SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22)

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..Fazza..

@..Fazza..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Yet Again A Great And A IMMPECABLE Writing!

Kiya Dear You Should Write More And More. I Really Enjoy Readimg Your Penned Words! Stay Blessed :)

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

I liked this update compared to the previous parts. The start itself had my eyes glued to it. Sharon is struggling to get over Swayam on one side but again she ends up thinking more about him. The way Rey and Swayam landed up at the engagement and to add up with Swayam getting baffled after reading the board reminds me its such a small world!! The hairstyle talk metaphorically gave us a message.Each and every minutest details mentioned then in the update were really fascinating, giving me a picturesque version of the same. Coming to the title, suddenly a thought walked past my mind that maybe she is suffering from some kind of ailment that made her cut strings from everyone especially Swayam.Just my perception cause reading few lines in this part gave me that feeling.

Waiting for the next part😃

Edited by Rutu - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

awosm part huuh chal confution toh hataaa

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Amazzingg update!!😃

Love the way you expressed SwaRon's love cum hatred towards each other😊

Thanks for the pm😉

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Sorry for late comment.I was a lil busy.Studies n all...:(
I feel relieved after reading this update.Finally swayam know that karan is sharon's cousin.The dance they shared was amazing.No doubt they always create magic together..:).Their fights said it all they truly care for each other.Last part was beautifully written
Waiting for next part eagerly...

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

The update was briliant. I m left speechless!! I just absolutely loved the dance portion, and the hair bit. It was like he was still depending on her for his decisions, showing how much he still cares for her. Please do update soon and please do PM me again when you do!

PS: good luck for your exams!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

And I am left speechless again. I have not told you this before but I wanna say that there is oemthing magical the way you write, there is a certain charm that one reading in it is totally hooked in the story and is completely bewitched by the emotions of the character. Its something incredible. Even though I would have like dto know complete backstory but still whatever you explained in it was awesomely penned. Her POV's in the begining and then the dance portion followed by the her conversation with Swayam everything was emotionally rich. It was penned fabulously. Similarly Swayam's state of heart was fully justified. And the last part where his conversation with Sharon is penned was just awesome. Can't wait to read further. Update soon.

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Shona_Mayur

@Shona_Mayur

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: act12
Replies for Chapter 2:

@Shona - I know right? lol. I really am fired up to finish this one. That's my resolution for now lol

Haha I am glad for your resolution! You better finish this one! I would be soo disappointed if you didn't. Btw this doesn't mean that this is it alright? You need to finish your other works too lol

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

hope to get an update on this

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Hey Jiya, sorry for a very late response, I read two updates together...excellent buildup to the whole situation... both the viewpoints justified themselves, but sumhow they were very subjective POVs, neither seemed to want to explore any other possibilities as to each other's reactions...yea time gives u the harshest of wounds and it can also be teh greatest healer...very very well-described emotional turnmoil...luking up to how u plan to culminate the tale...