SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Keep updating fast. It's amezing.

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Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Baz 🤗

OMG what was that 😲 thriller on SwaRon, super awesome idea 😳

Loved how you started with showing the beautiful blissful life Sharon had and how she was so much in love with her husband and how she admired the pic reminiscing her wedding day and boom out of no where my heartbeats raced and i was at the edge of my seat reading in almost one breath to know whats next.. thats the beauty of your work the ending where your stopped your first work...gal do you want to give us readers a heart attack...i was like why would Swayam do something like this and why the hell is he not the guy Sharon think he is? thankfully i did not have to wait much but just go on with reading *what a nice feeing* so the next update i see the mystery deepens and Sharons pain and horror nicely penned. Swayam on the other hand is a confused character, a part of him is holding her hostage and a part of him is in pain to see her in pain and he did even confess his feelings for her but at the same time he is clear with his actions not to affect him in any ways..woah gal this so far is so intriguing that waiting for the next update is going to be real difficult. So please update at the earliest possible by you.

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little.princess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Wow wonderful updates dear.. Gt 2 c a new shade of Swayam.. I wonder wats his problem with Sharon's dad.. Hope he doesn't hurt her..

Thanx 4 the pm and update the nxt part soon.. Dnt frgt 2 pm me whn u update..