ARHI FF- CHANGED FEELINGS CHAP 10 UPDATED!!

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CHANGED FEELINGS
HEY GUYS...THIS IS AN FF WHICH I HAD IN MIND FOR A LONG TIME AND AFTER READING THE WONDERFUL FF'S BY THE AMAZING AUTHORS ON IF I DECIDED TO WRITE IT...THE CONCEPT IS A LITTLE HATKE FROM THE OTHER STORIES YOU MUST'VE READ BUT WELL DO GIVE IT A TRY...
I PRESENT TO YOU THE CAST OF CHANGED FEELINGS!!!!!

CHARACTERS:-

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA- Well he's the same as he's in the show, the 28 year old ruthless business magnet, the greek god who makes every girl go weak in her knees, the merciless businessman who could silence top-level executives?and well you know him?need I say more(:-P)

KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA-She is a 25 year old hard-working women with an engineering degree from IIT(India's best engineering institute ) and a post graduation from IIM(Again India's best institute for management). She works in a top notch IT firm. She has only one goal and that is to be a famous author?to be known world-wide for her books, to have her writing touch million of hearts.

ANJALI KHANNA- She is ASR's sister and is almost the same as in the show except for having a little more backbone?.probably the Anjali we're now finally seeing in the show. She's 30 years old.

RAHUL KHANNA- Anjali's loving husband?(Sorry but I didn't want that creep Shyam anywhere near my darling Anjali?and anyway I'm a big Kuch Kuch Hota Hai fan?so Anjali jaha.. Rahul waha..) He's a lawyer and handle's the legal works of AR.

SURAJ KHANNA- He's anjali and Rahul's 4 year old son?he's very naughty and fun loving?He's Arnie mama's pampered nephew.

AAKASH SINGH RAIZADA- He's the 25 year cousin of Arnav who lives with them?he's done his business studies from Harward just like Arnav and has a keen business sense?he can do great work but hasn't been able to garner Arnav's complete trust till now.

PAYAL RAIZADA-She's 28 and a through businesswoman. She was the PR manager for AR when Aakash first met her. They fell in love but she refused to make their relationship public because she didn't want his influence to help her careear rise?finally when after a year she became the head of the PR department at AR she obligied Aakash's wishes and they're happily married for ten months now.

KRITI RAIZADA- She's Arnav's mother?.a very loving and kind lady and looks after all her kids and grand-kids. Aranv and Anjali think the world of her and love her even more than they love each-other.

OTHER CHARACTERS LIKE MAMI, NK, HP ETC ARE SAME AS IN THE SHOW.

AND NOW, LET ME INTRODUCE YOU TO ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARACTERS , HE'S WHAT YOU'D CALL THE PARALLEL LEAD?AND NO HE ISN'T THE VILLIAN ( I THINK TWO VILLIANS- NAMELY ARNAV AND KHUSHI'S EGO AND THE MU'S BETWEEN THEM ARE VILLIANS ENOUGH FOR THIS STORY).

PRESENTING VIRAT KOHLI- he's gonna be playing well himself, you know cricketer of the season, celebrated for a reason. the only difference is I'm making him 26 instead of 23. He's gonna be a very important part of the FF and will be there till the very end?.Frankly I wanted a cricketer with a strong personality that could compete with ASR's and who would fit the bill better than this handsome hunk?.and ya you would have understood that I couldn't possibly make him a villain?(Who can imagine a guy who get's emotional when India doesn't qualify for semi's as a villain right) He's gonna be introduced a little later in the FF.

CHAPTER 1- BELOW
PLEASE DO LIKE AND COMMENT GUYS...YOU'RE FEEDBACK IS VERY IMPORTANT AND ALL KINDS OF CRITICISM IS MOST WELCOME!!!!
LOVE,
PRINCESS!!
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CHAPTER 1

He entered the hotel lounge in a huff. Today he was gonna be dead for sure…he made his way to their regular table not bothering with the greetings coming his way…all that mattered now was her. Then he saw her….sitting cross-legged in one of her usual business suits with round thick-rimmed glasses and her hair tied in a tight bun….she was reading a magazine with a grim and angry expression…Arnav Singh Raizada gulped….today he was surely gonna be dead meat.

He made his way towards the table walking slowly, trying to prolong the outburst….finally he reached her and stood in front of her….she looked at her watch…then at him…if looks could kill, he thought, he'd be a dead man by now…after giving him a seething look she again looked at her watch and turned back to her magazine without uttering a word….he looked at her even more scared now…usually when people were quiet you'd think they were calm but if Khushi Kumari Gupta was quiet it was definitely the silence before the storm, the dormancy before the volcano erupted.

