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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update.
waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
dea plz update soon cant w8...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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osm ff lov ih👍🏼👏 update soon
guyz ur doin a fab job kp ih up👍🏼
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awesome update👏...omg i am so so so happy rey loves only and only his cutely weird taani...waiting for the next part...please update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMMMGG!!!
the storyline is awesome 👏
doing a great job...keet it up!!

can't wait for the next part...love TaaRey ❤️
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Amazing update . . Wow rey and his cute weird taani!<3 pls update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome...

Rey loves only and only his cutely wierd taani...

Now eagerly waiting for next part...

Plz update asap
Edited by pari1521 - 12 years ago
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Chapter 23😊

Rey:hey just listen bt,,,hey krishana ji aapki taani mujhe ignore kyu kar rahi hai pata karna padega n waise bhi kal subaha sari baate clear hojayengi na so rey now just relax n have a taani dreaming men''love u taani'''.{then rey sleeps & at taani's house swayam is talkingwith Sharon on phone & taani comes to him'she does nt know swayam he is talking to Sharon & says}

Taani:bhai{swayam turns & smiling says}

Swayam:haa bolo taani

Taani:bhai wo main picnic par nahi aaungi'.

Swayam:kya?par kyun?

Taani:bhai main waha aake kya karungi? Aap sab frnds jayiye'waise bhi borr ho jaungi'

Swayam:nahi taani'.tum hamare team ka ek part ho'tumhe aana hi padega'& trust me tum borr nahi hogi'u will enjoy a lot'.

Taani:par bhai'.

Swayam:taani'jao bag pack karo warna main aake pack karta hu

Taani:nahi bhai'main karti hu'.{& goes to pack then swayam says to Sharon in phone'}

Swayam:k then'.kal subah 7;30 ko milte hain k'.bye'.love u'

Sharon:yaa'bye..{& she hungs up the phone'.n thinks & says to her ownself}

Sharon:lagta hain kria ki wajah se taani bahut uncomfortable feel kar rahi aur usi ki wajah se wo picnic par bhi nahi ana chahti hain shayad'.par main use lonely feel nahi kar ne dungi'. Mein picnic mein uske saath hi rahungi'.waise bhi kal reyusko apni feeling bata dega to wo normal ho I jayegi'.{n sleeps'.taani & swayam alsosleeps}{next morning rey gets up at 5:00 &so excited packs his bag gets ready to meet taani n says }

Rey:taani I m coming'..aaj se hamare bich koi mis understandings nahi rahegi'.. aaj mein bata dunga ki "I LOVE ONLY U" no one else'..phir main swayam ko bhi mana lunga'.. mujhe yakeen hain ki swayam samajh jayega'..{n goes to college'.in fire exit catching a red rose he waits for taani'.bt taani doesn't come & he tries her phone bt it comes switch off'.he there only waits for taani'its 7:30 & Sharon comes at swayam's house'..}

Sharon:hi swayam,,,hi taani'.

Swayam:hi Sharon{goes n hugs her'}

Taani:hi bhabhi'..

Swayam:kam sit'.{they bth sit thn taani says'}

Taani:main aap dono ke liye coffee banati hu'.{& she moves to kitchen'.}{swayam n sharon talks & suddenly swayam catches Sharon & moves closer to her n sharon says'}

Sharon:swayam wat r u dng ..lv me

Swayam:chodne ke liye thodi pakda hain'we r already angaged

Sharon:swayam chado taani aa jayegi'

Swayam:anedo'{& moves more closer to her bt suddenly taani enters n gets shocked & turns n says}

Taani:sorry sorry'.main galat time par aa gayi'

Swayam:{leaves Sharon & says}nahi nahi'taani its k come'{thn taani comes to them & gives thm coffee they all sit thn taani sys}

Taani:sorry bhabhi'mujhe pata nahi tha warna main nahi aati'.{Sharon blushes'gives a look to swayam thn keeps hand on taani's shoulder n say}

Sharon:its k taani'.waise nthg so imp'.{thn they finishes there coffee & taani goes to keep the cups into kitchen'its 8:00 & someone comes & rings the door bell 'swayam goes n opens the door & sees its rey'he smiles hugs him saying..}

Swayam:hi dude'.r u fine now..??

Rey:haa'abh yahi khada rakhega kya? Andar nahi bulayega'.

Swayam:nahi'

Rey:kya?

