SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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Shweta

@Sunset90

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#821

My dear Arnav, go and talk to her immediately... please don't back out coz your father was the reason behind her parents' death. I'm sure Khushi would accept you for you: the way you changed yourself for her...

I love Shashi's portrayal here. The way he feels happy for his daughter!

I love the way you showed Arnav's inner conflict... and mentioned the insecurity Khushi might feel, bothering him...

The best thing and the most difficult thing would be talking it out, but it is the only way out... ( As though I'm experienced in romance 🤣)...

Loved this chapter...

And better update soon, or I'll ask Gayu your address and come there and force you to write 😆

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

awesome and amazing...its getting very intense...hats off to ur writing skills dear ..

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Viviann

@Viviann

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#823

Awesome, cant wait for the next update

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

loved the way hw u showed the signs of love in Khushi...

Y past comes again into their life????2 children hav to suffer again with their pasts...

Dunno wats Arnav gonna do...continue with this proposal or nt...

waiting to read..

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#825

love it so arnav's father was the cause of both of the accidents anyway love it and plzzz update soon

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#826

The way you have spun this story combining all the characters, their pasts and future, its commendable.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#827

oh dear oh dear oh dear
man so his father was responsible for this state of khushi huh
man this aint good at all
will he tell her or just regret what his father did to her parents and his mother for the rest of his life
wait whats his fault in all this he wasnt the one who caused the accident right
well lets see what can happen
loved it how they managed to make him agree for this marriage proposal for khushi
but will she wanna marry him becuase there is still more thats hidden of her injuries than she let on right

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#828

Nice update
The attraction is on both sides
I wonder how Khushi will react if he tell her
about his dad and the accident?

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#829

oh no...arnav loves her too much dont separate them pls

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Great update pleased that Khushi has feelings towards him too. Loved the teasing that Arnav got. Wonder how Khushi is going to react when Arnav tells her about the accident