Arnav sighed and sat down…he looked at her waiting for her to shout but nothing happened…this silence was killing him…he was ok if she shouted and yelled….but a silent Khushi…now that was something he just couldn't take. He took her hand and she looked at him crossly. He took a deep breath and began,

"Khushi, I'm really really sorry….I got caught up in an investors meet…I tried to get out as fast as possible but…."

She snatched her hand out of his and looked at him angrily….

"Arnav Singh Raizada…what the hell do you think of yourself…how could you be late today…today of all days…I don't wanna hear if you had a meeting…you own the place damnit…you could just leave and no one would say a word….i left my office, listened to that prick of a boss I have, hurried here as fast as I could to only have to sit in front of an empty chair for an hour…a whole bloody hour…I don't care if you had to leave a meeting with Barrack Obama…so don't give me this meeting crap get it!"

Arnav looked like a war victim…he didn't know whether he was supposed to speak and apologize or was he expected to keep quiet and let her have her say. He decided to go for the first….

"Khushi listen to me…you know you're one of my biggest priorities and had it not been for my fool of a brother who can't handle a thing himself I would've come earlier…."

"But Arnav you knew today was very special to me…you knew how important it is for both of us and you still manage to make excuses for being late…I can't believe you're actually blaming your brother for this….Arnav Singh Raizada…you are the limit!!"

"I'm really sorry…please forgive me…pretty please khushi…."

Khushi was still angry and in no mood to relent…."Arnav…name me one person who manages to show up late for his own anniversary…!!"

"Wait what….Anniversary??" Arnav asked, stumped.

Khushi rolled her eyes…sometimes she wondered how such a dimwitted person could be the reigning design firm owner of India. "Anniversary is any occasion which comes every year…today we finished three years of knowing each other and being best friends…so it's our third friendship anniversary!!"

Arnav rolled his eyes but immediately regretted it because it made her even more angry.

"Fine khushi…punish me…do anything you want but please talk to me…."

Khushi's face lit up in a big evil smirk and Arnav knew he was gone….Khushi was gonna have his hide now.

"OK….if you wanna apologize…I want you to hold your ears and say sorry…and ya I forgot to mention you have to do that while doing sit-up's"

Arav looked shocked " Come on Khushi…you've got to be kidding me…how can you expect me to do that…I'm not a toddler…"

Khushi made a stern face " Do I look anything but serious to you ASR??"

"But Khushi what if someone sees me…I can't…"

"well if you want me to forgive you, you have to do it…and anyway, this is a private booth so no guests are gonna come, and the waiters, well they are scared shitless of you and wouldn't dare to make an appearance unless they are called for…"

She folded her hands and waited for him….And then…

Arnav singh raizada, the merciless stoic ruthless businessman who could cause top level executives to stammer and stutter, who held the persona to scare the scariest of ghosts, that Arnav Singh Raizada held his ears and performed five sit-ups just for the one girl who was so important to him…his best friend Khushi Kumari Gupta!!

SO GUYS HOW'D YOU LIKE IT...GOOD.??. BAD?? PATHETIC??
WELL WHATEVER YOUR REACTION PLEASE LET ME NOW IF YOU THINK THIS IS WORTH CONTINUING...LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR COMMENTS...!!
LOE,
PRINCESS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum
arnav-khushi best friends
wow
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the character sketch, esp virat being an important part, khushi-arnav best friends which is a rare concept great start would love to read the next chapter, cont soon
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Nice start...Arshi as best friends...let see what else is in store for us...Happy Writing 😊
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amazing start khushi and arnav best friends
please pm me
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not pathetic at all how can you say that dear
so they are best friends huh
and she made him do sit ups while holding his ear😲
i likey that very much👏
wait how did these two become friends then
virat kholi huh he is also in it but how does he figure out in all this
do disclose it soon please
is it okay if i picturise rahul as shaleen he suits her well man being her hubby and all
cheers for pm
looking forward to this

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Awww, Their Friendship
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CHAPTER 2
HERE IS THE 2ND CHAPTER GUYS...THANK YOU SO MUCH TO ALL THE PPL WHO LIKED AND COMMENTED...THIS CHAPTER IS LONG BUT SORRY I HAVE'NT PROOF READ IT...SO FORGIVE MY MISTAKES...THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO CHAVVI...THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS COMMENTING...YOUR WORDS REALLY MAKE MY DAY...!!...AND NOW WITHOUT FURTHER ADO...
Arnav singh raizada, the merciless stoic ruthless businessman who could cause top level executives to stammer and stutter, who held the persona to scare the scariest of ghosts, that Arnav Singh Raizada held his ears and performed five sit-ups just for the one girl who was so important to him…his best friend Khushi Kumari Gupta!!

Khushi grinned at him as he sat down again. "Happy Now??"

