Ariya SS: Tujhko Jo Paaya.. (10A & B) 08/01 - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
kiss hote hote reh gaya...

those 3 magical words ki ab kya zaroorat?? they love each other and themselves know it...

loved the update...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Avantika :



commenting on the FF when you are about to end it..par kya kare yaar, itni saari FFs hai forum par, ek saath itna saara handle nahi hota hai mujhse. Okay starting from the very first updates, riya and shree shouldn't have gone off on their own without informing at least rathore, even when it meant proving herself to arjun raute..that was a plain insensible thing to do IMO. No wonder, the team got mad when their actions and possible consequences dawned upon them. Coz what followed next was just unthinkable..shree had been rendered senseless with a blow on his head and had not the team reached the location in time, riya would have certainly been raped.


I can well visualize arjun's wild rage and fury to see riya in such a pathetic condition.. her screams to drive off people around her even when she's not in her senses was totally heart-rendering. After finding riya, you shifted the focus entirely in arjun and riya or else I would have loved to see shree receiving an earful from his team for helping riya in her reckless plan. But then these lines,

Arjun strained his ears to listen to her, and the last words that left her lips, threw him off balance.

As he saw her slowly drifting away into unconsciousness, her voice reverberated in his ears; 'Arjunnn Sirr.. Aap aa gaye..'

He stared at her immobile form and quickly wiped a lonely tear that was threatening to fall off his eye. She trusted him.. Even in her sub-conscious state, she was hoping that he would come..

Yaar these are so powerful..enough to shake anyone to the core and throw him/her off balance.


It's tragic that arjun had to take riya to HIS home in such a situation, the "home sweet home" that had once belonged to him and roshni and held so many memories for him, both sweet and bitter, so much so that in his own words "roshni ki jaane ke baad yeh deewarien mujhe kaatne ko daudti thi" later on. Arjun's reactions to riya was well understandable coz even though he's a khadoos, sadu, akdu guy ,but in reality he loved and cared for riya and that kept surfacing every now and then in his actions and gestures (even offering roshni's dress to her ) but the very next moment, his anger over her recklessness and the strict officer in him took over and he again got back to his stubborn self. As for riya, she was too much shaken up and bewildered particularly coz she couldn't remember clearly what actually transpired after she was drugged and her ripped clothes and scratch marks all over her body made her feel more miserable. Riya's emotional outburst on arjun's supposed indifference was well done and was actually needed for once, to get the truth of his feelings out from the man himself. When arjun threw her on the bed and locked the room, I was like WT*? but the next update cleared all doubts ..arjun had indeed confessed his love to riya, in front of roshni's pic, and even placed her on an equal pedestal with roshni. Honestly a confession like this is worth a 1000 clichd ILUs. These lines were truly outstanding:


She winced in pain when his fingers pressed roughly against her wrist; she looked up stunned, attempting to read his face when he spoke up, "Dekh rahi ho isse, Roshni? Iske liye, tum mujhe chodkar gayi na? Isske sahare?"

He jerked off his hold on Riya's wrist; she wasn't prepared for it and fell on the chair behind her.

She looked up startled when he mentioned her.. Tears welled up in her eyes when his words slowly started making sense..

Arjun gritted his teeth, " Isse apni jaan ki parvah nahi hai, toh yeh meri fikr kya karegi?"

Riya parted her lips to speak; but to her surprise, no words left her mouth. She looked on helplessly, as her vocal cords seemed to be paralysed.

She saw Arjun fall on his knees, in front of Roshni, "Suna na tumne, kaise yeh bhi marne ki baat kar rahi hai.. Mujhe chodkar jaane ki baat kar rahi hai..

Iss ladki ko andaaza bhi nahi hai, ki agar isse ek kharonch bhi aayi, toh main sab kuch jalakar raakh kar doonga!"

He tugged at his hair, "Aur yeh hai ki marne ki baatein kar rahi hai.."

Riya's discomfort with arjun around her in the room was fun, and one thing I would like to add here, I can actually visualize the great ACP arjun painting walls of a house..i mean, it's such an avi worthy scene, hope we do get to see something like this in the show too..maybe during an undercover mission. And the arjun-rathore midnight convo was so heart-warming ..goes on to show rathore's importance as a friend and well-wisher in arjun's life. And even if you hadn't explained in details in your Ariya conversation in the later updates, we would have well understood the reasons behind the rift.


The morning scene was another heart-warming moment when arjun disclosed to riya that he had been to his own house after three years since roshni's death..and her comforting him. and then riya's gardening plans ..she's already accepted the house as her own and started planning her future life in it, with him.

Okay, enough for now. Bahut type kar liya. Will comment on chapter 8 & 9 later on.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part updated...
i loved the pics of house
can u give sm pics of our beloved ariya
i m satisfied vid his simple confession
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper update...!!!👏⭐️
lvd it...!!😊
cant wait fr d nxt part...!!!!😳
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantasti update
Luved the entire convo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
Fab update :)
Awww the proposal was so emotional :'(
I really didn't expect something like this ... It was just wonderful :D
Love the end ... It was so cute ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

Just one word Avantika "Perfect"

This was even better than what I could have ever imagined. What a guy, everyone should have a man like your Arjun in their lives.

How can anyone love someone so much? When he loves he loves with his whole being and his whole heart. He is willing to distance her from him for her own good, that is true love.

Riya is his perfect match of course, she understands him completely and she knows just how to get through to him.

As usual I loved the update, and I am really going to miss this when it ends.

Thanks for the PM.



Hey.. Thanks..
I wish we all had our Arjuns.. But I guess, we'll have to be as loving and caring as Riya to deserve him.. She too loves him with all she has.. 😃
Lekin kya karein, iss janam mein toh already phass chuki hoon, na! 😛

I know.. And I adore them both for it..

Thanks.. I'm going to miss it too..
Next update coming up soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome dear..

the pics were simple amazing and out of the world...
jannat hi hai! so romantic!
ab toh mujhe ek aur janam ka wait karna padega...
reason yahaan nahi bathaa sakthi...phir kabhi private mein kahungi...well thats the effect this romantic trance had on me...i am still in ARIYA land...uthar hi nahi rahi...
tum ithna accha romance likhthi ho ke main din barr usi mein khoyi rehthi hoom...

post soon!



😆 Samajh gayi boss.. Same here.. 😉

Aww thanks.. Waise aap bhi kuch kam nahi hain haan.. Abhi abhi padhkar aa rahi hoon.. 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

OMG!!! Ktna mast tha... i cant express it in words...!!!

Yaar Avantika Didi!! u always keep raising my hopes higher... On LOVE especially..!!!
From where do u get all these ideas???

Thank u so much for such a beautiful part..!!!



Thank you soo much dear..
I'm raising your hopes on love? Well it's a good thing isn't it?!
Where do I get ideas from??

No. 1 source of inspiration are those tiny winy Ariya scenes that we got to see before Riya was killed off!
No. 2: In our hero's own words, 'Pyar ek alag hi jazbe ka naam hai.. Jiss din hoga, samajh jaogi..' 😉😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Keerthi-

gud one.. loved it.. u gonna end dis one too..? plz start new ariya ff's soon..



Hey.. thanks.. I already have two FF's running on Ariya.. DO give them a read, if you haven't yet.. 😃

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