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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

What the...

that was beautifully written...usually i avoid reading sad stories!!! so as I started reading this one I was cursing myself!!!!

but when i reached the end I was grinning like a fool...

Take bow dear for this amazingly written work👏

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

I was sad for Arnavji when reading this lol but turns out he had his Khushi all along... she jus took a break from her dutiful roles for 3 weeks lol
btw congrats - ur name looks awesome in pink.:)

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

i dont feel lyk congrtulatin u..i feel lyk hittin u hard wid sumthin..n m seriously serious..i cnt tell u hw much i cried readin dis piece of stry,.sach me..m still cryin..hw cud u write dt?y did u try 2 prv dt u cn actually prtry wht i dun wanna mntn..u almst tuk my lyf..i was sobbin..thruout..evn afta her rtrn..huh i thot she died.. dey had a baby grl.. Arnav was gettin married 2 sum1 else.. evry1 tryin 2 make Arnav happy.. Arshi missin her mom.. u wntd 2 prov all d above/..?ryt?i believed dt....bt wen Khushi retrnd..i was lyk no..it myt b n imaginatn or d grl whom Arnav z marryin..thot lyk givin u sum scoldins seriously..thot shud escape..bt sochaa stp cryin n read..dn Ayurvdic cntr..Baujii..ntwrk...strs n a vase..i seriously feel lyk hittin u wid a vase..:/:/btfl OS..:)i wrote alot..which i thot wont b able 2 ..juz OSsum,,(i wont cngrtulate)

Edited by reallyhappy - 13 years ago

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Omg I got scared for a minute there
That was an awesome piece of writing

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Tashuuu where the helll are youu??? 😳

Havent talked to you in day :(

Coming to the OS, you just gave me a heart attack!

I thought she had died or something 😡

But thankfully, you saved yourself from my chappals by not letting her die 😎

The OS was just lovely though.

Beautifully writtennn 😳

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Nice i knew it from the start that she has gone to some place!

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

god u gave me a heartbreak in the beginning. really thought kushi is no more.

but it was a nice os.

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

wow you really know how to get the readers hooked into your story😆, I actually thought of the worst thing ever and it turned out to be such a little thing glad it was though😊.. awesome OS.

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EvrydayIRabbaVe

@evrydayirabbave

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

omg! dude! do u have any idea what happened to me?! i cried! ithought she was dead! dude, don't ever do that agin! nah, im just playing but i loved your os! 😉 😊