Taarey SS: Love and Dance ~Complete~ - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awww aswum sanju... Loved it.. Update soon xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: iamursforever

omg loved it:))))

u know...i was waiting for u to write a new story:)))))
srsly loved it:)))
thnkz for the pm:)
continue soon>>!!!


😳😳 thanks so much dear 😳😳
im glad u all didn't forget about me 😆😆
thanks so much dear will continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SwaRon_Dreams

Superb,basically i m swaron fan but for the first time i loved something on tarey..even thogh i like tarey tooo alot... it's a request chotuu sa thora iske andar swaron bhi add kardo...pleshhh =))))))))

update soon and PM me.. 😊


omg your comment has made my day!!! u dnt know how much im smiling right now 😃😃
thank you sooo much!
its seriously so nice to meet a swaron fan who isn't anti taarey 😳😳
of course swaron will be in it 😳😳😳 i love swaron too much to not add them in 😳
seriously thank you so much im literally so happy right now
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sanyogitarathor

wow! that was very nice concept and amazingly written. 👏 do continue soon!


thanks so much dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Sara_Taarey22

SANJU IS BACK WITH HER CREATIVITY!!! Ufff WAT to say !!! To the rani of FF SS OS!! WAT a concept !!jai HO SANJU KI jai HO SANJU KI !!! WAT concept !! U r our true CVs of our AT !! SOO creative YAAR!! I wish Yeh show mein bhi HO ! I wish !!! PLZ PALKIMA'AM ma'am iss SANJU KO IK CVs MEMBER BANADO !!! PLZZZ!!! N u better continue fast as I can't wait!!!


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ur comments always make me blush sara
i wish cvs mujhe cvs member banaye i would make the best close taarey and swaron scenes
waise tum bhi kuch kam nahi hoon i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE ur ff 😳😳😳
thanks so much sara will continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Hardika

nice yar plz do continue.


thanks so much hardika 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: blue_cherub

sanju .🤗,.,another ss😛

so cute and awesum😳 TaaRey fall swayum and taani😉 and exciting precap update soon


thanks so much christy 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
hey guys thanks so much for the overwhelming response for this ss 🤗 im soo sorry to those who i could not reply to b/c of spam warning 😭 So instead i wanna say thank you to: nana-raee, abcdesigirl93, Div_taarey, nadia di, chand91, sharaftasnim, nikita, pooja, virmanfanprema, aaishu, pari, katiek12, suhu, and ayesha 🤗

Hope ya'll like this part 😳😳😳😳

Part 2:

The entire gang was at rehearsal hall pacing around wondering what to do.

"Yeh AVP uss shirritating ki girlfriend lagti hai yaar jab dekho dono milke shirritating harkat karte hain." Nil said making everyone else snicker.

"Actually you are right this time Nilesh." Simi said laughing even more.

Swayam was supposed to be concentrating but his eyes only could grasp one thing, Sharon, and how beautiful she looked in the dress he got her after dance camp. He smiled remembering how he surprised her and her blush and smile when she saw the gorgeous pink dress.

Sharon who was pacing around stopped to see Swayam staring at her. She smiled back sweetly and turned around not wanting anyone to see her blush.

Rey was waiting for Taani to come, they all had left together, but Taani had to go with Shivam, their GS, to write the dance camp report. Rey looked over at Swayam and did a double take to see him smiling widely at Sharon.

"Arey Swayam, why you're smiling so much?" Rey asked loud on purpose getting the attention of everyone.

"Aye haye Sharon ka majnu!" Simi said as they all laughed.

"Okay now guys we have to get back to figuring out what to do." Sharon said trying to get the attention off of her.

"Of course Sharon you'll say this to get the attention off of your one and only Swayam." Rey said changing his voice to sound like a high pitched girl. The gang laughed.

Sharon saw Taani come in and secretly thanked the gods. "Look Taani's here." Sharon said successfully averting the attention off of her and Swayam.

"Hi guys sorry I'm late, woh Shivam was well being Shivam." She said as an explanation.

"Good you're here Taani, we're all trying to figure out what to do with VP's proposition." Simi said grabbing Taani's arm and dragging her off to the group of girls.

Rey watched helplessly as Simi dragged Taani off pouting in the corner. He wanted to be the one to talk to Taani.

"Rey, you know agar tum Taani se kuch baat karna chaho then we'll arrange it." Nil said with a wide grin as the four guys excluding Swayam were starting to see the sparks fly between Taarey.

Soon enough they were all pacing around trying to figure out what to do.

