ArShi FF: Something About You Thread#1 *COMPLETED*

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Reader_Hobby

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Hey!

What can I say?! WOW! Can I say that ... I mean what a fabulous start to a new story. I am genuinely really happy about this. Whilst reading the excerpt I was like OMG! I sooo want to read further and this seems like a really interesting and eventful story that I just want to sink my teeth into 😆. Very well written which makes it all the more easier to read and understand. Superb.

I admire the way in which Arnav went about making a life for himself. I mean sure he doesn't believe in marriage etc etc etc, but who can blame the guy after his experiences from life at such a young age. He made a name for himself. He helped out his family, which shows his caring side.

There are sooo many questions going on right about now in my head ...

What is the deal with Khushi's past that affects her not getting marriage proposals. Mind you, Khushi's not complaining 😉.

Will there be a lot of rage from Arnav towards Khushi ... If so, will it turn into heated passionate make out sessions against anywhere and everywhere both of these guys can find. Against the wall. Shower. Ground ... One can always hope 😉. I know I know I maybe getting slightly carried away ... Ah well.

Anyway, before I write like an essay, I'd just like to say please can you PM me the next update. I'm about to read the next two chapters in one go and cannot wait for the next update. Thanks!

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Hey!

Another minnnd blowing update!

Well firstly I like that Arnav has an obession with sports cars 😆. I think it suits his character perfectly and to be quite honest, this is the first story that I have come across which highlights this small, yet what I think is an important factor related to Arnav. I mean he is wealthy and going by his attitude, he's ofcourse going to have a powerful car. In this case it being an Audi. Powerful engines they have. To me, this says a lot of about the owner of the vehicle. Arnav being powerful. Rich. Fast. You maybe thinking why fast ... well I'm thinking that he maybe a guy who likes things done efficiently, precise and therefore I relate fast to him too 😃 - But hey, that's my view on it. Others may think otherwise and that is their opinion.

The whole scene played out between Arnav admiring Khushi before she reveals herself and after he knows who she is, is pretty wonderful. Written very well. Whilst reading it, I could just imagine it playing out in my head.

Absolutely amaaazing!!!

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star12

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Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

i just read this FF... this is soo good :)

So now Arnav and Kushi have met after 10 years...

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Hey!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter in particular so far. One reason being that it was mainly filled with Arnav-Khushi and their thoughts, which by the way are perfectly written in accordance with their characters. 😊 Another being that ... actually scrap that. I just loved this chapter!!! I'm really happy with the way it has progressed and I'm just excited about what will happen next ...

I admire Khushi's no nonsense sort of attitude. I mean she told Arnav where to go, but in a polite way. She's independant, has a good sense of style, beautiful etc etc etc. The list could go on. Arnav is the one that said sorry to her and took that first step, so he needs to be mentioned from my point of view. I would've thought he wouldn't apologise and especially not to Khushi, but that was a genuine surprise 😛.

Finally, the last part where Arnav asked Khushi or more like stated about her dress being too short I was like ... Did you really say that Arnav? What will Khushi think? Who is he to question what she does ... what she wears? --- That was icing on the cake for me! A really fabulous way to end the chapter! The only thing now is that I really cannot wait to read what happens next ... Arghhh! #Note to myself ... Breathe in and out 😆

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bhadraprasad

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

First of all thanks to Sammiya for forwarding this work...Read both the updates.Loved it...Awaiting to see how Arnav is going to impress Khushi...Would you please PM when you update