OS: Arnavji can't do this to me

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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

That was really good!!

I loved the trust that Khushi had!! <3

And i loved that u mentioned her diary!! :D

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Aah Rimajee,

Hope to see this on the show.

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva
That was really good!!

I loved the trust that Khushi had!! <3

And i loved that u mentioned her diary!! :D

CVs forget such stuff

we remeber

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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hi rima dii woow sis its ossawm beautiful u worte thz very welll love it dear brillent rima diii,,, 👏 👏

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Amen.

I am sure this is what will follow in the serial too. Though the love making would be a bit longer. We would have a honeymoon track! 😉

Beautiful OS Rima! :)

PS: Yeah. I am obsessed about their honeymoon now. This beautiful couple just DON'T get time for themselves.

PPS: Loved your OS.

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fun_games

@fun_games

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Oh I so so wish this happens👏

Wonderful writing Rima👍🏼

I had tears in my eyes.

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DushtKanya

@DushtKanya

Alumni

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

That was amazing! Superb!! <3

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Good one. You proved them as perfect couple.

Trust will never comes easily unless they love eachother immensely. and they deserve each others trust and love. Very nicely written mate.

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Mani.raizada
Res...
I ll read it n come back dear
FANTASTIC, OUT STANDINGLY EXCELLENT dear...the line "the day u leave me I die "👏👏...superb ...!!!!at last u made sheetal a positive character...too good yaar...!!!!!! Loved ur OS a lllooottt...!!!!! I want the same to happen ...!!!

thanks buddy

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rima

@rima

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Ni1234
Amazing...Just Amazing...:)

I loved it completely...:)

'Never let go till the day I die'because the day you leave me I die'

- Awesomeness...

thanks nishu

i am searching for my hppiness in this show thru stories because the current track is making me a litle nervous