Khushi giggled…"You looked so cute when you did those sit-up's…just like a toddler!!"

Arnav rolled his eyes "So am I forgiven now Khushi??"

Khushi shook her head and Arnav glared at her in disbelief…"Now this is just too much…I did those sit-up's na…so you should forgive me now…"

"Well there is just one more thing left…"

"What??"

"You've to watch a movie with me tonight…"

"That's OK…I've got the new MIB CD you know…"

Khushi smirked…"I meant a Salman Khan movie Arnav…."

"What the….no way khushi…you know I don't like his stupid movies at all…"

Khushi pouted and made a silly puppy dog face…"Please Arnav…please..pretty pretty please…"

Arnav smiled at her…Khushi could make him agree for anything…one please from her and he would relent…"Fine…but I pick the movie.."

Khushi clapped her hands like a kid being given a chocolate…"Yay!!!Thank you Arnav…thank you so much!!"

Arnav couldn't help but laugh at her crazy antics…."Shall we order now…or do you have more crazy punishments up your sleeve??"

Khushi nodded and they called the waiter and ordered…while they were waiting Khushi removed a large present from under the table….

"Happy friendship anniversary Arnav…"

Arnav amusedly took the gift and opened it…he beamed at her when he saw that it was a collage of the photos they had taken together over the past three years…

"Khushi…it's beautiful…"

"You like it??"

Arnav was about to reply when his eyes settled on one particular photograph…it was of Khushi wearing a brown gents coat….his eyes moistened when he saw it…

"You still have the coat Khushi… "

Khushi had been scared when she'd seen his eyes moisten thinking that he'd probably not liked something…she now heaved a sigh of relief…

"Ofcourse I do Arnav…how could I even dream of loosing it…"

The coat was a memoir of the first day they'd met…exactly 3 years ago…

FLASHBACK
Arnav had just entered the campus of IIM Delhi…he'd been invited to give an address to the freshers…he wasn't exactly looking forward to it…public speaking and that to to 22 year old's wasn't exactly his forte…but when the management had contacted him he hadn't been able to refuse….and so here he was, walking into the vast campus trying to get his bearings….he had arrived earlier than required because he'd wanted to check out the famous campus…he strolled near the garden when his phone rang and he saw his secretary calling….he was busy talking on the phone when someone bumped harshly into him and the phone fell out of his hands and crashed on the pavement…

"What the…"he said as he turned around trying to see who'd dared to do this…he saw a young girl in a white shirt and blue jeans bent over in front of him clutching a stitch on her side as she tried to catch her breath…

"Can't you see where you are going…"he roared at the girl.

She looked up…finally finding her breath she stood straight and said…"I'm really sorry…I was running late for my inauguration ceremony and I was running…I was trying to see the time in my watch and I wasn't looking where I was going and so I bumped into you…I'm really sorry…"saying this she started to walk away when she felt a hand hold her….the next second she was yanked back and she stood facing a furious looking ASR…

"You think you can just say that and walk away…It's just the problem with girls like you…..no sense of responsibility…"

"Excuse me sir…I said I'm sorry…I just.."

But Arnav cut her off….

"I'm not interested in your bloody sorry's…your sorry is not gonna bring my phone back you irresponsible dimwit….how can you be so careless…" Arnav began shouting at her in full ASR mode…but surprisingly the girl interrupted him..

"I told you I'm sorry…you don't need to blow off your fake anger at me…'

"Fake anger, really….do you even know who I am…??"

"Ya as a matter of fact I do….you are Arnav Singh Raizada…the owner of AR Designs…currently ranked as India's 3rd best design firm…you have made your empire from a simple warehouse to a huge brand in a span of just 2 years… "

Arnav looked at the girl surprised…he hadn't expected her to know him…after all he and his company weren't that well known to the public yet…

"I've read a lot about you and your business ideals….but neither your name nor your reputation gives you any right to shout at me…I'm not scared of you"

Arnav raised his eyebrows…"Really…??"

"Ya…I can see very well that this anger is just a pretence…a pretence to hide your insecurity…"

Arnav let out a chuckle…"Girl….I've got a fully fleged business…I earn millions daily….and you think I'm insecure…"

She looked at him…"I wasn't talking about monetary security Mr.Raizada…I was talking about something in life that is much more important….something that gives power even to the poorest of people to fight the kings…"

"And what is this important thing??"

"Love Mr.Raizada…love and relationships…friends and family…they are the most important assets in a person's life…and you are insecure because you are never sure if you have these…you are scared of losing the one's you love…your relationships…well they never last….you have practically no friends…look around you Mr.Raizada…what happiness are your millions getting you…??"

Arnav took a step back, flabbergasted….never had anyone dared to say all this to him..