Swayam:I mean andar aake karega kya any how bus aane hi waali hain to main aur Sharon bhi pura saman nikalke bahar hi aane wale hain'so u wait here we will just come..

Rey:swayam ruk'wow o wo itni jaldi kya hain'.( n tries to come in bt could nt..)

Swayam:its 8:00 dude'its late'.

Rey:par woe k kaam kart um log saman nikalo main andar bheth ta hu'

Swayam:par bhet kar karega kya?

Rey:wo'wo..{thinks n thn says} wo'main coffee piunga'.

Swayam:coffee abhi abhi hamne pi'.{Sharon comes der n sees rey n says}

Sharon:rey !!!!! hi'.kaisa hain aaj ka din'{n hugs him}

Rey:koi khas nahi'.

Sharon:kyun kaam nahi hua..???

Rey:nahi'

Swayam:wat r guys talking abt ?

Sharon:nthg'.swayam chalo ham dono luggage nikal lete hain'rey tum andar aake bhetho ' main taani ko bol deti hu ki wo tumhareliye coffee banade..{mean time taani reaches hall & asks}

Taani:kiske liye coffee banani hain bhabhi?{hearing taani's voice rey comes inside & stands]

Sharon:rey ke liye'.{taani thinks in mind'}

Taani:rey'.rey itna jaldi aa gaye'abh ye subah ke bare mein puchenge ' to main kya karungi'{n a tensed expression flashes on taani's face }

Swayam:kya hua taani? Bana dogi na coffee'.?

Taani:wo'wo' haa bhai main bana dungi'{thn swaron moves frm there n taani says}

Taani:rey aap bhethiye main coffee banake aati hu'.{she moves to kitchen'rey sits in the hall aftr swaron goes out of house he quickly goes to kitchen'in kitchen taani is making coffee & thinking some thing'rey reaches there & says,'}

Rey:hi taani{she suddenly sees der n is shocked to see rey'}

Taani:rey aap yaha'jayiye yaha se bhai aa jayenge'

Rey:dnt worry my taani'bhai bhabhi ke saath busy hain'.

Taani:oh'kkk[n ignore rey n continues her work}

Rey:{takes the support of wall & stand} waise tum subah aayi kyun nahi?

Taani:subah '.{with tensed expression says} wo'subah kaha ana tha'

Rey:fire exit'remember kal maine tumse bola tha'.

Taani:wo'wo..main bhul gayi

Rey:don't lie taani'.

Taani:maine kaha jhut bola'main sach main bhul gayi thi'{n gives the coffee cup to rey'.rey

takes a sip'taani tries to go out bt he blocks his way n says}

Rey:aisa ho hi nahi sakta taani coz tum meri koi baat nahi bhulti'

Taani:ahhh'nahi sach main bhul gayi thi'{he keeps the cup a side goes & tightly catches taani n says}

Rey:dnt lie taani'mujhe pata hain ki tum jhut bol rahi ho'tum meri ya mere se related koi baat bhul hi nahi sakti'.

Taani:nahi rey'main sach keh rahi hu

Rey:acha'.ye coffee'.ye coffee uss din main ne banayi thi'.tumne to ye kaise banate hain dekha bhi nahi tha'tum to mujhme khoi hui thi'.par aaj tumne waisi hi coffee bana ke di hain'its perfect'kuch galti nahi hui'thn how can u forget this'.{taani gets off frm his catch & turns to othr side'.}

Rey:{makes her to turn & say'.}taani..k fine,'tum bhul gayi its k..main tumse bas ye kehna chahta tha ki tht i'.i.. i' lo'{till then swayam comes frm bck & seeing swayam taani goes away frm rey & swayam comes & keeps hand on rey's shoulder.}

Swayam:rey'ho gayi coffee'.

Rey:{shocked}haa..nahi'nahi pi raha hu'.

Taani:bhai mera luggage bahar leke jati hu'

Swayam:haa'waise bhi Sharon wahi hain'.{taani goes off'}

Rey:swayam tu ek badi problem hain'

Swayam:kya?

Rey:mera matlab chal , warna agar late ho gaye to problem ho jayegi..

Swayam:haa bt teri coffee..{thn rey takes coffee mug & drinks coffee in one sip'.}

Rey:abh chal'{thn they bth comedown & see that all have come}

Kria:hi rey'

Rey:hi'.{ thn taani says}

Taani:bhai mein sare windows & doors check karke aati hu'.tab tak bus bhi aa gayegi'

Swayam:yaa..{taani goes aftr some time bus comes'.}

Bharath:are bus aa gayi'.

