SwaRon/TanHa FF ~Hostage...~ Discontinued, nt pg 84 - Page 11

fab update...plxx update this time real soon

BaZ Wow what an update The moment i see your pm BaZ, i feel a thrill and a happiness that i cant express in words😳😳 Yaar how do write so beautifully?😲 You are the best writer 👍🏼 i have ever come across. Each update gives an untouched and virginal effect on the reader.I always feel na that teri updates are clear cut, at the same time stimulating and vivid. Here you have given a different treatment to swayam, though he loves her he is at the mercy of his vengeance towards her dad.🥺 The best part of the update was that when he said, that he loves her and it alone was not a lie.❤️❤️ I kept on rereading the same part many times😆 swaron at your hands are downright different. It is something I always wish to see, a no nonsense at bit aggressive swayam but at the same time absolutely in love with sharon and will anything for her. the update is classic yaar, thoroughly entertaining👏👏. Why should we go an waste our time on films when we get such lovely updates from you, but i wish it was more frequent😉 well i know you are busy so it is okk!! BaZ you are breathtakingly beautiful writer, and Bless you yaar !

please dis time please do update soon

O.M.G WHAT AN UPDATE. . . !. .TOTALY FABULOUS . . THE EQUATION B/W SWARON IS DIFFRENT HERE . . UPDATE NXT PART SOON . .

Alright, I'm finally getting the story now !! God, for a moment there, I actually thought there were two people in this story but it's good to know that it was Swayam all along acting as Rohan !! Poor Sharon just had her whole world broken to pieces and she still doesn't even know the reason why !!

wow luvd it... grt concept yaar... totally diffrnt frm others...

Awesome update...so its bcz of her dad that swayam is holding sharon as an hostage...he culdn't stop himself from falling for her...how cute...luved the fact how u described that it was bcoz of swayam sharon had started believing in love n now again it was bcoz of him she had started questioning love...really excited for nxt part...continue soon n thnx for pm.

Baz...iss baar tum hamare saath aisi naainsaafi nahi kar sakti...ek aisa update padne ke baad next update ke liye intzaar karwana galat hai...i dont know where to begin and how to so let it suffice to say that i thoroughly enjoyed reading each part of this update...the contrasting states of mind for both of them was beautifully etched out...I for one could empathize with Sharon but not feel cold towards Swayam either coz man he does luv her still and if sumthing has made him behave like that with her it has to b solid...Swayam's character I luvd...Sharon is right now very vulnerable, trying to preserve whatever sense of self respect is left...teh mind games they will play is sumthing I am luking forward to...so pls pls update soon...itz a request