ArShi FF: Something About You Thread#1 *COMPLETED* - Page 52

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

Chapter 1 to 8 Firstly, I love love love childhood bonds. So you know how I feel for this story :-) I really liked that you have a well thought out plot in your mind. Thumbs up for that. I adore a spoiled brat Khushi. This is bound to happen because she is the youngest and is highly pampered. I like her being modern in thinking and does not like interference in small matters like clothing. Nobody should dictate that. I love her pet name Bachchi. It was the name of Kajol in Pyaar kiya toh darna kya. One more thing. Your Khushi is different. So I am glad that I get to read something slightly different. I understand Khushi's jealousy and insecurity towards her brother. She will have same standards for her lover too. Hence she hates Arnav now but will love him passionately later. This brings to our well guarded Arnav on slippery ice whose feet slips now and then because of Khushi. He knows she is off limit but the attraction he feels towards her cannot ne denied. He is smitten by her. Also he is quite protective of her already but he doesnt fail to show her mistakes to her. I like his honesty. Now the plot. I guess Guptas are not too well off anymore. Hence the decision. The didnt like the fact that Garima reacted that way to Anjali's rishta. But gratefully she calmed down. Arnav should gift the house to the Guptas :-D I am not able to put in every thought because I plan to type something and then another thing comes in my mind. So as and when if I remember to add something I will add it in the previous comment :-) I am yet to read ch. 9 I hope this falls in the category of a detailed comment. Also I am trying a new font from phone so I hope it turns out well. Thank you for such an engaging story :-)

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Too bad for our little Khushi... why are these disgusting creatures so lusty ... hopeless moron Karan to hell with him

love your updates!looking forward to more!

I knew Karan was a creep

Originally posted by: farah53

Thank you for all your comments!!!Girl you should be on my first page..Cos this is all I want to hear..You talk about the intensity, the unexpected spark, the jealous Arnav & the sassy dress! You're a girl after my heart..

So, just for you I am gonna reveal whom I see before my eyes when I imagine Rohan in action..& it's solely because I am majorly crushing on him now-a-days😉& yes Rohan is just 30...So we can still imagine Varun as him😳

Damn Farah ! That was seriously out of the blue 😲 ! I mean Payal's fiance , Karan is a douche bag who was lusting after khushi all along !! Now that dear ... is what i called a twist 😎 and that too incorporated in the most unexpected of times. Wow this was such a flawlessly penned thriller of an update 👏 , i could feel tingles down my spine ! I absolutely admire how you created the confrontation between khushi and karan; the flow of khushi's thought from when she dismisses karan's odd behaviour as tequila talking to when she realises karan's sick intentions was impeccable. I loved how you did not make Khushi do the confused helpless "damsel in distress" act whimpering sth like "let me go", but you made her act smart and also be flustered at the same time which makes the scenario so plausible. There was a logical pace even to the way you described each action or assault on Karan by khushi and vice-versa ! Kudos ! N that decision of khushi's for the knee to the groin ~ yah coulnt help cheering for her but then the reality check the dress got in the way 😕. N finally the Knight-in-a-shining-armour arrives ! .. But loved how u gave a refreshing spin to that as well 😉 So instead of breaking into tears in the arms of the saviour , khushi kumari gupta is annoyed thinking about how this might get Arnav a reason to demean her farther in future ... .

wow what an update...absolutely mind blowingly awesome...continue soon