Ariya SS: Tujhko Jo Paaya.. (10A & B) 08/01

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: ehmmbh_luvr

yeah yeah dint miss that part had read it...so correction rathore n arjun ki mlli bhagat thi😃
P.S forgot to tell u putting in pictures in the update was a fabulous idea😃...n do u plan to update the last part aaj kya by any chance😳?

Hmm.. Thanks.. Yupp.. Check Pg. 57 😉

Quote

DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Amazing awesome beautiful romatic cute update... loved every bit of it... pics added more effect to the chapter... loved they way they confessed their feelings... Amazing... update soon... waiting for song sequence...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

sunshine94

@sunshine94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

abe ...to be continued ...ab yeh kaunsa naya angel hai...

jyada bhaav mat kha,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.update full karo na yaar

tum hume installments mein marne ki koshish kar rahe ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by sunshine94 - 12 years ago

Quote

shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

loved update
precap is intersting
continue soon

Quote

srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

superb update
it was amazing
loved ariya
yh loved these pictures...
intersting precap
update soon

Quote

Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: sunshine94
abe ...to be continued ...ab yeh kaunsa naya angel hai...

jyada bhaav mat kha,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.update full karo na yaar

tum hume installments mein marne ki koshish kar rahe ho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arre meri amma, likhne toh de.. Abhi likhna shuru kar rahi hoon.. Tab tak itna toh padh lo.. aur aish karo.. Waise, did you like it? 😉😃

Quote

sunshine94

@sunshine94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl

Arre meri amma, likhne toh de.. Abhi likhna shuru kar rahi hoon.. Tab tak itna toh padh lo.. aur aish karo.. Waise, did you like it? 😉😃

ofcourse yaar it was tooo goood,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.i luvd it,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.the song background gave a nice feel 👏

Quote

vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

where is the next part?

oh god. mujhe sab devil kehthe hai...ab tum usse bhi badaa devil hui ho??

Amazing part tha..loved it!! but i will comment only when u post the next part! emotional atyachar hum bhi karenge yaar!

Quote

Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Avantika Di

Wat have u done ...

itna big waala crime kar diya 😒

how will I sleep raat mein .??😒

i m sooo happy after reading dis part

firstly while reading ur Note: as soon as u mentioned abt d song i was abt to scroll down den i read ur warning:"Dun u dare scroll down" waali ...n i followed it ..

I m still smiling widely 😃

a big waala 🤗 for u ...

Loved d romantic scene n d ambience of d place was just perfect ...

Liked d confession style very much

The whole chapter was Magical

u made me fall in love wid ur v/s of arjun n ria

Loved d writing ...

ab main kaise so paungi ...😆

Waiting for d next chapter

Quote

Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
where is the next part?

oh god. mujhe sab devil kehthe hai...ab tum usse bhi badaa devil hui ho??

Amazing part tha..loved it!! but i will comment only when u post the next part! emotional atyachar hum bhi karenge yaar!

Oho.. Emotional atyachaar?!! 😭 Main aur devil??!! 😭

Haven't finished the last part yet.. Still drafting it..
I'm not evil like you.. 😉😛