SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#841

Nice Updates!
So both parents died in same accident !

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#842

Loved how you began this chapter - Khushi enjoying the rain, jasmines scenting the air, Khushi lost in Arnav's thoughts, Shahsi musing about Arnav's stand, his growing interest in Khushi, Arnav thinking about Khushi, repenting for his behaviour. And then the tone changes as harsh reality intrudes. Arnav's father was the cause for Arnav and Khushi becoming orphans. Would Arnav now be strong enough to wish to pursue /convince Khushi to be his wife, or would he punish himself for his father's sins?

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#843

OMG their fates are again entwined
What all they hv to suffer huh
Great work smita loving the story

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#844

so their pasts are connected...wonder what khushi's reaction would be after she gets to know this...& speaking of the bodies being charred to death, i think khushi, even though she managed to survive, suffered the most..the fact that she always wears full-sleeve blouses & covers every inch of her body is a hint that her body may have burnt considerably..it's just my assumption, though..anyway, do update soon..i am so looking forward to the next chapter...

Edited by shagun-rocks - 13 years ago

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JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#845

Nooo!

Don't let his parents death affect his chances with khushi!

Oh no! Please.

Nice update,,now I'm just restless to read the rest!

Thank you!

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#846

*rubs fists in eyes, sniffles, and hiccups*

You managed to make me feel the way he did in the initial stages, when along with his anger and frustration and pain, our eyes would dampen too ... Haye, I can't tell you how well you write, dearest. So, she's melting at his softness, is she? 😊 Does she see through him better than he realizes, or is it going to be a journey of discoveries on both sides? 🤗

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nee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#847

they are connected wow...happy arnav is taking in a very mature way,he is truly besotted...khushi also..but why did sasi said her life is a curse???

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meeyaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#848

Smita

The updates are really beautiful...that feeling of a woman when she thinks about a man for the first time... it is indeed strange...

but is there more to the accident that has affected Khushi's walking...why does she always wear long sleeves and closes her neck with her pallu...and applying that oil? hope she becomes alright...