Deep Thoughts:My Writing Index..New OS link PG-41 - Page 23

Oh my God Di beautiful will be an understatement for this OS. I can't tell you how much i loved this OS. Sharon's confession, her motherhood, their marriage, everything was so beautiful. Loved that moment when she was crying because she was scared that her Swayam will not love the same way because her belly will increase. Awe she is just as much innocent as a small baby. But the last part where Sharon was trying to convince Swayam to accept the truth and he was trying to make her convince that death will not be able to part them was amazing. It made me cry Di. Loved, loved, loveddd this OS. It was a bliss reading it. Love you for telling me to read this 🤗 ❤️

Sha: its not my fault ...that u assumed things ... I never told u to maintain distance ... If u wanted to hug me ... u should have hugged me ...I didn't stop u ..."were jst way tooo cutee...

pen friend: wese u know my thought about it but fir bhi ...its my one of the favorites on going ss right now so i m lovving it...its also cute and the main thing is its differt story line up...

u me back to us : hats off...no words left...

will love you...forever : a good tragic,suspense...full like a james bond movie with a romantic swaron touch.

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal

I am unreserving. Shocked na?

Smarty I typed a huge comment but udd gaya pura

Now I forgot wad i wrote n m lazy

Anyway coming to the os, the only song i was thinking bout while reading it was Neeyat Kharab hain 😆😆

Painter Swayam was really a unique idea.

ANd Sharon's attempts to seduce him were so cutee

Aisa os likha hain yaha pe bache bigad jayenge but who cares :P

The flow throughtout was so good, never did u lose grip on this os. Plus their color se holi khelna wala scene...awww

But undoubtedly the best was the shower scene. water dripping down his body..uff..I wonder how it dint get converted into steam given his hotness :P

I get real dirty at tyms, I know...

This is chhotu I know but sumthin better than nothing na..

N Dis was d bestest bday gift ever..love u so much smarty 😳

Awww..senti kar diya tune...thanks to Kuhu who approached me me...aur usne mujhe bola tha ki bday girl ne khud mera naam bola he😲...m glad u liked it...love u too smarty 🤗

Di (i am going but) u HAVE to update all ur works as soon as u feel like writing again😈..

an yes pm ya scrap me when u post ur challenged os and swathi di's os..

U r a wonderful writer so continue writing

-Ur silent reader

it ws jst amazing yaar

vry beautifully written

jst luvd it to d core

d journey showed by u was jst marvellous

had tears in my eyes at d end

cn jst say its fab yaar