SS: Keeping Khushi (Part 14 Updt on Th 2)

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

awesome story as always
I can't wait for the truth to come out

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Shweta

@Sunset90

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Dear Ms.Smita!

It is definitely illegal to write such tempting stories which makes me want to stop studying and read it! LOL I was controlling myself from reading His Smiling Girl till my exams get over, but I accidentally ended up here, hooked the moment I started reading it! While His Smiling Girl was a happy, bubbly, breezy romantic story, this one is a bit dark, mysterious, suspense gripping my heart. I love the versatility in your work. Waiting to read more of this fic. And yes my emoticons will be back on the roll after 20th of this month. I don't know how I'm gonna manage myself when I go abroad to a university to study. When will get the time to read your works? I'm already worried about that!

Coming to this story, I love the pics you are including in each chapter. I love Khushi and Sashi baba's cocoon of Music with those children.(My craze over music has added more interest to this story) Arnav wants her as a mistress?😡 Hope he realizes that he wants more. Hope he gets enchanted by her traditional,divine music and understands the value of Indian customs and the importance of marriage. Loved each and every nuance in your story. What has happened to Khushi? I'm really curious. It is not as though Arnav had many mistresses before right? Cause you mentioned Aman of not knowing any woman in his life? Because I always feel a woman as pure, divine and angelic as Khushi deserves the best. I hope she never falters in her stand to protect her purity but changes him for the better.Lovely story...I will definitely read if you update even if it is in the morning of my exam! Don't feel that you are spoiling me or something. English is a part of this exam, Let us include this in that 😆

Woah I how huge my comment has become!! You are one of my favorite authors out here. And each and every story of yours just proves that!!

-With Love,

Shweta

Edited by -Sunset- - 12 years ago

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

normally i catch your oss soon as they come out (cause am always trawling for reading material) but since you turned this into a ss ...and i missed all the updates ...have to ,have to ask for pms please ...don't want to miss the rest ...thnx in advance .

As always ,superb writing .different yet the essential elements are the same and also an underlying sadness that's reaching out to the readers...having read your previous work can i hope that the Asr effect will bring sunshine into this Khushi's life too?

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

whats wrong with khushi really??
im very worried :(

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

what is wrong with khushi??
she always full dress and covered herself full and can't walk properly??
unfold the mystery fast

awesome updates
👏

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

Oh my!

The suspense is killing me! What is wrong with her!?

And why can't he just apologize to her?!

The bond between the children, the acceptance, the way they function as a family, all very endearing!

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#437

I read whole 7 chaps in a go I loved it
Update soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#438

but the main question remains will she tell you the truth
okay what happened with her then
something is drastically wrong with her man but what
wow she is good if she can entice the audience the way she did
so he now knows that it was an orphanage they were running interesting
so will he know about whats wrong with her i wonder
sorry not two updates but three
wow dear is that quick or what