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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

That was amazing beautiful and poignant
Happy pujas to you too

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

your OS have the habit of exploring the unexpected.. pretty much like your FFs.
beautifully written!

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Lovely description!

Your description of the saree was too good..it reminded me of the haldi ceremony in the show! 😃

loved When Khushi called the coffe horrible and the kiss ofcourse was too good!

I would give it 4/5 bcz I know dt you write way better than this!

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

that was really beautiful loved it

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Thank you sweetheart. You make me so happy! I absolutely lovvveeddd it.. And I'm so glad you're back.

Waiting for more PM's.

Mwah!

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

It was beautiful !

Happy Durga Puja ! XD

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Arshi143

@Arshi143

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey dear! Guess what I was gonna pm u asking y u haven't written anything in a while! And I see this in the morning :) yippee.. Missed ur descriptions of her ar designed clothes hehe.. Glad they make up in the end :)

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

You are the Queen of Details..that is the first thing i notice in your works;)

Why is it the littlest of her disappointment hurt him so much?. He is thinking how to make up for her disappointment, when she comes in as if nothing happened..she just bounces back..that is her innate quality. That is what makes him fall for her once again everyday

Happy Durga Pooja to you too;)