New OS: Always Missing You

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

congrats u scared me i thought khushi was dead amazing os loved it

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Hope

@Hope

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Congratulations on your 10000th post. Loved the OS. It was very awesome.

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

you almost gave me a heart attack,

i thought khushi was dead, i'm glad she isn't

cute OS

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

I knew! I knew!

I knew you cannot write something sad when you are celebrating. I was sure she was just away but you still scared me to death when he told Arshi why they cant phone her!!!

Beautifully written as always! :)

And congratulation on the promotion! 😆 keep sizzling! 😊

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

WOW...really well written... i thought at first that kushi is dead and then the ending..she was just gone with her parents... it was such a relief...

awesome OS

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Nicely written.. I just read Risha's OS before this and it had a sad ending.. While reading yours, I thought this might end up like that as well. but Im glad she had just gone away for a camp.. I had an idea when u mentioned 3 weeks, the family eating golgappas and a new bahu.. 😆