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pooja123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

a well written but sad os...
do write more and thanks for the pm!!!

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Aditi

@HealMeForever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

gud one:)

thanks fr the pm😊

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Rashmi

@mrash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I was sensing smthing sad from the first line, and 😔 it was.

Feeling very low now.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Though the storyline was on a sad note, the way you wrote the pain felt less painful. Well for me the end wasn't abrupt, cause you know some things are better left unsaid. And you totally nailed it. Thanks for the PM. Keep writing.😎

PS: As I was reading the update, I remembered reading about Gerry telling the same to Holly from PS: I love you, even he wanted her to move when he died, but as you said its hard to move on😳

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

A very nicely written OS. i can say a very emotional OS. it made me cry and cry as i read through it. specially the part where i gotto know swayam was dead...

Good Job!

Good OS!

😊 😊 😊

and thanks for the pm!

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Superb os. . .
Aww it was so emotional. . . .
Bt,i stil lovd it. . .

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Guys, thank you so much for your lovely comments..

Will try to reply on each soon! :]

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Nice os nivi
quite emotional nd the feelings of sharon were written beautifuly

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Nice touching and sensitive portrayal of Sneha's state of mind...her sense of loss and a pretty adorable picture of Swayam's character...sad but beautiful & effective