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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

hey rey kria sharon all but no swayam

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

swayam gave her a lifetime n promised he'd wait for her but that fateful day😭

u explained sharon's pov very well

it was so touching👏👏

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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

next update oooh shit os yaar😆😆😆😆if possible plzz update next chp plzzz😃😃for ❤️swaron

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Well I was expecting this OS to be sad from the very title but had still not thought it would be so deep too. First thanks for writing on Sharon and showing a completely unseen aspect of her character. It was amazingly done. Right from the begining where she is lost in thoughts and wishing Swayam was there with him to final moment of the OS where she realises its not easy to move on. It was superbly written with some amzing emotional moments thrown in. Whether some small pov's of Kriya or the moment where Sharon breaks down everything was just fabulosly written. This OS has an haunting beauty to it. Even though not a happy one but still loved reading it.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

WOW ...Nivz that was just out standing...it was a heart wrenching piece of work...her pain...her guilt...her loneliness ...her emptiness...u conveyed them so beautifully ...the depth of her each and every feeling...i could feel it ... she had to suffer a loveless life becoz of one mistake...she couldn't confess her love to him...i felt sad for her ...

Even today she waited for him to come. She waited for him to come and tell her he loved her and would never leave her again. She waited for him to come and say I Love You, just the way he always had, but he never came.

I loved the way you portrayed Swayam here...he was not alive...but he was omnipresent ...he was everywhere...in sharon's heart...her thoughts ...her life...everywhere...he was a perfect lover ...a best friend anyone can get...loved the way he got kriyansh together & acted like her big brother in their wedding ...loved his possessive brother side ...

Her wish was his command...she wanted some time...he gave his lifetime...the perfect lover...dream of any beloved...

"I Love You Sharon. And I will always. You need time; I give you a life time to think about it again. Just remember, I will always be there beside you." He had once said to her.

He was still there in her thoughts...he told her to move on...but she is not ready to move on...

"Move on Sharon. I will never come back!"

"No! I will never move on Swayam. I love you. Please come back to me." She cried hugging his picture. She knew calling him back wouldn't help, but what's the harm in trying?

i had tears in my eyes while reading those lines...so touching ...u have done a great job in portraying raw emotions ...

She tried to move on...as he wanted it ...but she couldn't ...she ended up imagining him at her door step...their golden past ...true love can't be forgotten ...

It was AWESOME dear...i just love the way you portray your characters...loved ur FF on Swayam & this OS from Sharon point of view took my heart away...gr8 piece of work...thanx for this awesome OS dear ...thanx for the PM