All:ye'..abh we will enjoy

Swayam:mein taani ko bulake aata hu{till thn taani comes'}

Swayam:aa gayi tum'chalo bus aa gayi'{thn all gets into bus '.kria,taarey & swaron r left'. thn kria gets in & sits alone thn swaron gets in & sit in the beside row of kria's..thn taani gets in & sits in frnt seat of swaron'thn rey gets in & see bth kria & taani alone'he thinks were to sit thn swayam tells}

Swayam:aaja rey kria ke paas bhet'

Rey:haa{taani gives a look to rey & faces othr side'Thn rey goes & sits beside kria' all couples r busy'rey busy looking at taani bt taani does nt look at rey'aftr sometime the bus suddenly stops'.}{all gets irritated & say}

Bharath:are yaar bus kyun roki'..

Amar:haa yaar' abh kya hua'

Swayam:ek minute guys I'll check out (& knocks at the window ' the drivers opens}

Swayam:kya hua.? Bus kyun roki'

Driver:wo kisiko lift chahiye'

Swayam:k'guys kisiko lift chahiye'let me check out{thn rey tells}

Rey:main bhi chalta hoon'{& they bth gets down & sees a dashing,handsome guy in a white suit facing other side is standing with a big car'}

Swayam:excuse me'.{that guy turns & seeing reyam takes out his googles'..}

Swayam:ham isi bus mein jaa rahe hain'I thnk u hv stopped our bus for lift'right'

Guy:yaa'right'actually meri car kharab ho gayi ' aur kal meri goa mein ek bahut urgent meeting hain,'so I hv to go'so agar tum log mujhe thodi dur tak lift de dete to it would be grt'

Rey:grt'really'actually we r also going to goa for a picnic'so as we hv so much place in the bus u can join us'.ya swayam

Swayam:yaa.. right' if u wnt u can join us'

Rey:waise bhi ham kal pahuch jayenge'we dnt have any way plans'.so join us'

Guy:thank bro'thank u so much'{& shakes hand with swayam & rey & thn takes his bag frm his car .. thn swayam gets in & thn guy & thn rey'. The guy & rey r nt seen to anyone'.thn seeing swayam Vicky says}

Vicky:kya hua swayam..??{hearing swayam's name all sees him & taani also sees him & thn faces othr side & get lost in her memories'}

Swayam:guys use lift chahiye & wobhi goa ko' so as we r going to give him lift'

Amar:k chalo to bhet jao'{swayam goes n sits thn that guy comes in}

Guy:hi guys'.{all girls leaving taani,kria,Sharon gets flat on his style,his way & all'thn he moves to sit bck'he passes frm taani's seat goes till some distance & comes return'seeing him returning all gets shocked including reyam}& sees taani & thinks & says}

Guy: "Taani shikhawat" right'


guys next part is continued...😉

Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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Chapter:24😉

Guy:hi guys'.{all girls leaving taani,kria,Sharon gets flat on his style,his way & all'thn he moves to sit bck'he passes frm taani's seat goes till some distance & comes return'seeing him returning all gets shocked including reyam}& sees taani & thinks & says}

Guy: "Taani shikhawat" right'{hearing this taani turns & sees that guy'& says}

Taani:haa{thn the guy smiles & seeing his smile taani thnks who is this & suddenly stands up & says'}

Taani:Rohan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy:thank god tumne mujhe pehchana to sahi..taani shikhaaawat'.{taani shocked & tightly hugs him up'seeing her hugs all stand up & swayam comes out.rey shocked.. & thn taani tells}

Taani:tum yaha..tum yaha kaise? Maine tumhe bahut miss kiya'kitne dino ke baad 'London se wapas kabh aaye'bataya nahi kuch nahi'mujhe phone bhi nahi kiya' mein tumhe kitna miss kar rahi thi'{thn guy keeps hands on taani's shoulder & says..}

Guy:taani'.taani'.shhh'.main aa gaya hu na'bas abh ham aaram se bhet kar baat karenge,'..kkk'.taani shikhaaawat'

Taani:sure rohan raichaaand''{& again they hug eachother tightly'}{rey comesto swayam & slowly wishpers'}

Rey:kya hua'aaj possessive bhai chup kyun hain'.

