OS: SOMETIMES WHEN WE TOUCH

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

WOW !!

I dont know why, but Ive been longing for a PM from you !
And this OS, Happy Durga Puja to you too !!

The way you bring out their love, fresh as a blossom even after years ! Just that everytime the love increases , and how !

And the song, I loved it !

All in all, an amazing piece Bingo !

Quote

basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

thanx for da pm n the wonderful read.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

duncanelise

@duncanelise

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

You describe Arnavs character so well! This was lovely!

Quote

blayde

@blayde

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Aw this was so sweet!. His inner turmoil, trying to fight and understand his own stubbornness. Maybe a part of him likes the fact that he will have to think of ways to make it up to her.

My fav part: "...he knew he had a heart now because of her..." ❤️

Quote

fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Hey Happy Durga Pooja.

Loved the OS, it was truly awesome.

Quote

Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

That was a lovely piece!

Do write more soon :)

Quote

Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

K always bounces back - she perfectly understands his mood swings...

-Sona

Quote

inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Loved it, the sincere regret to see her in pain so beautifully written, and the end, wow, her tinkling laughter made his day.

The description of the saree, is just so fantastic, I love bengali sarees, I dont own one, because I hardly get to wear saree, but I definitely wanna buy it one day.

Thanks for the PMs