"Kya kare ab, we only have one month to make someone match up to our level." Nil said as they all sat around the rehearsal hall.

"Yeah Rey, in one month who can we trust enough to teach dance?" Sharon said. "How do we know that person won't just leave in the middle?" Sharon paced around.

"Kitni problems hai. Aur haan Taani don't think we forgot that you are going to explain about Shivam's fake relationship." Swayam said giving a knowing look to his sister.

"Taani!" Rini said a light bulb going off in her head. Simi looked at her confused but then looked at Taani and a light bulb went off in her head too. Soon the entire gang realized what Rini was saying and they were all grinning widely at Taani.

"Aap sab mujhe iss tarah kyun dekh rahe hoon?" Taani asked feeling a little nervous with her friends giving her big, goofy grins.

"Taani, YOUR PERFECT!" Neha squealed hugging her.

Taani still confused looked around at her friend's excited faces. "Kyun?" She asked confused.

"Of course Taani was training with Rey before to become our sixth dancer so she should just resume her training." Rini said.

"What?" Taani asked not believing it, they wanted her to dance, even after the whole disaster she had caused before.

"Exactly and Rey is the perfect teacher he can train her again." Vicky added in getting the approval of the guys.

"Nahi Sharon and the girls will teach her, we don't need you boys to be acting weird and scaring Taani off." Simi said in response.

"No I'll teach Taani she'll be most comfortable with me." Rey said without thinking.

"What kyun?" Rini asked as the guys started making noises in the back.

"Why, because, because, because," Rey thought as he responded quickly, "Because I trained her before and I worked with her as GS so I'm the closest friend and trainer she has." He said proud of his statement.

"Well Taani shares a special bond with us girls." Sharon said latching onto Taani's hand.

"But guys how can I be the one you train?" Taani finally was able to speak.

"Taani tum beech mein mat bolo." Both Rey and Sharon said latching onto Taani's arms.

"I'll teach Taani." Rey said pulling Taani towards him. Taani stumbled into Rey as they got pulled into an eyelock. Rey could feel Taani's heartbeat quicken and could feel his own match up to her pace.

"No I'll teach Taani." Sharon said pulling Taani towards her. Soon enough it had become tug of war between guys and girls.

"Boys!" Swayam yelled along with his group as they pulled Taani who was protesting that her arms hurt.

"Girls!" The girls yelled pulling Taani towards them.

"ENOUGH!" Taani yelled causing both sides to drop her arms. "Aap sab paanch saal ki bache hain?" She asked, "My arms feel like they are about to fall off. And no one answered my question how am I the perfect one to train when I can't even dance." She said her hands on her hips as she looked at the entire gang.

"Taani, you were already good before, now all we need to do is perfect your dance. You have grace and all we have to do is squeeze it in the right direction. C'mon Taani you are perfect for this." Sharon said.

"Please Taani." The girls said. "Please Taani please do this for us." The boys said dramatically as they got on their knees and crawled towards Taani.

Taani yelped seeing the boys crawl towards her and fell back against Rey who broke her fall. She looked up into his eyes and smiled.

"Chemistry." Bharat said only to cough it off at Swayam and Rey's questioning looks.

"Okay." Taani said agreeing making the entire gang yell and enclose her into a tight group hug.

"I'l be your teacher Taani." Sharon whispered.

Rey overhearing said, "No i'll be."

"Hey krishnaji there is only one way to settle this." Taani said getting a serious look.

Before Taani could say anything Rey grabbed Taani's hand and pulled her yelling, "Too slow Sharon you lose I'm teaching her" running out of rehearsal hall.

"Rey!" Sharon yelled laughing as Rey came back. Rey smiled noticing that Taani hadn't dropped his hand and they were still walking hand in hand.

"Acha thik hai whoever it is, Taani needs to start training asap." Sharon said.

"Well abhi besides Taani and Rey we all have class so we'll get to class and Rey and Taani can start training." Swayam said. "And after we'll meet at my place as we have a lot to discuss from Shivam to mission prevent dance ban." Swayam said as everyone dispersed.

Precap: Taarey rehearsal
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me the first

wow sanju🤗 nils dialogues and the boys teasing TaaRey😳🤣 awesum update.,😃 loved the rey sharon fighting to teach taani.,,omg rey😳 cute cute😳 precap excited😆☺️
Edited by blue_cherub - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
yaar ur writhing is really good in the way it expresses the atmosphere
of the characters
so pls continue it and pls add me to u pm list
can't wait to read more
xx :)

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