Swayam:ha'haa..taani {comes in between bth of thm & ask} ye kaun hain?

Taani:bhai ye rohan hain'rohan'aapko yaad nahi'mera best frnd{& catches his hand..}

Swayam: rohan..best frnd'kab bana kaise bana..kyun bana bata to sahi..

Taani:bhai mere 5 standard mein ek new ladka aaya tha jisse main first din hi lad liya tha.. phir ham bahut ache dost bangaye'bhai wahi jo hamare jothpur mein neighbor hain'bhai wo jise mein har exam mein batati thi'.

Rohan:ye sab batana zaruri hain taani shikhaaawat'izzat ka faluda kyun kar rahi hain yaar?

Taani:rohan raichaaand'chup'

Swayam:kaun yaar'

Taani:bhai wahi jo aapke Mumbai aane se pehle London chala gaya tha' aur tabhi bhi maine use bahut lad liya' wahi bhai flirt number one'

Swayam:haa yaad aaya.. jiski tune pitai ki thi'phir tum dono ne bahut din tak baat nahi ki aur baat kare bina reh nahi sake'wahi na?

Taani:chalo bhai ko yaad aa gaya..

Rohan:hi swayam'

Swayam:hi'.{thn frm this side he again comes to taani & say}

Rohan:mujhe sabse introduce nahi karaogi'.

Taani:haa..{& she introduces rohan to everyone & at last says'} rey ye rohan hain aur rohan ye rey hain'.

Rohan{gives hand to shake &says..} hi'rohan'rohan raichand'

Rey:{also shakes hand & says } Rey'Reyansh singhania'.

Swayam:to chalo sab log bhet jao'{all sits 'rey tries to go & sit beside taani bt rohan sits beside her'seeing this rey gets hurted n angry & sits beside kria'continuously looks at taani & rohan..kria tries to talk to him bt he just ignores & sees them only..}

Rohan:taani shikhaaawat'I missed u a lot yaar'{& keeps his hand aroundher'}

Taani:haa rohan maine bhi tumhe bahut miss kiya'waise tum yaha kaise..??

Rohan:wo main 1 week pehele hi india wapas aa gaya..aur 1 week se jothpur mein hi hoon'.

Kal goa main meri meeting hain,'to usi ke liye ja raha tha ki way mein meri car kharab ho gayi & see so I m here'

Taani:tumhe yaha dekh kar bahut khushi hui'sari hamari yaadein tazzaa ho gayi'right'

Rohan:haa'waise acha hi hua meri car kharab ho gayi

Taani:wo kyun ???

Rohan:warna mein tujhse kaise milta'

Taani:tub hi naa rohan'waise jothpur main sab kaise hain?maa,papa,ritu,pinky & hamari puri gang

Rohan:sab maze mein hain bas teri hi kami hain'sab tujhe bahut miss karte hain'.{& goes on talking'& rey goes on look them'rimmi,simmi,neha & vishaka leave their respective couple & go to the last row & sit' & tells}

Neha:neha thinking rohan so good looking..

Vishaka:ya 'look at him man'he so dashing,handsome & cool'

Simmi:write'he so cool dude' he is shooo sweet'.

Rimmi:haa yaar taani is so lucky na?{girls continue talking..here rohan & taani r going on talking'rey gets irritated & thinks that I hv to divert them & separate them'&suddenly gets up & say}

Then suddenly bus again stops'.}

Bharath:are yaar ye bus phir kyun ruk gayi'.

Vicky:haa yaar kitna mazza aa raha tha,''

Rey:guys mein dekhta hu{& he goes & knocks the window}

Rey:kya hua bus kyun roki.????

Driver:wo bus ka tyre puncher ho gaya hain'.waise bhi yedhabha hain'.aadhe ghante mein naya tyre lag jayega'.aap log tab tak iss dhabhe par khana kha lijiye'

Rey:hey guys ham iss jagah half an hour tak rukenge' as wo bus ka tyre puncher ho gaya hain'so tab tak ham log yaha lunch kar lete hain'

All:yaa guys'

Nilesh:par rey ye jagaha konsi hain

Rey:guys ye ek dhabha hain'

Taani & rohan:dhabha.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

next part continued guys...


