SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22)

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jiya

@act12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon
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PS:I didn't receive a PM regarding the update.

My apologies. I am doing my research paper as it is due online so I wasn't able to send out PMs to anyone yet. I will send it out a little late this time. 😭

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Hey Jiya...🤗

As always...fab update...i LOVED this chapter...their pain...the insecurities...confusions...the love...beautifully penned down by you...i loved the part where rey tried to give him a look change and he was not ready to let go the old hair style as he had fond memories with her and his hair...

He absolutely adored her flustered expression when he would suddenly wake up while she was still very near to him. It was as if she had been caught while committing a forbidden act. And the truth was that it was. He would never let anyone else touch his hair, but she was an exception. Heck, if he had to become a caveman just so she would come near him, then he would because her one smile was enough for him.

Her dance and his effect on her...she danced with out breaking eye contact with him...she was about to hit the ground n he held her...like always...loved their confrontation in the medical room...like karan's part as welll...his one word cleared all his doubts or increased it...it had an effect...his cold voice...his taunt...

"You're right! You don't need the nurse! You don't need anyone! Just like you never needed me right? Because you are the great Sharon Rai Prakash who can do whatever she wants right? The great girl who can walk away from any commitments because she feels like it!"

I visualized the whole episode..u r fabulous jiya...keep writing...will b waiting for ur update...

ps- all the best for ur exams

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

res..will edit later in the night...

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This was beautifully penned update jiya...

the pain that sharon is going through after facing swayam's cold behavior was amazingly penned...

swayam's emotions were brought out very well...

Finally you have cleared swayam's misunderstanding and u have done it in a beautiful way...could understand their cold/angry behavior, with the words that you chose... well penned part...karan's part was nicely put too...

you have really penned all the emotions and feeling really well...

waiting to read how they clear things between each other and the reason that made sharon leave...

do try to update soon...

---rosh/shaani----

Edited by shaani2209 - 12 years ago

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Update in between u r exams please

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

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I loved loved loved the update!!! I could not find any loophole in the whole update !! be it the emotion or their helplessness !!!! emotions properly put down!!

I could feel the pain swayam and sharon are going through! You explain it so well that I can actually visualise TANHA enacting it in my mind !!👏

Loved the karan's character who tried to help are face the past to come out of her insecuriteis without even knowing what actually happened to her !😊

Eagerly waiting for the next update !

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

It was beautifully penned down all the emotions and feelings they went through because of their sadness...
It boggles my mind to read about such things about SwaRon.. Where their mind orders them to forget about each other and never ever think again about being together but at the same time their heart has just to say once and their hearts are for each other forever...
And Good to know that now finally Swayam knows that its not Sharon who is engaged to Karan...

Lots of Love,
Manasi.

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: act12

My apologies. I am doing my research paper as it is due online so I wasn't able to send out PMs to anyone yet. I will send it out a little late this time. 😭

its okay this time. mind sending me PM the next time.😳

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Jiya, it is a longgg update but yaar it is truly so very mesmerising and enchanting as swaron👏 You are really a very cool writer. How vividly you have described everything The bit where swayam helps sharon on the stage is my favo part. I read that part manytimes😳 SwaRon❤️ Wow jiya you are absolutely fantastic. So glad that you hve started writing FFs for us on IF, and it was a treat reading your update. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.