LOL LOL LOL



thank u thank u faru...han..MN will be together in the d end..khush😆
aur sorry hai ji..I'll read and comment soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

congos 4 u new MN ff darling🥳
woah... seems a intense concept...
shud i get ready wi loads of tissues?😆
wud luv 2 read more... luv ya!🤗


lol...na na itna intense bi nahi hai😆
thanks for liking it...love ya🤗

Originally posted by: premana

concept is very very very interesting.plz continue and keep me pm


thanks dear😊

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Oky its not even a question tht u shouldnt cont this...

firstly the concept is one i felt like avoiding going around... but still love to read.. it makes me feel.. and cuming it from ur pen will be amzing

congrats on new ff...

and hope to see its update soon


thanks di...its so sweet of u...will update soon.
love ya🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

very nice concept. waiting for it.


Originally posted by: ridzzi

nice concept...
seems very intresting...
life's entangled b/w love n fate...super intresting...
do continue soon...n thanks for the pm...
luv u... :-)

n one more thing plz update your rest FF's also...plz...
bye... :-)


Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

Congratz on starting new ff Ruchi!Wow...amazing concept!

loved the intro...really interesting
i'd love to read this ff
continue soon and kindly add me to the pm list 😊


Thanks so much..glad to c that u all liked the concept🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Congrats...
Waiting 4 update.


Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Oh CONGRATS dii fr starting a new one...
Concept is wat making me want to read more...Loved it...
So u hav to cont ok...:D


Thnks so much..will update supper soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

intersting ...updt sooon


Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--


Congrats for new FF ..
Loved d concept..
Cont. Soon :)


Originally posted by: gopi06

congrats for your new MN ff
interesting concept
cont soon
thanks for the pm



Thanks so much..will cont soon.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: arti_17

interesting concept...im waiting 4 it 2 start😃


Originally posted by: kirti123

nice concept

continue soon


Originally posted by: preethis

welcome back and please continue and PM me when u update...


Thanks so much...glad that u all liked the concept😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Thanks so much for your responses...replied to u all.😊

And about other FFs updates,I will update them soon...I am writing their updates too.

Chapter-1

Breathing!


Sometimes I just keep sitting here and like to watch sun setting down...this place is very calm...far from the town...sitting here and watching sun has become my habit...it initiates a whirl within me... Life has different dimensions and for for each dimension there are infinite ways..which way to choose is up to you...then why d hell you need to justify thing...why to ask such questions to urself...Am I doing right???can I justify it???

I know that I left him in hell forever...I know that he can live without me but then it would be mere breathing just like I do...!I breath,I work,I talk to people,I eat,I sleep..I do all things that normal people do BUT I don't live...!Who can live without a soul??And you know that...you know Mr.Mayank sharma that you are my soul...I love you and will be loving you till my last breath...BUT..!!!

I know that whenever I come here and sit like that,these questions arise in my mind..but then I can't help it...!Thinking about you in anyways gives my heart a comfort...I want to do it forever...how good it be if I can do it..but..!!!

Its getting dark here...I will go back to home...I took my purse and went to car...and drove it to that place.


"Nupur...!"

As expected Mom and her questions...uff not again..I gave her a pathetic look..she could'nt open her mouth...I directly went to my room and shut the door.

From past 2 years I am running from everything like that...people say that escaping from problems don give any solution..but for me facing problem is possible only by escaping it.


Unconciously my hands took my mobile and explored gallery...swiping on each photo untill 'his' appeared...awww...he looks cute while smiling...but why are you smiling???how cruel are you...I hate you..I just hate you...!!!

"But I love you..."whisper escaped from my mouth while eyes were teary...I buried my face in pillow.

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3 years before(Past)

"Nupur!you are looking gorgeous.."said Diya my business partner and my only friend in this not so friendly corporate world.

"You too!"I smiled back.

We were gathered here in a page 3 party...saturday nights I usually spend attending these parties so that I can make contacts and discuss new projects.It is the best way to get into new venture and make profitable business..after all big business persons are invited in these type of parties...moreover you can meet celebrities of film industries and open a talk for endorsement of your product...if nothing as such happenes then you would get to have a snap with them for sure which would publish in next edition!

I love these parties...not because I can do some good for Bhushan Corp. but because if my luck works then I would get a glimpse of him...

I was looking everywhere...if he was there in the party or not...

"Hello Ms.Bhushan!"

I turned back...Ohh Mr.Nath,the oldest member of this fraternity...

"Hi Mr.Nath..how are you doing?"I gave a fake smile.Making him happy would somewhere give benefit to my business.

"I am doing great...by the way congratulations..."

"Ohh thanks Mr.Nath..."I smiled more broadly.

"Its amazing that a girl like you in such a young age won 'Business person of the year'"he said as if he was very happy for me but his tone was saying like,'Beware Girl!next time I'll snatch that from you!!!'


"Ohh Mr.Nath...I have learned everything from some great businessmans like you..."I flattered him.

"O'comom this is absolutely ur own talent.."he said so but his blushing cheeks accepted that my flattery worked.


"Man!!! u r gone now..."I said to myself enjoying my smartness,just then I felt something...suddenly my heart beats became fast...I felt that everything became so calm,so silent...I felt that my weight had been reduced and I had become so light that I could fly in sky...

I knew what was that...it was the indication of 'his' presence arround me...whenever he comes my heart gives me these signals...What a filmy entry!!!

"Hello Mr.Nath!" his stiff voice colloided to my eardrum and I came back in reality.

I raised my eyes towards him...O Man!!! killing !!!handsom!!!I could'nt control my heartbeats,my blush,my eyes to not to gaze him...

That how he was...no girl could ever escaped from his charm...his intense gaze...ufff...!!!

"Don't kill me..."My heart said.

Pretending to be normal,I said" I am just coming Mr.Nath..."

"Wait Ms.Bhushan..let me introduce you to my new business partner,Mr.Mayank Sharma.."he said moving his hands to him.

I looked at him from the corner of my eyes,controlling my blushes I said "Who does'nt know him...'The Mayank Sharma' MD of 'Sharma textiles'


He smiled...O Man..Why??? you know whenver u smile,its hard to control...its public place otherwise I would have kissed you!!!


"Congratulations Ms.Bhushan"he said

"Thanks" and I blushed!!!
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