Chapter:25😊

Rey:yaa guys ' dhabha'

Taani:rohan

Rohan:taani'

Taani:wah aaj to jothpur ki yaad aa gayi'tu , hamari baate aur dhabha'hey krishnaji thank u so much'.

Rohan:haa taani shikhaaawat dhabha'.chal chal'{they bth excitedly get down & all get down'all goes n sits swayam n kria sits frnt frnt'rey n sharon sits frnt frnt'taani n rohan sits frnt frnt..thn respective couples sit in frnt frnt'.a waiter comes to asks order. }

Waiter:madamji order'

Taani:haa praji likhiye ek Punjabi thali..rohan tub hi Punjabi thali hi khaega na'.???

Rohan:haa taani shikhaaawat..tu bhul gayi jo mujhse puch rahi hain'

Taani:k..praji 2 Punjabi thali'. Guys aap sab kya khayenge,'.

Simmi:dhabhe ka khana'.it will be so oily'

Rimmi:haa'.i cant eat such food'

Taani:nahi'oily hua to kya hua'bahut acha rehta hain dhabhe ka khana..

Rohan:yaa guys,,,it will be awesome'

Sharon:k tum ham sabh ke liye Punjabi thali hi mangado..

Taani :thik hain'to ham kitne jan hain..bhai aap bhi Punjabi thali hi khayenge na?

Swayam:haa'

Taani:aur rey aap'

Rey:taani jo bhitum manga rahi ho tumhare liye wo sab mere liye bhi mangado'

Taani:r u sure rey'

Rey:haa'..

Taani:praji 14 punjabi thali'aur 2 naan basket'aur guys aap mein se koi lassi piyega'.

All:no..no..

Taani:bhai aap?

Taani:nahi'

Rohan:taani

Taani:mujhe pata hain tumhare liye mangvani hain'

Rey:main bhi piyunga

Taani:rey aap piyenge'

Rey:haa kyun?nahi pi sakta'??

Taani:pisakte hain'praji last mein 3 glass lasi leke aana'

Waiter:k madamji{& he goes off'thn these all strt talking'}

Rohan:are taani tune hamari special item mangvai'

Taani:aaj yaha

Rohan:haa taani..ham dono aaj saath main hain'pata nahi phir aisa chance kab milega'aajto mein iss chance ka purafaida uthaunga,,'..just wait & watch'.

Chal abhmangana..

Taani:tu kabhi nahi sudhraga na?idiot'.

Rohan:kya bola tune phir se bol

Taani:idiot'

Rohan:haayee'touch kar diya tune mere dil ko taani shikhaaawat'

Taani:wo kyun..

Rohan:abh to mera bhi mankar raha hain tujhe bolne ka

Taani:kya bolne ka'

Rohan:idiot'.

Taani:wat'rohan raichaaand tune mujhe idiot kaha,,,,'..'

Rohan:haa tune bhi to mujhe kaha'abh tune sabke saamne mujhe ye keh diya to main kyun sharmau bhai'isiliye maine bhi boldiya'.idiot'idiot'idiot'{taani thinks for a while & suddenly recognizes something & reacts}

Taani:hey krisjhnaji'.ye maine kya keh diya,,main iss pagal ko idiot kyun kaha'

Swayam:kyun taani kya hua'

Taani:bhai wo idiot ka full form hainI for i

d for do

I for ishq

o for only

& t for tumse'..

In short idiot matlabh I do ishq only tumse'.

Swayam:wat????????????

Rohan:abh jaa na taani bolke aa

Taani:jaa rahi hu baba{ she goes n comes bck'}

Rohan:bol diya idiot'.

Taani:haa'.. tu mujhe idiot mat bol'

Rohan:kyun'main to bolunga idiot'{till then food comes'.}

Taani:aa gaya'guys start kijiye'.

Vishaka:see man its so oily'

Bharath:bhav kyun kha rahi hain,khana kha'.

Rohan:{takes a bite} wow'''..yummy'..out of this world..{taani right hand was on that table'.rohan keeps hand on taani's hand' reyam sees this'& rey gets angry & thinks'}😃😛😆


next part will be soon continued...do like it & comment...


Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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Amazing updates love both parts, I feel sorry for Rey his Taani ignoring him, lol Taani and Rohan friendship is awesome, Loveee jealous Rey 🤣 glad that,atleast Taani has someone to talk and have fun with rather than her being lonely and sad. Plz continue soon Im so excited to see what happen next

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