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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

oey sinking ship saved and reached the shore...nice

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samaira25

@samaira25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

You scared me girl!! 😆
I thought khushi was dead and was getting emotional 😛
Main ekdum emotions main dub gayi thi 😭
But when you mentioned khushi going to ayurvedic camp I was like What the?! Mujhe ullu bana diya 😛

But seriously girl! I just loved your work
Beautifully written 😊

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

this is not fair tashu.. u really scared me out of my wits.

i thought that khushi was no more in this world..😭😭.. and i started crying..

she was in some ayurvedic camp.. ahhh.. what a twist yaar.. anyways loved it. thankgod. she kept her promise that she will never leave arnav.

congrats on becoming sizzler..👏🤗

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Omg, you had me thinking that Khushi was dead! Great OS!

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome OS...What a twist...what I thought when I started reading and how it ended was very drastic...loved it...Thanks for the PM

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

The ending was a pleasant surprise!

Beautifully written!

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

ROFL I thought shez no more and it broke my heart..thnx for glueing it back again !!

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panck

@panck

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow I thought she was dead...

Great job, so glad she was at an Ayuvedic camp for her dad

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

OMG wow what a twist you added but a LOVELY one lol

I thought she had died and that Arnav was getting married to someone else (hard to digest lol but whatever)

But I must say you did a great job :) Thanks for the PM :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

man was i sacred that something had happened to khushi and that she was no more
but thankfully with the arrival of khushi i was relieved
congrats on your 10000th post dear