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AparnaRenu

@AparnaRenu

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Payal with a backbone!!! Nice!

And are you going to make Dadi a nice person? I have an allergic reaction to that woman - bleargh!

Looking forward to the next part...and when'll you bring our Titaliya into the picture?

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I Loved it.

I am glad Payal talked back to her parents.

Everything is not about money.

Anjali and Mami need to find out about their money situation.

Lets see what Arnav has planned to get Akash and Payal married.

Update soon. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Can't describe in words that how much I loved this Payal!!
"Mine is gone in search of yours Mumma" that was hilarious.. Totally love her..
I know Payal's image in front of Dadi has turned upside down but well something has to be done. I'm sure Arnav will fulfill his promise of getting Akash & Payal married.
Now anjali & Mami knows too... waiting for Anjali's reaction
Awesome update.. and time for Khushi's entry doesn't seem far away😉

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

ha ha vi im liking this payal she is too furious and acha girl. I m loving this ff yar very much keep me updating . where is khushi jeee

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annab

@annab

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

loved it..payal is one gutsy girl i must say...waiting for khushi's entry...pls continue soon...thanx...

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Payal...was a lioness here...Go girl!!!!!!

Loved it...waiting for khushi to enter...

Update soon...Thanks for the pm😉

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

awww atleast payal has guts and a voice in this FF

loved how she stuck up for herself, her love, her in-laws, the right thing

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Hello, sorry for the late comment & thanks for the pms. I just caught up with all the chapters and this story is definitely interesting.

I love Payal's feisty character here and Anjali is such a spoilt brat! She just lost her father four days ago and all she can think of is a birthday party?! Seriously Anjali? Grow up!

Oh & I really like the well-grounded and sensible characterization of Arnav here. He does not seem like his haughty self. But then again, since the story is yet to be developed, maybe I shouldn't judge his personality yet. :P

I can't wait for the progression of the story. I have only read a few of your OS before and I really enjoy reading your writing, I will certainly check out Checkmates and the rest of your stories when time permits. :)

Edited by Shalu87 - 12 years ago

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Update soon.waiting for khushi's entry.

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Roopa

@roops82

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

this ff is tooo gud...

loved payal from her entry to her temporary exit...she is fun...completely opposite to the shy and homely show waali payal...

arnav the responsible big bro and akash supporting him is nice...

anjali is the spoiled n youngest raizada...

this is very interesting...waiting for khushi's entry!!!!