SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84 - Page 14

Originally posted by: SwaRon4ever

Oh My Gosh!! This is soo good and different... Really interesting!!! I hope u dOnt keep us waiting too long for the next update... :)

Originally posted by: manasie

Baz, man this FF has intigruied me to such an extent that I have to say fabuolous job. Absolutely amazingly thought upon and penned down. ...Thank you so much Mansie...Seriously loved it. Now why did Swayam do it is a major question. Hope that will be revealed soon....oh u so wis...heheh I am even worse than cvs when it comes to revealing the suspense😈...u guys would have to wait for that😆

Originally posted by: marauder

Mystery deepens. I am seriously loving this FF. Its more like my cup of tea....I am so glad u like it...The whole dark setting and growing mystery around the character of this FF is making it more and more awesome with each update. 😃Nicely penned down the state of Sharon who I guess is still not able to come in terms with this new development. ...yup its still a shock for her to know that her own husband kidnapped her😆...And Swayam's character is looking like some sort of anti hero like that of SRK's character form Bazigar who has some unfinished business with Sharon's father and Sharon has turned into pawn in their game. ...hummm well yes u can say that...In the middle of all this mayhem and chaos though it was nice to read about Swayam's POV and especially the bit where he felt sorry and guilty and admitted he loved her for real....u know in the start i was gonna show no signs of love from him but then i thought that i would have to show him falling for her and that would delay the romance so I made him in love with her from the 1 chap...🤣 Loking forward to the update.

Originally posted by: AmRiTa_S

YAY..finally you updated and Woah...this is getting more and more interesting.

Swayam loves her madly and is guilty...wonder why he is he doing this to Sharon, I hope u reveal that very soon. Thnx for the PM..update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Love your idea its always different and your writing skills is awesome. U did a amazing job love this part.

Originally posted by: binuja

Wow...that was something different...swayam as the rude kidnapper is so creative... 😊
Nice to know that he too hav feelings for her...but hope u vl reveal in ur next update the reaso y she is being kidnapped... 😊

Anyways keep going and do try to update sooner next time... 😊

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Baz,this was Ah-mazing
From wherw u get this awesome ideas.Swayam-a kidnapper but i loved their fights in the update
Waiting for next part
Ps.Update enigma of fate plz

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

BaZ Wow what an update The moment i see your pm BaZ, i feel a thrill and a happiness that i cant express in words😳😳 Yaar how do write so beautifully?😲 You are the best writer 👍🏼 i have ever come across....arey yaar Suku tu har bar itni tareef karti hai 😳 Each update gives an untouched and virginal effect on the reader.I always feel na that teri updates are clear cut, at the same time stimulating and vivid. ..thank you so much..Here you have given a different treatment to swayam, though he loves her he is at the mercy of his vengeance towards her dad.🥺 The best part of the update was that when he said, that he loves her and it alone was not a lie.❤️❤️ I kept on rereading the same part many times😆 ...that is my fav part too I am glad u liked it too.😆 swaron at your hands are downright different. It is something I always wish to see, a no nonsense at bit aggressive swayam but at the same time absolutely in love with sharon and will anything for her. the update is classic yaar, thoroughly entertaining👏👏. Why should we go an waste our time on films when we get such lovely updates from you,...aww thank you.. but i wish it was more frequent😉 well i know you are busy so it is okk!! 😳BaZ you are breathtakingly beautiful writer, and Bless you yaar !..thank you once again.

Originally posted by: BeulaSwaRon

am loving this FF...swayam is so unusual but he still is the same...he is rocking...there are so many things hidden...m loving this vulnerable yet attitude waali Sharon...very interesting...plzz update the next part sooner

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Alright, I'm finally getting the story now !! God, for a moment there, I actually thought there were two people in this story😆 but it's good to know that it was Swayam all along acting as Rohan !! Poor Sharon just had her whole world broken to pieces and she still doesn't even know the reason why !! ...lolz glad to know ur confusion got cleared.

And Swayam, he is there to take some sort of revenge, I believe but at the same time, it hurts him so much to be dragging Sharon in the middle of everything !! ...yup he is swayam after all...He does love her truly but in a way, he has no choice but to put his revenge plan as his first priority !! ...yup u said it in right words..I'm looking forward to reading what drove Swayam to do all this and if Sharon would understand and accept him back or not !!...ahh thats the big question!