Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
Rk I read it..its fantastic but I won't write my comment now...I want to do justice to the update...

U proved me right abt manav...muaah for tat..will update after work today..

K where should I begin today. Ok I will start with saying I absolutely liked Jenny. Her openness, her enthusiasm to meet a friends wife not only put khushi at ease but me too. She behaved perfectly like a fond friend who dropped in to meet a Arnav and was pleased /curious to see signficant changes in his life. Nonetheless she made an effort to get to know Khushi.

U guys always pull my leg na as to y I love this Arnav but today he himself showed y i liked him. His friend's coming did not make him forget his wife. Yes may be he did ask her to join them as he hates shopping (though I dont feel that is the only reason) but the possessiveness he showed in a dignified manner towards his wife in front of an outsider makes me love him. Also I love him more for the way he chose to give money to khushi. He realized she does not have money to spend for herself but instead of giving it to her he chose to keep it in her bangle box knowing an independent woman like her may feel awkward if he handed it to her. The location he chose vouches for that. Her personal bangle box so that it is conveyed clearly it is for her use only for everything else he always signed cheques like during Payash wedding preps. Today he showed he cares for her feelings.

K should I even say anything for the wonderful description of the fort and temple. U have proved time and again ur skill describing things so that one can almost build the place in mind. Applause as always dear.

The shyam Khushi scene today left me feeling eerie. I hope khushi takes Manav's advice to heart and confides in Arnav about it. It will help clear his MU to hopefully.

Arnav and Jenny conversation was so insightful. I think Khushi bcos she does not know Arnav well she took his words at face value. I feel when he said he had no choice it ws not about him marrying Khushi the person but him marrying. He has his own reasons for not believing in marriage and I think for someone like him who likes to be in control a situation forcing him to take a decision gives a feeling of being forced. The idea frustrates him as once before his parents death also forced him to leave his dreams aside. Poor khushi can't blame her feels inadequate as things started between them on a wrong footing. Wish she realizes that if they had met in normal circumstances Arnav wud still like her but even then marriage wud be a tuff decision for him.

Now coming to my most fav part. Manav -Arnav confrontation. It was much needed. Heheh yes I am happy cos this is how I imagined Manav a man who can stand up against ASR for what he believes in. Manav hit the nail partially this time. Yes Arnav is upset cos Manav went behind his back as he always held Manav is high esteem someone he wud turn to but Manav going behind his back has more than anything else hurt him. The other half is ofcourse his jealousy over the easy relationship Khushi has with Manav, the way she is comfortable with Manav. He would trust Manav and Khushi but nonetheless the confused husband in denial about his love for his wife does get jealous of it.

👏 for u dear




Edited by memyselfandrshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update. I was disappointed by the answer Arnav gave to Jenny regarding the reason for his shot-gun wedding ... I guess he was/is not close enough to Jenny to tell her that he really wants her in his life "since she stormed into his life'...or is he still delusional that he married her for the sake of shutting up mamiji ...by the way today the Shyam character was at his creepy-best..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow thanks for updating... just loved the update...

Manav is such a darling to help Khushi and Anjali...

The creep is really showing his colors.. wonder if now Khushi will tell Arnav anything... Any whoo i think she is really heartbroken to hear that Arnav was somehow forced to marry her and not out of love... Love is complicated... lets see where this lands Arnav and Khushi...

continue sooner
Edited by valeyrie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very interesting... There is something brewing between Anjali manav ... Why is Arnav upset for khushi ... .. What injections Anjali has to take..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ughhh Shyam is so creepy😡

Wonderful and detailed update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..i loved it and as usual crave for more. Beautiful how u always seem to incorporate some aspect of the rich culture of Rajasthan. I was transported to the architectural wonders when Shyam made an ugly appearance. Hmm...I feel for khushi...she is so unsecured in this relation.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superlike😊..wonderful update..things r getting more complicated n interesting..again i wld say that u describe everything brilliantly..u can literally watch the scene unfolding.. i loved hw u described the architecture of the fort n all other things..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jenny seems pretty much okay for the moment.

Arnav's response was kind of rough on Khushi and she should have heard the rest but her emotions took over her and she ran away from there.

Oh god Shyam. Seriously he makes me sick, I know for sure no one will believe her but if she has Manav on her side she will get somewhere and now knowing that Arnav gets jealous of Manav who is always by Khushi's side is fun to watch

Do update soon
Edited by Aveiro - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
truly amazing update.waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
exciting update...u knw i wait a whole week for this FF's update...and i do a boogie dance when u do...is ther any chance u can increase it to twice a week😳...just a random thought but i love ur updates...can't wait for next week😃

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