"You…you don't know…"

"Maybe Mr.Raizada…maybe I don't know about your life…all I can say is that I feel that you just put up a show of this anger to hide your vulnerability….you are scared of emotions…and that's why you're afraid to let go and feel and think with your heart…this anger is a mask Mr.Raizada…a mask to cover your true side…a mask which doesn't let anyone see the coward inside you…the coward who is afraid of his own emotions…and in your anger Mr.Raizada…you forget the small things in life that are so important…"

She bent forward and picked his phone….she assembled the piece together and switched it on….she handed the phone to him…

"Just because something has broken down doesn't mean it can't be repaired Mr.Raizada…but remember somethings…some relations…can be so badly broken by your harsh words and untoward anger that they can never be repaired!!"

With those words she walked away leaving a stunned and subdued Arnav behind…he was still trying to figure out her words when his phone rang….he talked to the HOD of the university letting him know that he had arrived…his thoughts were still on what the girl had said….

It was very late at night when the function and the dinner with the management finished…as he walked he kept thinking of the words the girl had said…her harsh truths kept ringing in his ears…

"you are scared of losing the one's you love…your relationships…well they never last….you have practically no friends…look around you Mr.Raizada…what happiness are your millions getting you…??"

he was just walking when he heard a scream…he looked around the now deserted courtyard…no one was around…maybe he was hearing things…he turned to go when he heard it again…this time he noticed the faint light coming from the narrow alleyway….he walked towards it….and then he saw it….4 guys were standing around someone who was pushed up against the wall…he couldn't see anything clearly but he could make out that the screams were a girl's…..he neared them…just then the guys saw him…one guy who looked like their leader came forward and stopped when he saw Arnav…

"Hello Mr.Raizada…it was a nice speech out there…do you wanna join us…??"

"What the hell are you guys doing??"

The guy sniggered and moved back so that Arnav could now see the girl backed out against the wall…it was the girl he'd met this morning….her jacket was thrown down on the floor and the sleeves of her top were torn…her hair were disheaveled and she was crying bitterely….

"You know Mr.Raizada…I've heard a lot about your ways…Why don't you teach us something…we're good students you know….why don't you teach us how to enjoy a virgin pu##y.."

"Sure…I could definitely teach you a few lessons…" saying so he began to move towards the girl…he removed his coat and held it in his hand…the girl looked terrified of him…"Ddd…don…don't come neee…near me…." Arnav just smirked and kept on walking…the girl closed her eyes in fear…he reached her and put his coat on her…the girls eyes flew open….he just looked at her…"Now watch a coward can do honey…" with that he turned and faced the guys who were advancing towards him and fought them…((sorry…I'm not that good at violent scenes but you are free to assume them ))…in a matter of minutes they were down on the ground…ASR bent over them…"Just learn one lesson….never force yourself on a girl….learn to respect women…!!"

He turned to look at the girl who was now silently staring at him….

"Shall I drop you home??"

The girl seemed to consider it and then nodded. He began walking to his car without saying a word….she followed him….they both got into the car and they drove silently…the only conversation being when she gave him the directions….finally the car screeched outside a huge bunglow….it was about half the size of RM…he looked at the girl and was about to speak when she beat him to it….

"I really don't know how to thank you Mr.Raizada…you saved my life and my honour even after I insulted you this afternoon…I really was wrong about you….I hope you can forgive me…" He nodded at her…"It's fine…do you…um…do you want me to come explain this state to your parents…??"

The girl gulped…she didn't say anything for a moment and then said…"My parents are out on a business trip…"Arnav nodded again and waited for her to leave….she opened the door and then back towards him…"I'm Khushi Kumari Gupta…"she said thrusting her hand forward….arnav shook her hand.."Arnav…" he began but she broke in…"Singh Raizada I know…"Arnav smiled at her…as she was about to leave he gave her his card…"Call me if you need anything…afterall your parents are not in town…"she nodded and thanked him.

"Bye Ms.Gupta…" she stared at him and then smiled…"Bye Mr.Raizada" and she skipped into the house wearing his coat.

SO HERE IT IS GUYS...THIS IS HOW THEY FIRST MET...SEE I GAVE YOU A LOOONG UPDATE...SO I WANT SOME LOOONG COMMENTS!!!

DO LET ME KNOW HOW YOU GUYS LIKE IT...LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS...

LOVE,

PRINCESS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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so thats how they met
wow the things she said to him sure showed him a mirror didnt they
what an explosive meeting of our arhi
nice name not that am saying the previous one was bad in fact it was just as good but this feels much better
wonder what else happened in their past
bet neat them up good that violent scene i dont find at all hard to imagine
cheers for pm
woder when sehwag will come into this

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