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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Awesome update
Swayam's aunt is ahh no words i guess in that case i pity rey
I really liked how swaron getting close even they r not talking to each other but still some they connect to each other.Good to see swayam's cold behaviour affect her
So the promo part is coming kriyansh kiss
I think next part will be full of drama
Waiting for next part

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

sorry yar for not commenting on ur last update i was little busy.but it was written beautifully.superb yar.thnx for the pm.

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Mihika sweetie, it is awesome re.😳 Sheesh rey is a limit, when he is in a relation at least he should know to keep the limits. Well sach kahu I dont mind, I want SwaRon to be together fasttt😆

Well towards the update, A splendid one! Every part of the update was superb, the reyam and aunty chat and dadi ka intervension is just lovely. It was funny too, yaar you have a flair for real swell wriitng.👍🏼 But obviously the part where i loved was where both Swayam and sharon entered togather and were smitten by each other They would def make a deadly combo. You have described everything so well dear that i could visualize the whole thing as if i was watching on tv.Mihika yaar you have taken into consideration even the smallest details. Loved it so much❤️ and waiting eagerly for the next update...

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Owh God, Swayam's Aunty is such a fake and I hope Rey sees that soon !! I'm happy though that Rey was able to convince the aunty to let Swayam come for the party !! Love how Swayam feels odd seeing Rey hug Sharon and Sharon feels disappointed when Swayam continues with his care a damn attitude around her !! I wonder what Sharon is going to do to Rey now after seeing Kria kiss him on the cheek and also waiting to see how Swayam is going to help out in all this !!

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Amazing update!!😃

U potrayed Swayam's aunt character as a two-faced person very well.

I loved how Swayam's dadi was making fun of his aunt😆

So finally Swayam and Sharon have realised that they have feelings for each other..Yayy!!

And Swayam looking at Sharon and admiring her..Wow😳❤️

Poor Sharon..Kriya really did cross her limits this time😕

I hope Sharon breaks up with Rey and Swayam comforts her😊

Very sweet update. Thanks for the PM.

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

amazing update...

thanks for the pm...

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

huh kria kk charcter😭 kaafi chang hai plzz usa jara chang karo m DOn't lik this kria yaar plz😭

its irrited😡

plz chang n do as kria yaar 😉 plzz

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

bakki toh nyc update 👏👏 but kria

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

superb update

loved reading it

thnkx for pm

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Fab update Mihika. How much ever evil it may sound but I really want Sharon's and Rey's break-up.😆 Its been a habit to see or read about them as best friends and Swayam and Sharon as together sans third wheel. So yeah bring it on😎

Edited by Rutu - 12 years ago